Monami- Hidden Hitler Girl!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tring Tring!

Monami- Dad? Why is he calling me now?

Monami picks up the call anyways.

Dr. Mahajan- Hello Monami?

Monami- Hello Dad? Koi problem ho gayi hai kya? Apne kyun call kiya?

Dr. Mahajan- Monami, meine tumhari shaadi ek cologue ke bete se fix karwa di ha beta. He seems like a nice boy, in fact mene khud usko interview kiya hai. He is coming to pick you up today at 6 30pm at the Sunrise Cafe which is 10 minutes away from your adventure sport's camp.

Monami- Dad, firstly yeh koi adventure sport's camp nahi hai it's an academy, secondly mujhe shaadi nahi karni.

Dr. Mahajan- I didn't give you a choice Monami, I am telling you. I hope you won't disappoint me. Bye!

Saying so Mr. Mahajan disconnects the call and sends her the details of the boy.

Name: Aditya Malhotra
Job: CEO of Malhotra enterprises. (Inherited from father)
Hobbies: Clubbing, travelling and reading.
Takes alcohol: Yes, occasionally
Smokes: Yes, occasionally
Looks: Good looking.
Medical History: None.

Monami immediately calls her dad back.

Monami- Dad he like clubbing and also he drinks and smokes.

Dr. Mahajan- This is common in rich people like us Monami! Even your so called best buddy Sid drinks.

Monami- Yes dad but I...

Dr. Mahajan- Meet him once Monami, you'll like him too. Bye!

IN THE CANTEEN:

Monami was disturbed because of her father's wish, Sid and the rest noticed that she was lost.

Sid: Monu bro, kahan kho gayi hai tu?

Monami- Sid, bohot badi problem ho gayi hai

(Seating arrangements are the same as they show on TV, so the three SPL agents can hear what the recruits were talking about)

Sid- bro yeh loh mera dialogue hai, humesha main hi bolta hoon isse

Monami- Par aaj mein keh rahi hoon aur ab tu sun!

Chitra- #Problem! Monami kya huya?

Sumanji- Haan monami, kya hua sumanji ko tension ho rahi hai

Karan rolled his eyes at their drama. faizi listens to them carefully while sanjana look completely disinterested.

Monami- Sid yaad hai humare neighbourhood mein ek ladkya tha, Aditya naam tha uska?

Sid- arrey haan, woh idiot toh mujhse bhi zyada useless tha! main kuch nahi karta par woh evil kaam karta hai! in fact usne toh kitni ladkiyon ko sirf pleasure ke liye use kiya hai! tere saath flirt bhi toh karta rehta tha!

This catches the attention of Sanjana and Karan as well.

Monami- exactly! aur ab usnein dad ko manipulate kiya hai. Dad ko logta hai that he is a well mannered, good person!

Prem- Aisa seen toh mere serial mein episode no. 316 mein bhi huya tha!

Sumanji- Jab voh ladke ne aakar us ladki ka apharan kiya aur baap se paise mange?

Bala- Aaarreyy baap re! Toh Monami didi, aapke papa toh bohot ameer hain toh woh toh apse banglow, gaadi sab mang lega! Bhai uski toh lottery lag gayi!!

*everyone glares at him*

Koel- Arrey chup karo tum log, Monami inki toh aadat hai over exaggerate karne ki, tum aage batao.

Monami- Koel yeh log over exaggerate nahi kar rahein hai, actually yeh bhi ek possibility hai! Woh ladka bohot zyada bigda huya hai, uska koi bharosa nahi hai :(

Sid- Point par aaja monu.

Monami- Sid, point yeh hai ki ab papa chahte hain ki main usse shaadi kar loon. Unhone mujhe bola hai ki aaj 6 30pm ko mein jakar usse miloon. Voh mujhe yahan se lay jayga shayad.

Sid, Sumaji, Prem, Bala- KYA????

Chitra- #What what what?? yeh toh zabardasti hai. Tum Aditya ko #reject kar do.

Monami- Chitra wahi toh main problem hai, papa ko mana nahi kar sakti aur usse shaadi bhi nahi karna chahti! Ameer ho ya Gareeb, ladkiyan humesha property ki tarah hi handle hoti hain 😢

Sanjana can easily relate to her tension and concern. She stays afar and keeps listening to their talks.

Sid- toh monu tu jayegi usse milne?

