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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Mhrwsaishi

So amazing 😍❤ amma praising pallavi even though she is angry with her is so cute, definitely she is one of the best itv saas who treat her like her own daughter. Loved laxmi singh dialogue ki duniya jiske samne jhukta hai vo pallavi ke samne juka hai 😍 and pallavi's ips section 😂 she is really a quuen ❤ so so good

I am actually rewatching from the beginning and Raghav was saying this about Pallavi that only she has the courage to question him while everyone else bows down in front of him. Usse yeh dialogue banadia😆

I am kinda hoping Pallavi's educational qualification is explored more in the show. Since she is so obsessed with law, it would be great if she is shown as a Lawyer or something. Isi umeed mein apne harr write-up mein Pallu ke dialogues mein IPC sections add karti hoon😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: nooriex

when i first saw the title i thought it was about SaiShi ngl because Shivangi is called the lakshmi of set and Rao is well from SKR of course 😆 but loved this oneshot so much!!!

Seeing Pallu give it back to the police officer and Raghav not be mad at his Pals baby anymore (or rather not ignoring her, still getting amused by her, etc.) was so nice ❤️

Are you a shipper as well?😆

Anger-vanger sab bhool bhool hone wala hain. Do read the last part to know more😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Where it is posted?? 😭

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Arre Aapne toh kamaal hi kardiya Prez ji....This was like so in sync with the Episode😳


I love how the continuations you give us are something that we all can imagine & written with such finesse. That kamarbandh scene becomes one of my favourite now☺️


And Pallavi's firm dialogue session with the ACP was exactly her👏

Kya kare show mein itne achche achche scenes aise abruptly khatam kardete hain ki matter ko apne haathon mein leke khudke aur forum waalon ke liye khud scene likhne padhte hain😆 Most of my write-ups are continuations of episodes or "scene sudharo abhyaan" types kuch🤣

Glad to know you enjoyed it🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phoenix_Fire123

Thanks for tag 🤗

Umm idk how but you just sneak into the writing team of the show somehow okay?😳

Ps: Imagine you'll be able to witness saishi performing live😎

Love how effortlessly you infuse romance in the plot and keep the balance intact ❤

I am seriously looking for the contact details of the PH. Miljaye toh abhi writer banne ke liye apply kardu main

Hayee....watching SaiShi live will be such a dream come true! Socho kitne theories bana paungi phir😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

Dil khush kar diya Ms.Prez aapne toh❤️❤️🤗 Jo hum show mein dekhne ko nahi mila uski kaami yaahan puri kar li❤️ awesome. This is a very nice OS🤗

She said and made an exit like the queen she was. 😎 ❤️ Yeah she is and this is my sabse favorite line.

Manna padega... Made for each other lagte hain aap dono.

However, he was beaten to the unsaid race by his wife and she was surprisingly depicting the same anger as him. She was truly his equal.❤️❤️

Ah, I loved these lines.

Raghav is missing a chance to devour yummy deliciousness😒Uski loss. Bandaar jaane adraak ka swadd

A very big thank you for tagging me.❤️

Vera🤗 Janke achcha laga ki tumhe pasand aya!

Waise mujhe nahi lagta innse kuch hone wala hain🤔 Amma Rao ko apne bete-bahu se pota-poti nahi milne wale iss janam mein. Either she adopts Farhad and gets him married to Amruta, nahi toh sab Keerti ke bharose🤢

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: MsPrez

Arreh kuch din pehle bhi toh ek likkha tha😲 Have added the links at the end, padh lena if you missed any😆

Don't forget to read the last part of this one😳

Last part kaha hai did i miss it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: MsPrez

Arreh meri favorite writer🤗 Thank you❤️

Wah! Kya baat boli hain👏 Amma usski Ibaadat aur Pallu usski Mohabbat


Me! 😳😳😳 ur favorite writer? ☺️

Okayyy.. imma blushing.. thanks

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: masin

Janam, dekh lo, mit gayi duriyaaan

Main yahan hoon, yahan hoon, yahan hoon, yahaan 🤗


Job aaj kal bohat hectic chal rahi hai issi liye I'm MIA with comments. During my 9-5 is when it's easiest for me to open IF in another tab, toh ab koi aur solution dhoondna parega warna bohat jald mujhe tags milna bandh hojayenge!


