Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 6

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Accha i didn't know you can comment against every line in watt pad! 😲

But please feel free to quote which lines your enjoyed 😆!

ya........i mean each para you can add comment.........i would have commented on every line of yours......i will

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ha ha thank you for your emoji bhara comment! 😆

Charan mere paas hee hain -- door se hee sparsh kar lena! 😆

Perfection ko improve nahi kar sakte- haaye.. ye Shiva ka line hai kya? I love it!

This is the result of my mind being in the gutter for a while and writing this has sent me deeper into the gutter! You can imagine what will happen with the next one! 🤣

Thank you so much for reading! 🤗

@bold........yes shiva's line.....

door se

m so excited to read more

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Aww thank you!

I seem to be ruining a lot of activities for people 🤣In the previous one it was the Bungee jump and in this one bike riding! 😆

Wow, you can imagine this convo on screen between ShiVi? That is some validation! Thank you so much!

And I'm called Riya on the forum, or Liz or Lizzie!

Thanks again for reading! ❤️

It was me... But you're more than welcome to change my outlook on as many activities as you want....

Write more soon Riya! ❤️❤️

This was hilarious😂😂😂

Waiting for more........

It was HILARIOUS!! 😂😂😂😂

I loved it so fcukimg much! 🤣

Everyone single dialogue was so clever 😏✨

I LOVED this carefree and naughty version of Shiva!! 😆

And dobi Raavi 😛

Definitely one of my favourite Shivi OS now!!⭐️⭐️

Please keep writing about this version of Shiva..Omece again- I LOVED HIMMMM!! 🔥🔥😂❤️

PS: thanks for tagging!! 😘✨

When is the next part coming?

Can't wait.

I'm laughing way too hard at this 😂😂

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Erm .. practical on what?? 🤓 😆

Thanks for reading!

Really you didn’t get it or you are playing around me ☺️😆

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Really you didn’t get it or you are playing around me ☺️😆

What do you think? 😉

All the confusion began because Raavi chose to refer to it as 'riding'. Not Shiva's fault! 😆

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

I'm laughing way too hard at this 😂😂

Thank you! I'm glad you found it funny which is what I aimed for! 😳