Monami- Sid, main akele nahi jaana chahti, in fact main usse milna hi nahi chahti, kya karoon ab main? Jane se mana bhi nahi kar sakti :(((

Prem- Monami, mera manna hai tum jao wahan par, lekin kisi ke saath. Shayad koi fake boyfriend? Wahan se shaadi peh bhi full stop aur protection bhi rahegi.

Monami- fake boyfriend kahan se paida karke laaoon ab??

Sid- Arrey paida karne ki zaroorat nahi hai, main ban jata hoon!

Koel- Sid, tum toh rehne do, ek macchar toh tumse mara nahi jata wahan par attack ya kuch ho gaya toh kya karoge?

Monami- Sid, Koel ki baat main point hai. Aur wahan par ek nahi 15-20 body guards honge. Kya koroongi main phir?

Sid- toh tujhe koi aisa chahiye jo maar pit bhi kar sake?

Monami- of course Sid!

Bala- Karan sirji hai na, woh toh 15-20 body guards ki chutki main chutti kar denge!

Monami- NAHI NAHI NAHI NAHI *dramatic saas bahu effect* bilkul bhi nahi. Do batein, pehli "He hates lies and liars" secondly, "usse lagega ki yeh family drama hai" voh kisi bhi tarah se meri madat nahi karega ulta tanne aur extra merage, huff!

Karan gave a shocked reaction. To himself: toh yeh image bana rakhi hai in logon ne meri. Woman ki respect karta hoon main, khair, agar inhein madat nahi chahiye toh phir thik hai, mujhe kya?

Chitra- Toh Faizi sir? Woh toh maar pit kar sakte hain, saath hi woh tumhari madat bhi karene 99% kyuni he looks #very approachable. Also, mene suna hai woh flirt and all bhi kar sakte hai toh boyfriend ki bhi acting kar lenge.

Koel felt a flash of jealousy even though she knew this was all an act so she immediately said, "Nahi!"

Everyone (including the three silent spectators) looked at her with a questioning gaze

Monami- kyun nahi Koel? I think yeh toh best option hai!

Koel- Uh, um woh, uhh

Sumanji- Dhang se bolna sikh le pehe

Koel- Sumanji aap chup hi rahiye pls aur mein yeh isiliye bol rahi thi kyunki agar Karan sir ko pata chal gaya ki Faizi sir Monami ke fake boyfriend banke kahin jaa rahe hain toh voh bohot gussa ho jayengi aur plan fail ho jayega!

Faizi and Sanjana tries to stop their laughter
While Karan rolls his eyes.

Prem- Aur Karan sir ko kaise pata chalega?

Bala- Arrey Faizi sir aur Karan sir bohot close hain, ekdum bhai ki tarah. Kuch nahi chupate honge ek doosre se!

Monami- Yes, yeh bhi valid point hai! toh ab?

Sid- Monu, on a serious note, mujhe lagta hai iss situation main sirf Karan sir hi teri help kar sakte hain!

Bala- Haan, aur aapko yaad hai jab Sid bro ne Sanjana madam ke saath dinner karne ki koshish ki thi toh sir ne kya kiya tha?

Koel- Point hai Monami, sir ne hume girls ki repect par lecture diya tha. I am sure he'll help you!

Sumaji- Haan Monami, pehli baar is koel na kuch sahi kaha hai! bas tum na sir ko pura incident vistaar se mat samjhana woh pak jayenge aur tumhe get out kar denge. Tum na sidhe sidhe yeh bolna ki sir mujhe ek jagah jaana hai aur woh meri majboori hai, woh jagah 99% safe nahi hai aur isiliye agar aap meri help kar sakte hain kya? Aur fir kahanhi shuru karna.

Monami- Suman woh sab toh thik hai par are you sure woh manega?

Sumanji does not reply, she looks blankly towards Monami.

Monami- hello?? main apse hi baat kar rahi hoon!!

Koel- Monami, sumanji bolke dekho.

Monami- Sumanji woh sab toh thik hai par are you sure woh manega?

Sumaji- jab tak try nahi karoge, pata kaise chalega? Konsawoh tumhe academy se nikal dega!

Monami- Hmm, bol toh aap sahi rahi hain.

Bala- Monami di, aap jaake dekhiye toh sahi, sirji itne bhi bure nahi hai. Main guarantee leta hoon!

Sid- Abey Oyeee! Tu khud ki guarantee nahi le sakta Karan sir ki le raha hai?

Bala- mujhe khud se zyada un par bharosa hai!

Monami seems convinced- Okay fine main jake poochti hoon!

