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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: hapc

OH MY GOD! I missed this!! I have to give credit to @Bluekohl for guiding me here. This was brilliant. Tejo felt real. Not mahaan. And Mahi was amazing. The broken bracelet and Tejo's memory of young Jasso felt the most heartbreaking. Bonds that were over 20 years old broke just like that. Such a lovely piece of work. Mahi was spot on in all she said to both Fateh and Tejo and Tejo's decision to take a divorce and make her own choices and face consequences was just brilliant. Lovely lovely work.


thank you for all the kind words and @bluekhol for guiding hapc here!


Tejo ji needs to stop being mahaan. i have always maintained that Mahi is one of the sanest Virk although recent episodes have been disappointing. the one here is mature beyond her age. Tejo and jasmine's initial relationship reminded me a lot of the giving tree story we were told as kids so it felt fitting- but was still a herculean task to pen down. it's honestly scary how precarious relationships can be than a slight wind posses the ability to break them.


all in all for taking your time to read and leave your much-appreciated feedback!

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