Let's start at the end - A ShiVi SS ft. Pandya parivaar [Complete] - Page 11

Originally posted by: Anon21

Why can't I find chapter 5?

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/158578835

Here you go. 😊

Originally posted by: mpks1

Loved, loved the ending and their conversation, Shiva's realization and thoughts in the form of a letter❤️

Min, this had to be the most sensible way ever for Shiva and Raavi to get back together. Thank you for writing this❤️

Glad you liked it prema... I wanted sensible too which was why I decided to write one.. If they go down the comic route in the show I'm going to replace all those episodes with this for my sanity.

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

Now that was the most precious and purest Fanfic I ever read....damn...That was an emotional roller coaster ....Loved it....It was nothing short of divine❤

Glad you loved it. ❤️

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

❤️💕🥰what a fabulous story….love the whole concept💕❤️🥰

Thank you. I got a brief idea over in the EDT and thought of trying to write it down. Glad you enjoyed it. ❤️😊

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

I loved it ❤️

why do good things come to an end? 😭

Because endings bring about new beginnings 😘

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Minn this one is a master piece❤️

I had tears in my eyes reading this...It was so heart touching❤️

Shiva's letter was so pure..I could feel Shiva's love for Raavi as I read this letter❤️

I am so glad you wrote this story. This was so sensible, realistic and so beautiful. It touched my heart so deeply❤️

Oh priya priya priya... You're making me blush..

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it so much. Shiva and Raavi have my heart so I wanted a redemption story for them that was worth telling. 😊♥️♥️😘

Beautiful, beautiful story 🤍🤍

Loved their journey 💜

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Aaliya!!! 😂😂 Did you read the epilogue on the second page first post?? I did write about Raavi in that.. Maybe some suggestions on what you would have liked to see? I wasn't too sure of the ending either so any suggestions will be much appreciated 😊😊♥️

Haha I read that! I just meant that both of them made mistakes, so it would have been nice to see an apology from both, instead of just Shiva apologizing and Raavi forgiving 😆❤️

But anyway it's your story, I dont want to nitpick! I got overexcited, but I should keep my expectations limited to the show only 😆

I loved it regardless Min! 🤗

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Haha I read that! I just meant that both of them made mistakes, so it would have been nice to see an apology from both, instead of just Shiva apologizing and Raavi forgiving 😆❤️

But anyway it's your story, I dont want to nitpick! I got overexcited, but I should keep my expectations limited to the show only 😆

I loved it regardless Min! 🤗

No i know what you mean... And that's probably why after re writing it so many times i, still wasn't happy with it... I think it's harder to write raavi apologising since they haven't given us anything to go on.. I need alot of visual inspiration when writing fics... But i definitely will give it a try and see if that makes me feel better about it too 😊😊😊... I'm actually really glad you pointed it out since I'd been going over it for a while and couldn't see why it wasn't quite fitting 😊