ON THE TRAINERS TABLE:

Monami- sir?

Karan and Faizi- yes?

Monami- I meant Karan Sir.

Faizi- Oh okay.

Karan- bolo.

Monami- sir woh actually mujhe ek jagah jaana hai aur woh meri majboori hai, woh jagah 99% safe nahi hai aur isiliye agar aap meri help kar sakte hain kya? *then she explains the whole story*

Karan- time and place?

Monami- 6 30pm, Sunshine cafe.

(guys, note usne galat cafe ka naam de diya hai, it's sunrise but usne sunshine bol diya hai)

Karan- Okay, directly cafe pe miloonga main!

Monami- Okay, thank you so much sirr!

BACK TO THE RECRUITS TABLE:

everyone: kya bola?

Monami- Man gaya!! 😁😁😁

Everyone- Yesss!!

AT 5 30:

All the recruits were in Monami's room. Sanjana too was there.

Sid- Monu bro, waise toh mujhe us dole shole par poora bharosa hai phir bhi, koi bhi problem ho toh call ya message kar dena!

Sanju- Oyeee, sirji bol dole shole kon?

Sid- sorry!

Chitra- Waise tum #hot toh lag rahi ho ab

Monami- Thankssss, I just hope koi problem na ho

Bala- Sirji ha na wahan par, kuch nahi hoga!

Monami- Hmm

AT 6 25pm IN SUNRISE CAFE:

Monami- Abhi tak kyun nahi ayye Karan sir?

Bodyguard- Chaliye, andar sir aapka wait kar rahe hain!

Monami- Uh, uhm woh, okay.

AT 6 30pm IN SUNSHINE CAFE:

Karan- yahan toh koi arrangements nahi dikh rahe, aur rani sahiba khud late hain!

He sits down and orders a coffee.

Karan: Yaar! phone ki battery khatam ho gayi!

SUNRISE CAFE:

Monami was continuously trying Karan's phone but it was switched off!

Aditya- Arrey phone ko dekhna band karo darling, come here, beitho!

Monami already starts to feel uncomfortable.

Aditya orders something for both and then flirts with Monami.

SUNSHINE CAFE:

Karan: Mujhe nahi lagta yahan kuch hone wala hai, isse accha yahin kuch kha leta hoon phir academy jakar class loonga madam ki.

SUNRISE CAFE:

Aditya slowly started to misbehave with her. Holding her hands, touching feet, coming close and all.

Monami immediately get alert and messages Sid.

Monami- Sid, I am on problem. Karan bhi nahi aya! Please sabko leke aaja!

Aditya snatched her phone and pulled her towards him.

Tumhare dad ne already shaadi fix kar di hai, so now you are all mine!

Monami- Please chodo mujhe!

Aditya- Itne time tumne mujhe ignore kiya tha na, now it's my chance and then he started to sexually haress her.....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is super interesting!!

Please continue soon!

Also do write SS pr FF in you title so the people get to know that it's a story!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Uff..kya ladki hai..hotel ka nam bhi galat bataya


Ab kya hoga..


I think momani is strong enough to handle him👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Monami- Excuse me? Please behave yourself!

Aditya- Who are you to tell me? Huh? I bought you from your dad!

Monami- I am not any object that can be bought or sold! Chodo mujhe!

Aditya- Chup! Tum apne aap ko samjhti kya ho? Tum abhi akeli ho, kya hi tik paaogi?

By this time the recruits, Sanjana and Faizi arrive at the SUNRISE CAFE:

Sanjana- Chod do uss chori ko, himmat ho toh hamare saath lado!

Aditya- You know, I hate violence! I can easily shut you guys! Byw guards, inhein andar kisne aane diya?

Faizi- Officer's hain. ID card dikhaya aur aa gaye!

Aditya takes out his gun and aims it on Monami head. Then he pulls Monami towards him.

Aditya- No one moves, warna gun mein 6 bullets hain! Guns down Ofiicers!

Everyone freezes. They put the their hands up while the officers put their guns down and then their hands up! Monami tries to fight but there were 15-20 bodyguards. Aditya ordered them to tie her hands with metal chains (note: her feet were not tied up), which they did.

Aditya kept the gun aimed on her while the guards surrounded the recruits and officers.

Aditya- Ab toh hum phaas gayi. Kon bachayga tumhe?

Monami was feeling helpless and disgusted.

Monami- Yeh khadhoos shergill kyun nahi aya? Woh aata toh aisa kuch nahi hota!

