To fit in- A Shivi SS(Part 4 page 14)completed - Page 12

Toh abhi badal kyun rahi thi mere liye. Tera naam Raavi hai matlab nadi. Paani nahi hai ki jaha jayegi khud ko dhaal degi. Nadi hai jo apna rasta khud banati hai. Maine tujhe kaha tha pehle bhi ki asal dost woh hote hai jinhe aap waise pasand aaye jaise aap ho."

Wow👏👏

Loved it!

They were so cute while confessing

Krish hahaha too cute and scandalized

Do write more, Please

Omg it was so beautiful 😍

I loved their confession part in the last part when krish comes

It was so romantic to be honest 😻

The ending was super se bhi upar 😘😘

Chikki!!!!! That was such a wonderful ending..... I loved how you expressed Shiva's fear when she runs into the bedroom so much, and his anger on his mother and his bhabhi is so true to Shiva.... He is finally looking at them without the screen of his love in place🤭. ...

Loved the Shivi conversation, and that final part with Krish was like the cherry on top of the cake (chocolate 🍫 cos that's my favorite😍).....

Can we get an epilogue to this, pretty, pretty please 🥺....

Chiki.. beautiful ending! I loved how Shiva understood all of Raavi's concerns and fears and properly addressed them ❤️

Raavi willing to change for Shiva and him stopping her from doing so was all hearts

They decided to communicate all their issues with each other in future 👏

And finally a super cute confessions with emojis in their own style!

I loved it! 🤗

Outstanding 😍😍😍 loved it ❤️❤️

Beautiful ending ❤️💞

Finally Shivi cleared their mus😊

Raavi's confession in the end was unique❤️💞

Loved Shivi's romance ❤️

krish🤣18+ scene and shiva raat ko continue karte hai🤣😳☺️

their communication solved everything....its so important to talk.....

both loved and yearned for each other

raavi's confession was cute

Hey, read all the parts in one go!

Lovely amazing story, you’ve captures their emotions and feelings so well!
Raavi behaving differently made Shiva realize how she might have felt when he did the same!
loved the ending, communication is always the key to a good relationship ❤️

Do write more 😊

Big hug 🤗

Chikki!!! This was amazing!! Not sure if I commented earlier but. I loved this.. The young shiva and raavi banter, the change in her that he disliked, Rishita being supportive in the end... Everything... You're such a talented writer!! Please do keep writing more!!!