Khair... so as I mentioned, I've been reading this every morning. It gives me the perfect amount of early morning warm and fuzzies, brings an instant smile on my face. Every time I read it, I feel sad ke itna chota piece kyun hai because the impact is SO huge! Both Raghav and Pallavi got their due in this piece - you gave equal attention to their angst and frustration and their inability to resist each other. Bandi irritated hai, phir bhi apne Ghamandi Rao ki help ko mana nahi kar rahi. Banda naraaz hai, phir bhi apni Saree Ka Dukaan ko dekh ke smirk kar raha hai. Jab ek dusre se duur reh hi nahi sakte, toh koshish hi kyun karte hain?! 😵


I love how you picked up on the Raos' anger - Amma and Raghav love her too much to deny her of anything, whether it's their admiration or celebrating her favourite festival.


The kamarbandh was the sweetest catalyst to bring them physically closer. I think a lot of times when couples go through a bout of misunderstandings and arguments, all it takes is a slight touch to soothe your ghussa and think/speak thande dimaag se. Besides, Pallavi looked absolutely gorgeous that day, there's no way Raghav could've willingly kept his hands off. The way I see it, he needed an excuse and he took it as soon as an opportunity presented itself. I'm somewhat glad show mein yeh nahi dikhaya, screen pe aag lag jaati aur main filhaal ek naya TV afford nahi kar sakti! ☺️


Mrs. Rao's dumdaar jawab to ACP Singh was epic in every sense of the word! Bechari is so frustrated at everyone trying to corner her husband, uper se said husband bhi ghaas nahi daal raha hai, aur phir jo mushkil se dou minute mile the Raghav ke saath, uss mein bhi koi tapak parra. Bohat acha kiya suna diya! 👏


Please write a second part... I can see this going in multiple different directions. A little bit of remaining ghussa (I adore angsty Raghav and frustrated Pallavi) with lots and lots of PyaaR. 😉


P.S. Tumhe kya laga, akeli tum hi born smart ho?! 😎

Akhir tum agayi🤗

Jiss raftaar se AT jaa raha hain ajkal up-to-date rehna sach mein mushkil ho raha hain😆

Inn do clowns ke sath karma horaha hain. Shaadi se pehle bohot badi badi baat bole the na ki "haath nahi launga" "honeymoon nahi leke jaunga"...ab bhukto! Gadhe kahike😡

PyaaR toh is only reserved for our Tazbus na😆 RaghVi toh pyaar karte hain aur sabke samne bolne se darrte bhi nahi, they're not like SaiShi😛


Chalo, sabko reply karna hogaya. Time to post the last part🥳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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| PART-1 |

| PART-2 |

Cue: 16th Sept's episode, excluding the hallway argument of RaghVi

Pallavi is still in the Telugu attire and has successfully patched up with Jaya. On the other hand, Raghav has just left without having breakfast after Jaya asked him if he wanted to say anything to Pallavi.

"Ghamandi Rao!" Pallavi mumbled, glaring at Raghav's retreating figure.

"Sahi bola tum," Amma said, chuckling.

Pallavi didn't want anyone, especially Jaya, to hear that. "Amma, vo..."

"Mera beta ko chhodo, woh toh hain hi sadu. Mereko bohot bhookh laga hain, chalo hum nashta karte hain."

Pallavi smiled at her MIL and started having breakfast with her, mentally making a note to later check on her puffer fish of a husband.


After a while, she was headed towards her room to change. She stopped right outside the door when she heard some music coming from inside. It sounded similar, she has heard the tune before.

"Main bahar kyun khadi hoon? Ab yeh mera bhi kamra hain," Pallavi reminded herself before entering the bedroom.

The sight in front of her was a clear answer to why she knew the tune. She has witnessed this once before, Raghav Rao performing Bharatnatyam. This was his way of subsidising his raging anger. She smiled as the previous memory of watching him perform this beautiful art form flashed in front of her eyes.

While she stood by the door, admiring her handsome husband and his brilliant skill, he seemed to be unaffected by her presence. The undivided concentration he gives while doind something was just one of the many qualitied she admired about him.

She got an idea and went to stand on the opposite side of the room. She started out by tapping her foot lightly but then began performing Kathak.

Raghav Rao, the fire. Pallavi, the water. Like the opposing elements, their art forms were different as well. But like the opposing art forms were brought together in the same room by the common music, Raghav & Pallavi were brought together by love.

Raghav was concluded his performance, panted in exhaustion. The same way Pallavi was admiring him dance before, this time he stood frozen in awe of her gracefulness. She could be doing anything but he would never get tired of watching her.

