OS - Disturbance - Page 4

Originally posted by: Fazzzz

Imagine if we had got such a scene.

Thank you for liking and commenting.🤗

Ha ha...Kaash milta but ab chodo....

Sri your right can’t get enough 🥰

Hey dear

This is amazing...iske baad suicide attempt kare woh...she is saved...fir she realizes that she has no place here and leaves ...

Your way of writing is so natural dear...im fan of it

Do continue please

Originally posted by: Jaspreet96

Hey dear

This is amazing...iske baad suicide attempt kare woh...she is saved...fir she realizes that she has no place here and leaves ...

Your way of writing is so natural dear...im fan of it

Do continue please

Thank you! 🤗

I don't think I'll continue this specifically but I might do more OS's.

Yo how is this not a mature thread😆

She wormed her way into his heart and she would stay there until his death. This line is just love, beautifully written.

Sakshi: 'Then who am I?'

bit*h you nobody now get lost😡

My reaction was a haha only because she left closing the door behind so they can continue. We're always talking on the forum how PurVir never close doors 😆

Lovely story, if only it really happened this way.

Originally posted by: x-Nahima-x

Yo how is this not a mature thread😆

She wormed her way into his heart and she would stay there until his death. This line is just love, beautifully written.

Sakshi: 'Then who am I?'

bit*h you nobody now get lost😡

My reaction was a haha only because she left closing the door behind so they can continue. We're always talking on the forum how PurVir never close doors 😆

Lovely story, if only it really happened this way.

I didn't mark it as mature as it didn't go beyond kissing or should I make it mature?🤔

Even I wish it had happened this way.😂

Originally posted by: Fazzzz

I didn't mark it as mature as it didn't go beyond kissing or should I make it mature?🤔

Even I wish it had happened this way.😂

even i don't know what's considered mature and not mature content anymore 😆

I liked the situation you had and you made Vir speak up but i would have liked to see more Sherni Purvi

We haven't seen Sherni Purvi in the show for so long i'm missing her

and all the stories i have read so far no ones seems to have written her like that

Sayali even in her stories i would like to see Sherni in the bedroom

Waiting for one of you lovely writers to consider a Sherni version of Purvi in your stories

Hey fazzz, i ll read it later and reply❤️

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

Hey fazzz, i ll read it later and reply❤️

Take your time.