Sorry if this is not popular opinion. Just wanted to share feedback.
The treatment of the organ trafficking case was lukewarm and overtly simplified. It was like elements in the checkbox, ticked!
1. Show some action -- Done
2. Make the cadets realise the importance of training and apply it -- Done
3. Save victims -- Done
4. Show corruption -- Done
Furthermore, as mentioned many times over, screenplay and editing is the weakpoint of the show and patchy.
(This further reiterates the earlier assumption of a drama writer penning an army story🤦🏻♀️.)
Ofcourse the sheer screen presence of the actors and their personalities makes up for much of the shortcomings.
May be it is unfair to compare, but look at the treatment of cases in LRL or (may be a bit biased😉) first 80 episodes of HYMAE-Arjun.
They were sleek, polished and wholesome.
High points:
1. Monami insisting on completing her duty to treat Gauri
2. Chirag the psycho bad guy.
Again,
1. Karan single-handedly saves the day, inspite of being shot. He is found hardly hurt in precap.
2. Siddhart is stabbed, has lost a LOT of blood and for sooooooo long and is found walking back, albeit with help.
3. Bala suspects the cops while seasoned special agents dont.
4. Koel's role as a nurse is not explored.
What am I keen on watching next?
1. Not sure what would be more dramatic.
(If the look of helplessness and guilt on Koel in the end was anything to go by)
- Koel confessing to Faizi about the recording and how Rawat is blackmailing and Faizi insisting on her to clear evidences.
- Faizi confronting Koel on reading the letter.
2. More training scenes. Arent they also getting basic medical training for ALL and more extensive for Dr.Monami and Koel.