Unknowingly, while spinning Pallavi had crossed her side of the room and came to the other side. Her back collided into his bare chest and he engulfed her completely by wrapping his arms around her. No matter how hard they try to stay apart, their hearts will always guide them towards each other.

Inhaling the fragnance of the gajra, he let out a deep sigh. "Pallavi..." He huskily whispered in her ear and nuzzled into her neck.

She had leaned her head backwards and rested on his shoulder. "Hmm..." With eyes closed, she was definitely enjoying the feeling.

"Tumko pata hain na ki main tumse gussa hain?" It was evident from his tone that he was struggling to keep up the facade of being angry with her.

That one line brought her back to reality. Her eyes shot open and she quickly stepped out of his embrace, turned around to face him. He grunted at the lack of her in his arms.

Kya kaha tumne? Gussa? Tum mujhpe gussa ho? Achchha….” She crossed her arms over her chest, nose flaring in anger. “Zara batao toh kis baat pe gussa hain aap, Mr. Rao?"

That was a question but Pallavi didn't let him answer it, she answered it herself. "Haan! Yaad aya... Bhaag ke shaadi kisne ki? Keerti ne. Keerti behen kiski? Tumhari. Ussne kise room mein lock kiya? Mujhe. Lekin gussa tum mujh pe aise ho rahe ho jaise ki usske shaadi ki pandit main hi thi, maine hi usske phere karaye, maine hi usske gali mein mangalsutra dalvaya, maine hi usski shaadi karayi." She mocked. "Tumhare unjustified gusse ko zara sa importance kya de diya tum toh mere sar pe chad ke tandav karne lage!"

"Toh kisne kaha importance dene ko? Matt do na." He answered in annoyance.

"Sahi kaha tumne! Lekin ab kya karu? Pyaar kiya hain tumse, aise tumhari chuppi bardasht nahi hoti. Iss liye importance dena padh raha hain. Ab lag raha hain ki tumne mujhse kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi. Tum itne din tak gussa nahi rehte agar main thodi si bhi important hoti tumhare liye. You just don't...."

Her lecture ka dukan was abruptly shut down when he pulled her towards him, making her crash into him.

"Chup! Bohot bakwas karlia tumne. Tumne socha bhi kaise ki tum mere liye important nahi hain, Pallavi?" His voice was soft, almost like a whisper.

"Toh phir itna gussa kis baat ka, Raghav?" Devoid of anger, her voice was so gentle.

"Okay, I agree mera gussa unjustified tha. I can't help it. Mereko jab gussa aata hain toh sahi-galat kuch samajhich nahi aata." He sighed. "I am s..."

"Sshh! Maine bhi bohot galtiya kari hain lekin you never expected apologies from me. Tum meri baat samajh gaye, that's more than enough for me." She rested her head on his shoulder and wrapped her arms around his torso in a tight hug.

It felt as if a huge weight was lifted off of their shoulders. All the muscles of their bodies seemed to relax after being tensed for so long. They stayed in the embrace in silence, just listening to each other's heartbeat until he decided to break the silence.

"Telugu ammai."

She looked up at him in confusion, "Kya?"

"Tumne puchha tha na ki kaisa dikh raha hain tum. Wahi bola. You look like a Telugu girl."

"Sach mein?" She smiled and her eyes twinkled like a happy baby.

"Nahi, main toh jhooth bol raha tha."

That earned him a smack on the chest but he laughed it off.

"Dh...dhan...ya... Dhanyavādālu!"

"Wow, Pallavi, not bad!"

"Na...pe..." She tried remembering the exact words, "Haan! Na peru Pallavi Raghav Rao." She said with her brightest smile.

This time he was dumbfounded.

"Nēnu ninnu prēmistunnānu, Pallavi Raghav Rao."

"Huh...what?" All she understood was her name. "Meri Telugu...konchum konchum."

She made a puppy face at which he chuckled.

"Veda manus!"

Then she also joined in his laughter riot and rested her head back on his shoulder.


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English translations:

Telugu ammai (Telegu) = Telugu girl

Dhanyavādālu (Telegu) = Thank you

Na peru Pallavi Raghav Rao (Telegu) = My name is Pallavi Raghav Rao

Nēnu ninnu prēmistunnānu (Telegu) = I love you

Konchum konchum (Telegu) = Little little

Veda manus (Marathi) = Crazy person


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The End....🥳

Hope y'all enjoyed this!smiley31

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Other MHRW works:

FF: All Over Again

TS: Roaring Love

OS: Never Say Never

OS: Raat Khatam, Baat Khatam

Drabble: The Luncheon

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