Shivi OS || Let us walk (together) || Fix - it - Page 3

Originally posted by: navk

Its so mesmerizing

I loved it ❤

Every line and every part was beautiful 😍

Thank you so much!!! ❤️

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

oh my my my this was so beautiful jaan

the progression, the realization, the distance, the closeness - you wrote everything so well

absolutely loved it - please write more!!

not y'all calling me jaan please I will cry 🥺 and you appreciating it? Please. Thank you! So, so glad you liked it. Hopefully the show gives enough motivation in the future. Thank you so much ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Rock_chick06

This is the best OS ihv ever read on #Shivi . Nd when i say this i really mean it. I never usually comment reply to any of posts here, I'm just a silent member here bt this actually made me so overwhelmed that i couldn't stop but appreciating the kind of emotions you brought to this one little piece. Thank u for writing this nd than u for bringing us back to so many fbs nd the conversation they had in past..i really felt evach nd every part of it..!! Hope to see more from your side.. Plz keep writing on Shivi..!! 👍🏼

Ahaaa, this one means so much to me, I really mean it. That was the whole idea. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Made my entire day!!

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

This is soooo good!!!! So beautifully written..... Loved loved, loved it!!!!!

(Participating in bandariya wali uchal khood and winning an Olympic gold for it right now.... )

Thank you so much!! All of us just starving for content at this point. Lelo apna olympic gold!! 😂❤️

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

This was just perfect🥺❤

You just made my morning magical with this piece.I loved it so much❤❤

Everything from beginning to end was just perfect.Can you please be the writer of the show🥺❤

I love you jaan❤

Y'all have to stop calling me jaan because I will most definitely start crying 🥺

You lot are so welcoming please. Thank you so much, this comment means a lot. Glad I made your morning ❤️

I wish anyone of could write for the show please. So much potential oof.

I love you too please. You all are so sweet 🥺❤️

Originally posted by: Kfof

It was so beautiful😊

Loved it❤️❤️

Thank youu ❤️ So happy you did.

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

awwie, thanks 🥺❤️

you just made my day 🥰

& also, helped me one up my guy 😆

because he believes I'm 🥰satan's spawn🥰

anyone could write better than the:

✨absolute trashy-trash✨

being currently served to us 🤦‍♀️

me? writes? beautifully? 🤡

oh honey noooooooo 🤣

I wish I had a twitter account 🤪

you guys look like such a fun lot 🤗

Show this to your guy, you're most definitely not spawn of satan please 😂

And yes, you write beautifully!! And like you said, anyone is better than the writers and we have a whole squad on this side xD You're great at it ❤️

Originally posted by: srix

Show this to your guy, you're most definitely not spawn of satan please 😂

And yes, you write beautifully!! And like you said, anyone is better than the writers and we have a whole squad on this side xD You're great at it ❤️

I showed it to him & he went all pouty 🤣

aw, thank you once again ❤️

you are such a sweetheart 🥰

let me start by saying its heart warming, deep and beautiful......they way the PS should have dealt with this issue.....nothing OTT.....just their introspection, realization and understanding where they went wrong.......how to deal with it maturely and not to hurt the other person......

realizing their feelings, acknowledging it.....and working on seeking forgiveness and achieving their relationship back.......

in anger and ego generally people just cut off relations but the hurt and sadness that lingers is unbearable.......the EMPTINESS (i loved the usage) people feel is so palpable.......people around dem move on with lives but concerned people sometimes get stuck in that loop.....

m glad they had this conversation......he always got her back, he was always there she realized it..........she made efforts, understood what he wants to hear and how to trigger his reaction.........smart raavi i would say....

i am sorry i was going to comment yesterday coz i was so overwhelmed after reading it......i should have commented yesterday but was held up in many things and what i felt yesterday isnt same as what i have written.......

but please be assured that this has touched my heart.......as a writer you have done a phenomenal job

Originally posted by: geethuvasudevan

This is what they need!!

A proper meaningful conversation and some alone time together where they can shed their pretences and be themselves 😍

Haina!! One conversation and the story will start running oof. Without the family involved.