The "Storyline" That's Needs To Work Upon : ZDMN - Page 4

I might be in the super minority here because I have almost no issues with the pacing of the show. There have been many a times I've had to check if the episode is really only 22mins or longer because they are giving so much in such a short span of time. The only time I really wanted to fast-track was the Bhoot track. That got boring fast because it's been done way too many times. But apart from that, the show seems to be going great, IMO.

There are so many subtleties/layers that they're trying to convey here, that too without leaving too much space to read between the lines so that the most of the audience is on the same page, that I think they need this speed.

Also, balancing so many characters requires it, otherwise we would only get the main 6 people and nothing else, which frankly would be a shame because it helps bring nuance to the 6 characters. The only thing that I think they can increase is Aditya's screen space but then, I guess, he is not essential to this track yet and tbh, this is actually making his role more intriguing for me.

Originally posted by: aquaHP

I might be in the super minority here because I have almost no issues with the pacing of the show. There have been many a times I've had to check if the episode is really only 22mins or longer because they are giving so much in such a short span of time. The only time I really wanted to fast-track was the Bhoot track. That got boring fast because it's been done way too many times. But apart from that, the show seems to be going great, IMO.

There are so many subtleties/layers that they're trying to convey here, that too without leaving too much space to read between the lines so that the most of the audience is on the same page, that I think they need this speed.

Also, balancing so many characters requires it, otherwise we would only get the main 6 people and nothing else, which frankly would be a shame because it helps bring nuance to the 6 characters. The only thing that I think they can increase is Aditya's screen space but then, I guess, he is not essential to this track and this is making his role more intriguing for me.

Being in minority isn't a problem as long as we state our points clearly, respectfully so I am glad you stated your views here beautifully 🤗 Who is Aditya? Koel's son is Nikhil right?

Bhoot part was boring. Cat fight was boring but you are right about nuances plus if you notice there were many symbolisms, foreshadowing which I really liked 👏

Mujhe sirf training dedo bas

I don't want anything if the makers can give me training scenes🤔

Baki romance and other stuff woh FFs main waise bhi better hota hai 😂

And pls I am done with Karan Monami for now I need some focus over Koel, Faizi etc 🤦🏻‍♀️

And not the bhoot nonsense

And I agree Kunal's an amazing actor but why the hell aren't makers understanding this🤔

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Being in minority isn't a problem as long as we state our points clearly, respectfully so I am glad you stated your views here beautifully 🤗 Who is Aditya? Koel's son is Nikhil right?

Bhoot part was boring. Cat fight was boring but you are right about nuances plus if you notice there were many symbolisms, foreshadowing which I really liked 👏

@green: You're right! Thank you!

Aditya is the name of the actor playing Faizi.

Yes! And I also like that the supporting characters aren't showpieces or that their sole point of existence is to help the main characters. They've been given a backstory as well which in turn helps set the stage.

Originally posted by: Amphitrite

Mujhe sirf training dedo bas

I don't want anything if the makers can give me training scenes🤔

Training se show kaise chalta hai pls learn from lrl and also k show dots/usa shows. Kitne conflict chances hai udhar.

Sumanji struggling and breaking down

Koel doing fav and all are impressed and she's getting strength from that internally

Monu thinking her mom went through that and remembering her and some fb clips

Prem being like I am too pampered and maybe quit midway

Bala trying to take shortcut but also appreciating this is chance he's getting to make his life.

Hashtag girl coming out of her insta show and seeing around the danger

Baki romance and other stuff woh FFs main waise bhi better hota hai 😂

We probably need to cone out of FF cause usse expectations barta hai and no show gives that.

And pls I am done with Karan Monami for now I need some focus over Koel, Faizi etc 🤦🏻‍♀️

Lol if only they focused on them properly

And not the bhoot nonsense

And I agree Kunal's an amazing actor but why the hell aren't makers understanding this🤔

Cause unko ek bande se fursat nhi hai how they wil show sid. Sid can be best character and honestly o started for monu and sid monu. Ab to aise kr rhe hai they are toxic for each other...bas ek character and uske relationship sahi hai rest sab bakwas.

Ja bey🤢

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Seems like IPL is affecting SAB a little extra, TMKOC TRP is the basic proof of that and considering the drop of TMKOC I think ZDMN is still doing better BUT

Sunshine needs to work on the STORYLINE. Honestly they needs to work on developing bond between the couples now because

• To be honest the typical misunderstanding about girlfriend (Read Baby) between MoRan (KarMi) is very cliche. They needs to build up the understanding between Karan-Monami, they needs to show MoRan sometimes agreeing to disagree & sometimes understanding each other.
• The cat fight between Koel-Suman Ji is getting repetitive, yup they aren't very fond of each other we got that now move on. 😵
• SidSa has a lot of potential, Sid needs to know about Kundan Ji asap, Sid needs outdoor training where he can witness the "Village life" Sanju talks about.
• KoeZi needs to get over the bhoot bulshitt asap. Wait, they needs screen space too. 🤔

Most importantly, Dilbag Ji should try something else other than Biryani... Itni Biryani khilayenge tho pet kharab ho jayega sabka 😳

Thanks for reading 😳

i think these days they r focusing more on the frndship bond rather thn couple bond .......... karmi hardly get a scene together in the entire epi.

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Mere babies ko JuJu nehi bolne kaaaa 😭 😆 Chal jhooti you have high hopes on MoRan too 🤣

Nahi, only Karan..

Pichhle EDT me ho gaya.. unshippable mor-n

Originally posted by: Amphitrite

Mujhe sirf training dedo bas

I don't want anything if the makers can give me training scenes🤔

Baki romance and other stuff woh FFs main waise bhi better hota hai 😂

And pls I am done with Karan Monami for now I need some focus over Koel, Faizi etc 🤦🏻‍♀️

And not the bhoot nonsense

And I agree Kunal's an amazing actor but why the hell aren't makers understanding this🤔

Sunshine knows the potential of KUNAL as an actor so I trust them with Kunal Baki they needs to make it a little bit like a mixture of MJHT & LRL.

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Nahi, only Karan..

Pichhle EDT me ho gaya.. unshippable mor-n

Kyun? Ladki flawed hai but Karan Ki RANI SAHEBA Hai 😳

Originally posted by: mineforever

I like SidSa but MoRan thoda zyaada.

Sid has a loooooong way to go. His journey will be interesting to watch. Kunal is phenomenal.

I like watching their scenes but loop mode main MoRan hi rehte hai.

Koel-Faizi toh are going nowhere. Bechari abhi bhi room nahi le paayi hai.😁

Irony would be that she will get a separate room and then end up getting paired with Suman as a partner if Karan decides to follow Baby's advice.😁

Love MoRan slightly more than SidSa!! Shaleen and Kunal are my fave actors.

Sanju/Monami are good characters. Interesting to watch.

The maker’s need to focus on Koel’s characterization. For someone running from abuse,, I can’t bring myself to sympathize with her. It’s her character. It needs work.

I also agree, this fiasco is finally going to re-unite the cadets and they’ll come out stronger. It’s a learning curve for them all.