INSIGHT OF A TORTURED MIND ll SHORT DRABBLE ll - Page 2

Originally posted by: sumsukor

This is so excellent and wished it was this way.

The Mandaar who was spoken about had imprinted a gentlemanly vibes in my mind and was wondering how they will shpw Pallavi's agony and confusion in choosing between RR and M. But... what was shown or rather imposed never fit in.

Lovely writing

Mandaar was this amazing personality in my mind that i can't explain. Everything that they laid out since episode one pointed to one thing that he was finally the best thing that happened to Pallavi before Raghav but after her upsetting past life.

They ruined him big time.

Originally posted by: Srijeeta06

This is so beautifully written Sama

You have a talent in playing with words

I wish they had handled Mandar well

It would have been such a good grey character if handled well

Thank You

I wish soo too.

We were robbed off of such an amazing track.

Originally posted by: Wallflowers

Beautiful sama❤️really beautiful the way you penned down the emotions of Pallavi, I could really felt each and every emotions right there❤️

I will always be mad at cvs for ruining mandaar's character, the character had so much potential they could have done so much with him.

I am really speechless 🥺.

Amazing writing👏

Thank you.

yes they ruined Mandaar when he could have been a white man but just jealous of watching a pure person like Pallavi got taken away from her due to Sunny's fault. That insecurity would have been so logical for me.

Originally posted by: drnidsur

Wowow

This is sooo well written

You have such a way around with your words 😳

So beautiful!

I wish the track had even a lil of the intricacies you have penned down here

But you have aced it out of the court 🤗❤️

So good

Thanks Nids

It's just Pallavi resides in my mind somewhere and there's definitely a strong connect.

Originally posted by: Wilddreams

I am speechless Sama 🤗

Its beautiful ❤️❤️

Writers really disappointed us with bad writing in Mandy track 😡

You're brilliant writer and i am your big fan 😳

stop saying fan, you guys are making me shy now ☺️

But thank you for liking it and yes i am pissed off at writers for ruining Mandaar.

Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

WOW
This is amazing

It would have been definitely a wholesome experience to watch had Mandar been a positive or a grey character rather than what we got on-screen

This piece was more relatable to what Pallavi used to think of him as a good person.

This is what i think Pallavi always had in mind for him but most importantly how big of a step it was for her get married again leaving the faint memories of a first husband.

Originally posted by: SONIA441

This is a really really good piece Sama🤗

I'm so glad we have you as one of the writers on the Forum.

The insights you have in Pallavi's mind & about her as a Character is always mind-blowing & the hallucination of Mandaar that you conjured here today sums up how Pallavi actually might have felt for him way way before.

Thanks Sonia.

yes i belive it wasn't easy for Pallavi to leave one marriage even though there was nothing in it and move onto another one. Somewhere the feeling of betraying must have surfaced.