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Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

It's beautiful yr🤗

No words so ethereal and well depicted👏

Thank you SO MUCH! ⭐️

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Thanks for tagging me! This was beautiful ❤️❤️

Ioved how you synced raavi's feelings and her longing for Shiva with the song and dance

The end where Shiva comes for her was the best 💖💖

Thank you so much. ❤️

Absolutely amazing 👏

Excited to read more written by you :)

Originally posted by: Foxii

Absolutely amazing 👏

Excited to read more written by you :)

Thank you so much🤗

Thank you for the tag hun!❤️

This was a very beautiful piece, written wonderfully!

The idea of weaving ShiVi's situation into the act Raavi was portraying was brilliant, and so seamlessly done. I could envision it all in front of me ❤️

Really enjoyed reading it! Write moreeee!🤗

this is a very beautiful peace of writing.....it touched my heart....all her longing made me choke .......so overwhelmed with what she felt and she could convey not only to the audience but to her RAM.....

she still have "what ifs' in her head, if they had met in different circumstances, would that change anything......guess we will never know.......but both have feelings that's true here........

your writing is too good.....

now i will keep looking for your posts........i would love to read your shivika stories...if you could let us know.....

i too love good lyrics and music.......

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Thank you for the tag hun!❤️

This was a very beautiful piece, written wonderfully!

The idea of weaving ShiVi's situation into the act Raavi was portraying was brilliant, and so seamlessly done. I could envision it all in front of me ❤️

Really enjoyed reading it! Write moreeee!🤗

Thank you so so so much for such a lovely comment!

Working on an OS will update soon. 🤗

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

this is a very beautiful peace of writing.....it touched my heart....all her longing made me choke .......so overwhelmed with what she felt and she could convey not only to the audience but to her RAM.....

she still have "what ifs' in her head, if they had met in different circumstances, would that change anything......guess we will never know.......but both have feelings that's true here........

your writing is too good.....

now i will keep looking for your posts........i would love to read your shivika stories...if you could let us know.....

i too love good lyrics and music.......

You made me so happy with this comment. 🤗❤️

What would we do without good music man?

Thank you so much for the appreciation.

I have a Shivika Index so I'm linking it down below you can check it out if you want. 🤗

LINK:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishqbaaaz/4907894/unexpurgated-journals-of-the-damsel-new-ss-added

Wow you have another beautiful story here. Must admit you have a way with your words❤️👏

This was amazing...her feelings were written so beautifully ❤️

Do write more and do tag me in your updates 🤗

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Wow you have another beautiful story here. Must admit you have a way with your words❤️👏

This was amazing...her feelings were written so beautifully ❤️

Do write more and do tag me in your updates 🤗

Aww thank you so much ❤️