Ramji geye sita ko bechane - a short story

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Ramji geye sita ko bechane


On the day of dusshera


11pm Virks residence

He was feeling restless as tejo's phone was switched off. The whole family returned home. A text message from the former received that she went to her friend's house . Will put up there.

He went to sleep on his couch in the living room. Jasmin was excited as her planned work. Jass had kidnapped tejo .


The next morning 9 am .

Virks went out to visit a sick relative leaving him and jasmin alone at home.

Ring!! He answered to the unknown caller on the third ring

A stranger's voice loud and clear.

Heloo!

Fateh calmly

Heloo fateh speaking . Ap kaun ?

The stranger laughed

Ravan ha ha ha!

Fateh irritated ly

Oi bhai saab, ram leela aur ravan dehen ka program kal raat khatam ho geya tha !

Stranger laughing

Lekin apki ramayan toh abhi shuru hui hain na ramji.!

Fateh irritatedly

Arey kaun si ramayan kaunsa ram ??

Stranger puzzled and thought to himself

Kis pagal khane sey nikla hain ! Main bhi kahan phas geya!

Fateh irritatedly

Oi ravan kumar chup kyun hain!

Stranger irritatedly

Abey sun . Teri sita ko uthaliya hain. Akey bechaley! Aur sath main aek crore lana.

Fateh angrily

Tu phir shuru ho geya! Kaha na ram leela khatam ho geyi hain

Stranger angrily

Arey teri sita ko utha liya hain. Tu samajta kyun nehin hain . !

Fateh irritatedly

Meri koi sita nehin hain.!

Stranger irritatedly

Hain teri sita hain!

Fateh irritatedly

Bola na nehin hain!

Stranger furiously

Hain hain hain!

Fateh furiously

Tu phone rakh! Subah subah dimaag kherab mat kar!

Stranger furiously

Dimag toh tu mera kherab ker raha hain! Teri sita ko uthaliya hain. As pas dekh, kya vo tujhey dikhai deti hain.

Fateh to himself anxiously

Kya pagal hain. Main sita ko kaisey dekh sakta hun !

Then answered the stranger irritatedly

Mere as pas koi sita nehin hain!

Jasmin, who was listening to their conversation, sighed

Both are nutcases! I have to do something.

She walked up to fateh

Kehin tejo key bare main to nehin baat kar reha!

Fateh shocked enquired her

Tejo kab sey sita ben geyi! He paused a while then understood.

Fateh to stranger angrily.

Teri himmat kaisey hui meri sita ko uthaney ki.

Stranger thought to himself

Kya aadmi hain yaar. Iski tubelight jelney main time legta hain!

Stranger to fateh immediately.

Ab samaj aya. Saley tune mere dimaag ka feluda bena diya. ! Aur sun, jaldi aja nehin toh teri sita ka halwa benadunga.

Fateh nervously

Nehin usko kuch mat karna. Main ata hun !

Stranger excitedly

Aek crocre rupee lana apney sath! Aur sun! Vanron ki sena mat lana . Akeley ana. !

Fateh puzzled

Vanron ki sena! Matlab!

Stranger sighed to himself.

Iski tubelight slow chelti hain. Subah subah chai ki jegah bhang pili shayad!

Stranger to fateh irritatedly

Matlab police. Tujhey kya legta hain hanumanji ayengey kya teri help karney key liye!

Fateh nervously

Thik hain. Tu jaisa bolega main vaisa karunga. Bas uska khayal rakhna!

Stranger irritatedly

Kidnapper hun caretaker nehin hun. Jaldi ao!

Fateh nervously.

Kahan ana hain ! Lanka toh bahut dur hain. Border band hain. Flight nehin milegi ! Thoda time legeyga.

Stranger sighed to himself

Iski tubelight puri terah sey kherab Hain

Stranger to fateh irritated ly

Apki sita yehin punjab mey hain. Border band hain toh main lanka kaisey lekey ja sakta hun.

Location bhejta hun. Note kar!

The location was a deserted factory nearby.


Fateh was worried about the one crocre. How to arrange the money in the nick of time. Then an idea came to him.

Jasmin , mere sath chalo gi hanumanji benkar pls!

Jasmin was touched by his request. Decided to tag along to impress him and also he wont suspect that she was involved.