Aditya- Mein toh humari date private karna chahta tha, par koi baat nahi, ab sabke saamne hi kar lete hain.

Sid- Aditya tu kuch bhi kar Monami ko chune ki koshish mat kariyo!

Aditya- Oyee useless kahin ka! Chup baithe! Apne andar ke "bro" ko sula ke rakh!

Sid ne for the first time (okay second time, first was loving sanju) kuch accha kaam kiya aur scene ki recording start kar di jisse ki woh yeh Dr. Mahajan ko dikha sakta tha.

AT SUNSHINE CAFE:

Karan eats his food but then starts feeling uneasy. He plans to go to baby's house which was 2 minutes away from the SUNRISE cafe.

IN FRONT OF BABY'S HOUSE:

Karan: yeh sunrise cafe ke samne itni security hun hai?

Karan goes there and sees the staff shivering due to fear.

Karan: Kya ho raha hain yahan par?

Manager: Sir, ander ek customer ne pura luxury area book kiya tha phir ek madam andar gayi, 30 minutes baad officers aur kuch aur log bhi andar gaye. CCTV mein dekh kar pata chala ki andar wo madam ko woh log harass kar rahe hain. Officers bhi kuch nahi kar pa rahe kyunki Madam gun point par hai. Guards ne hume police ko phone karne se mana kar diya hai

Karan immediately goes and kicks the door.

Karan points his gun at Aditya- Hands up!

Aditya- Guards!

Guards go and surround him.

Aditya- Monami, tumne toh apni protection ke liye puri force taya kar rakhi hai, itna daar?

Monami- isse dar nahi disgust aur hatred kehte hain.

Aditya gets angry and again start to misbehave.

Karan and rest everyone feel disgusted and helpless. Aditya kept on doing his nonsense while Monami could do nothing.

Karan shouts: Monami, tumhare pair abhi bhi khule hoye hain! (if anyone here sees hero gayab mode on they will be able to relate- Zara and Shivaay scene). Apne sar piche karo and then feet backwards upar karo (back kick). (Me: guys yeh mat poochna ki woh back kick kidhar jaake lega 😂, jahan bhi laga bohot zor se laga hoga)

Monami did the same (ladki fighter hai!)

But then the bodyguards came towards Aditya to protect him. However, the moment the bodyguards went Karan was free so he indicated the rest to fight against the body guards.

Sumanji ne restaurant mein jo chaate (umbrella) hote hain usse aur apni chappal use karke proper indian desi style mein ek guards ke piche padkar usse pitna shuru kar diya.

Keol ne apne past ki saari bhadas do bodyguards par utar di!

Prem ji ne apne episode no. 421 mein hero ki tarah pitna shuru kar diya (actually guards ke kano mein se bhi khoon nikalna shuru ho gaya hoga kyunki woh apne episode ki details bhi saath saath de rahe the!)

Chitra ne pehle teen guards ke saath selfie li (bichare guards bhi celebrities ki tarah pose karne lage) aur uske baad unki aankhon main dhool, nahi nahi, chilli power jhonk diya (ab restaurant mein dhool kahan se milegi, toh bichari ne chilli power hi jhok diya)

Bala ne side wale waiter ki pocket mein se uske black goggles 😎 nikale aur uske baad mooh mein chewingum dali, sleeves upar ki aur phir.................... Sumanji ka doosra jodi chappal are chitra ka chilling power leke duards ke piche piche bhagne laga (aapko kya laga? ab Tiger Shroff ki tarah maar pit toh karna nahi aata tha bichare ko toh yahi karega na?), guards aage woh piche 😂 ab bichare guards bhi daar gaye chappal aur mirchi power se!!

(Kaisa laga mera action packed scene?? 😎😎😁✌)

Faizi aur Sanjana baak sare guards ko handle kar rahe the, Karan Aditya and Monami ke paas gaya direct.

Karan being Karan, pehle usne Aditya ko ghisa, fir pees diya fir dhul diya and then sukhane ke liye neech floor par phek dia. He untied Monami, and the moment he did that. Monami hugged him in a reflex while Karan froze(aareeey pehli baar koi ladki excpet uski sisters or mother usse hug kar rahe the, freeze toh hoga hi na 😆). He soon recovered when he sensed that his shirt was getting slightly wet. By then Burayii ki Haar ho chuki thi 🙌❤✌. All of these evils were shifted to the central jail. Sid sent the video to Dr. Mahajan who then felt extremely guilty. (he wasn't a bad man, he was just concerned and did not know the real side of Aditya)

Monami stopped crying and rushed to the academy without waiting for anyone.

