Shivi OS || Let us walk (together) || Fix - it - Page 4

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

This is absolutely breathtaking! It's so impactful, I felt each and every emotion. Wonderfully written! This is what I wanted from the show...❤️

Not you saying this!! Have read your work too, absolutely amazing so this means so much. At this point, we all want them to just talk please. Thank you so so much!!

Originally posted by: mishthidoi

This is so good... This is the best pov of Shiva & Raavi I've ever ready... And this is so good and heart warming

Thank youu 🥺❤️

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Amazing 💯❤

Thank you so muchh!! ❤️ y'all are so sweet.

Originally posted by: Coveter_Sy

Beautiful 😍😍😍😍

Thank you!!! <3

Originally posted by: Foxii

WoW what a journey ❤️

So many emotions were described and the outcome was just so adorable

🥺 Thank you for reading and liking!! ❤️

Originally posted by: Coleus

Beautifully written🧡

Means a lot! Thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: NephilimByHeart

Wow... This was beautiful...these two had so much potential... Ps writers ne sara kharab kar diya....

Haina?? All we need is one good pov. This is why I've been so miffed because the potential they have set up is insane only for them to do nothing about it 😞

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

let me start by saying its heart warming, deep and beautiful......they way the PS should have dealt with this issue.....nothing OTT.....just their introspection, realization and understanding where they went wrong.......how to deal with it maturely and not to hurt the other person......

realizing their feelings, acknowledging it.....and working on seeking forgiveness and achieving their relationship back.......

in anger and ego generally people just cut off relations but the hurt and sadness that lingers is unbearable.......the EMPTINESS (i loved the usage) people feel is so palpable.......people around dem move on with lives but concerned people sometimes get stuck in that loop.....

m glad they had this conversation......he always got her back, he was always there she realized it..........she made efforts, understood what he wants to hear and how to trigger his reaction.........smart raavi i would say....

i am sorry i was going to comment yesterday coz i was so overwhelmed after reading it......i should have commented yesterday but was held up in many things and what i felt yesterday isnt same as what i have written.......

but please be assured that this has touched my heart.......as a writer you have done a phenomenal job

Hello, wanted to reply to this very comment properly. Sorry it took me long as well.

Please don't apologise. Thank you for taking out the time and commenting regardless. It means the world and more to me. The last part of the comment touched my heart. That's all I ever wanted, so glad it touched your heart!!

The introspection is the entire reason why I wanted to write it. The show has way too many characters and storylines to give the characters the space and time to think. And it's a bummer because the show has established Shiva Raavi's bond since the very beginning so the potential to explore here is massive.

They know how to deal with one another, they've always been around one another. Empty is what I think? their life will be without each other because these two idiots never even realised that their lives revolved around each other. And they trigger each other a lot so it gets unleashed in more ways than one.

Thank you again for reading!! Love this take oh so much. Pretty sure the makers do not think of this at all, and so we have to get to work for our own sanity lmaoo

So, so glad you liked it!! Thank you so much. Would love to hear more from you :)))

This was beautiful! I loved reading this

Their journey from separation to union, and the heart warming conversations they had were wonderfully penned down ❤️

Originally posted by: HooriAsadMalik

So beautifully written 😍😍😍

"I had a whole idea in my head of this developing further where they grow together and then finally are in love. From friends, to more and then husband wife. Wanted bike rides with her hand on his shoulder :( But alas." please turn this piece into SS/FF and do continue it further... would love to read how the story develops and they come close step by step

I do actually have an idea!! It's why the stages stopped right at 'Friends' because I had things like confidant, husband wife planned because I wanted Shiva to talk about his experience too eventually? Just didn't seem in character to me for him to vent down in the very first go.

But it takes too long and I'm still not sure of the motivation. The bike scene in my head, or him letting her sit and she keeping the hand on his shoulder is what triggered this all in the first place lmaoo I still tried to keep this full circle but if motivation hits, I'll definitely try to finish this one!! <3

Thank you for reading and appreciating, oh so much :))