They rushed towards his jeep and jasmin accidentally left her phone behind.

As they reached the factory site, they successfully sneaked in . Then jasmin remember ed her phone went missing. She couldn't call jass and inform that they were there.

No one in sight. They found tejo sitting on a chair in the dark tied up and unconscious. Just then jasmin felt something hard struck on her head and she fainted. Fateh hit her with a stick .

The plan was to replace jasmin with tejo till he buys some time to get the one crocre. Saving tejo was more necessary as she carried more importance. Well , she takes good care of family and academy. Jasmin does nothing. Full day loitering in the hse and eating up his head

So fateh's plan waa to exchange the girls and he had to do it fast. It waa dark inside and not easy to make out who is tied to the chair.

He tied the unconscious jasmin to the chair . Took tejo in his arms and escaped quietly. Jas waited at the entrance impatiently. There was no sight of fateh. He called jasmin to check if fateh has left but her phone went unanswered.

Fateh laid tejo on her bed and mended her wounds. Thank god virks were not home yet.

Just then jass called

U never came!

Fateh calmly

Mainey sita ko bechaliya hain aur apkey pas kisi aur ko bithadiya hain. Aisa hain paisa manage karney key liye thoda time chahiye. Usko ap key pas girvi rekh deta hun . Jab paisa dunga toh uska release kardena ok!

Jass shocked

Tu kab aya tha!

Fateh calmly

Thodi der pehle! Shurpanaka ko apney sath laya tha aur usko sita ki jegah bandiya. ! Sita mere pas hain aur shurpanaka tere pas. !

The shocked jas ran into the factory to find jasmin tied to the chair instead.

Jass furiously

Yeh exchange tujhey mehenga padega!

Fateh calmly .

Mujhey time chahiye paison ka benduwast karney key liye!

Jas furiously

Aur agar nehin hua!

Fateh calmly

Shurpanaka ko apney sath lanka le jana !

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tagging restricted

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow!!! I'd prefer this version of Ram Leela any day😆

Aise toh Fateh ki tubelight nahi jalti but kaam ke time pe exchange karne ka idea turant aagaya, nice! Aur ek crore ki keemat hai bhi Jasso ki?! Use wahin chorna zyaada profitable hai😃

Thanks for the tag Anita! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ani.....this is ultimate..hilarious...tubelight ekdum.i loved that border band hai, flight nahi milegi part...I am still laughing....wah re Ram

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Are wah...balle balle🥳🥳

Hai to fateh gadha hi🤣🤪

But still time ke waqt batti jal gayi iski.

And that's how we know it's not tv fateh. Der se sahi, buddhi aa gayi

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs

Wow!!! I'd prefer this version of Ram Leela any day😆

Aise toh Fateh ki tubelight nahi jalti but kaam ke time pe exchange karne ka idea turant aagaya, nice! Aur ek crore ki keemat hai bhi Jasso ki?! Use wahin chorna zyaada profitable hai😃

Thanks for the tag Anita! ❤️

1 crore... -1 crore maano. Like if someone said that you have the keep her in your home for a week, i'd demand one crore

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

1 crore... -1 crore maano. Like if someone said that you have the keep her in your home for a week, i'd demand one crore

I am sure Jas will go bald after staying with Jasmine for a while. He'd constantly be pulling out his hair in frustration and by the end of a week, he'd hand deliver 1 Crore rupees to Fateh just to take her back kyunki baal toh chale gaye, ab jaan na chali jaaye 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ohh god jasmine as hanumanji 😅😅😅😅😅.

Awesome seems like ur back in form.

Waisa all ur recent past stories were good but this one was 🤩🤩🤩🤩.

Plz right more 😃😃😃😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Holy shit, this is the best take on the current. I couldn't understand half the dialogues but even then I was laughing like crazy. Fateh replacing them because Jasmine could be more useful as a hostage... and him being so stupid and Jas' frustrated explanations. And his calmness at the end. Jasso thinking she could replace Hanuman, hilarious. I wasn't expecting Fateh's (sorta) betrayal and I thought it was Jas who caught them at first but wow. Absolutely amazing. *Chef's kiss.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Holy f**k 🤣

God Ani can't stop laughing 🤣🤣

Loved jas-fateh conversation...

Has has ke pet dard ho geya 🤣

Edited by FieryLioness - 3 years ago

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