(Yaar, bechare Karan ki shirt bhi gili kar di aur wait tak nahi kiya. Bechari ko woh mahabharat mein Draupadi wali feeling toh nahi aa rahi hogi na? 😢)

Everyone rushed to the academy. Monami had locked herself in the room

Sanju- Amma ab ped (tree) ke niche sona pedego ke? Isnein toh kamra band kardo!

**everyone shoots death glares at her**

Sanju- Sorry, sorrry woh matlab na tho hamara!

Sid- Arrey sanjana tum kyun sorry bol rahi ho, yeh toh tumhari inncocence hai 😍😍

Sanjana gives a disinterested look 😒 (yaar kuch toh rehem karlo sid par 🥺)

Karan- Tum dono ka ho gaya??

Mrs. Batra and Col. Batra too get to know about everything and reach there.

Mrs. Batra- Bichari thik toh haina? Andar kahin woh koi galat kadam toh nahi utha rahi na! 😨 bechari umar hi kya hai?😢 Abhi toh meri choti behen jaisi hai woh 💔🤷‍♀️

**Everybody stares her in shock, other than Col. Batra who was used to this by now 😂**

Col. Batra- Aap kuch zyada hi CID nahi dekh rahin? Uske asar dikhayi pad rahe hein! 😑

Mrs. Batra- Arrey ab mein ek army office ki biwi hoon, CID dekhna ko bohot essential hai!

Col. Batra mutters to himself- Kahan phaasa diya khud ko meine?

Mrs. Batra- Kuch kaha apne?

Col. Batra- Nahi! Bilkul Nahi!

Karan breaks the door in tension!

Monami was sitting idle on the bed blankly looking at the wall in front of her.

Sanju goes near Monami, Monami?

Monami- looks at her with teary eyes

Sanjana could very well feel how Monami was feeling.

Everyone left (Karan stayed since everyone wanted him to stay, I mean he too wanted to stay but he stood outside the room giving the girls their time they wanted)

Sanjana- Monami, na sab thik ho?

Monami- tumhe kya lagta hai?

Sanjana- Monami, mein tumhari feelings samjhti hoon. Mare bapu bhi humri shaadi kisi kundan se karwana chahto hain.

Monami- wahi toh! Dekha, ladkiyan itni weak kyun hoti hain? hum apne hi future ke liye fight nahi kar sakte? (Accha guys listen, yeh abhi jo bhi bol rahi hai woh abhi uske saath jo huya isiliye bol rahi hai, remeber girls are very strong, please debate mat karna yahan par 🙏✍😁)

Sanjana- Aisa na ho Monami, hum ladkiyan toh bohot strong hain! Tabhi toh pariwar ki khushiyan dekhti ho, puri duniya ke nazriye (opninion) ke khilaaf jakar bade bade kaam karke dikhati ho!

Monami- Hmm tum sahi toh keh rahi ho par...

Sanjana thought that it was the time the Karan enters the convo. So she exits and Karan enters.

Karan- Thik hain aap Rani Sahiba?

Monami- Hmm, tum aye kyun nahi the?

Karan- Aya toh! Aapko bachaya bhi mene hi hai rani sahiba!

Monami- Tab nahi, usse pehle kyun nahi aye?

Karan- Kyunki Apne mujhe galat adress diya tha. Apne bola Sunshine Cafe jo yahab se 30 minutes door hai par actually apko bulaya tha Sunrise Cafe mein.

Monami- Ohh! Sorry.

Monami still wasn't emotionally stable but didn't want to talk about the incident either.
Karan understanding her decided to let her rest. He told her to sleep and that dinner would be served in the room itself.

Monami slept.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#5

Wonderful ✨😍 os

Loved it dear

Keep writing ✍️📝

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Totally interesting!

Ye kya! Monami ne galat address bol diya

Thank god karan reached sunrise cafe eventually 😆

Kya hungama kiya sab ne mil kar

Ab karan monami ko sambhalega 💪🏼💪🏼

I really enjoyed reading it!

can't wait to read more!!

Excited 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Excellent writing - can visualise the secnes and the actors saying the dialogues in my head

Superb! Kindly continue 😊👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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🤣maza aa gaya tumhara fight scene dekh ke..i mean padh ke🤣

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