ShiVi TS: Tease | Part 2 Updated: Page 7 | 18/10/2021 | - Page 3

i cant waitt for the night........u and these 2 ..........tino ne sataya hai hame......ab compensate karo.....☺️

Shyna! How did I miss this one? Busy weekend I guess😕

Just loved it. The progression they made was awesome nothing like we see in the show. This is how it should have been but I am glad you wrote it❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

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Shyna!!!! I'm first!!!

Favorite lines... Plural because I couldn't bring myself to choose one....

Liar, liar. Her conscience whispered back at her.

Bad Shiva! He chastised himself.

Control, Shiva, control! Shiva mentally chided himself.

Maybe, he spoke too soon.

This was soooo good!!!! It reminded me of how much fun Shivi had until the whole Sneha kaand.... I've been re watching those episodes recently and they're like this gold standard of nok jhok... This one truly captured the essence of that....

PS Because I couldn't find the pani pani vm with the shirtless Shiva and the look at the end of this one is the next closest thing I could find... EYE CANDY ALERT!!! 😆

https://youtube.com/shorts/ggvTupgtaVI?feature=share

PPS I wrote a drabble on macchar man in the thread I opened for it.... Ahhh... Creepy Shiva... 😳

Oh the joy of being first is something else, isn't it?!😆

Hehehe you love all of my favorite lines, while writing them I was cackling like crazy 🤣

I'm so soo sooo happy you felt that I captured their essence. I'm usually iffy about this while I'm writing as I don't like to take them too out of character; this one was a bit bolder and ofc shivi in the show aren't there yet, but I hope this is how they proceed once things get better i.e. tease each other tit for tat

And thank you for sharing the vm ☺️ me likeyyy

Haven't watched one on shirtless shiva but this is my fav paani paani reel, I legit watch it every day 😳

https://www.instagram.com/reel/CRdlFq_BaGJ/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link

You wrote a little some some on lattoo(creepy) baby boi?!! I'm gonna read it soon!

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Oh the joy of being first is something else, isn't it?!😆

Hehehe you love all of my favorite lines, while writing them I was cackling like crazy 🤣

I'm so soo sooo happy you felt that I captured their essence. I'm usually iffy about this while I'm writing as I don't like to take them too out of character; this one was a bit bolder and ofc shivi in the show aren't there yet, but I hope this is how they proceed once things get better i.e. tease each other tit for tat

And thank you for sharing the vm ☺️ me likeyyy

Haven't watched one on shirtless shiva but this is my fav paani paani reel, I legit watch it every day 😳

https://www.instagram.com/reel/CRdlFq_BaGJ/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link

You wrote a little some some on lattoo(creepy) baby boi?!! I'm gonna read it soon!

@bold So true!!! And I feel like OOC fics don't really work with shows, they only work for books, and that too for the unexplored parts of characters....

I watched the reel on loop!!!! It's super good Shyna!!!

Ha ha, do read and comment on the drabble...

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

I loved it so much❤️

aw thanks pooh 😆❤️

Just love love love! This was a beautiful piece!!❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

Originally posted by: Kfof

Shayna, it was amazing❤❤

Loved their tease and last lart🤗🥳❤

thank you hun ❤️

so glad you enjoyed it!🤗

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

Sala Sab mar do....katal kar do iss kutiya Maya ka....aaj sabne decide kar rakha hai na mujhe zinda nahi chonda....🔪🔪

OOOOH GOD OH GOD OH GOD!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!

TEASING WEASING CHAL RAHA HAI!!!!

TODAY MORNING I WAS WONDERING KI YE GADHEDI COT MEIN TOH EKDUM ULTA SEEDHA HOKE SOTI HAI PAR SHIVA KE SAATH SOTE SAMAY KURTA PYJAMA AUR LAKDI BAN JATI HAI!!! NAHI MATLAB JACKET SOCKS SHOES YE SAB BHI PEHENKE SOJA RAAVI!!!!😡

TUM MERI SOULMATE HO!!!! MERI DIL KI BAAT SAMAJH GAYI!!!!!🥺❤

THE ENDING!!!! AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! MUJHE RAAT KA BHI OS CHAHIYE!!!!!! DONO SONE NAHI WALE AUR TUM WAHIN END KAR DI!!!!😡

MUJHE AUR CHAHIYE!!!!!!

"Sone nahi dunga tujhe."

"Mujhe sona bhi nahi hai."

Bye me dead....😇

Maya yaaaar!!🤣

First of all, I'd just like to say that this comment is one of the best things I've ever read - it truly might be the best comment I've received 🤣

Aur tu marna nahi pleaj okay, humara aisa koi irada nahi hai😆

Tum bhi meri soul sis ho 🤗 I was wondering the same thing about Raavi. Itna twist hokay Shiva ke saath kyun nahi soti yeh bandi 🤪 upar se her long sleeve kurtas and duppatta are another dukh of mine 😭🤣

The ending almost didn't happen 😆

But I wrote it at the very last moment, I'm glad you liked it ☺️

Raat ka OS tu imagine karle okiee 😳

I might write a second part, but I'm gonna omit the juicy details 😈 hehe 🤭

Omg 😍😍🙈🙈i loved it so much it wa so so good ❤❤❤❤

We poor peeps deserve a part 2...

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