ShiVi OS by Mahi, Chikki, Sandy, and Avi Open to Comments - Page 4

It was superb

Loved it

Lovely story! Enjoyed reading it completely!

Looking forward to reading more!
all of u write so well it did not have any gaps❤️🥰😘

It was truly amazing. I loved the story and how all of you have written.

Amazomg writers....loved it😊❤️🤗

My dearies, you all know how I feel about this❤️

This forum I tell you has the most creative writers I have ever seen.

Now running to read the next one. This time we have Ashu and Sara as well.

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

With the conclusion of the thread, I have finally opened the story up to comments! Hope you all enjoyed the experience!

Maahi, Sandy, Chikki, and I will be doing another OS story, this time with Sara and Ashu joining us!

Story will be posted soon ❤️

I loved it you guys 🥺❤️

y'all are the best, I hope I can match up :))

Finally I can comment😍😍

This was soo soo beautiful.❣️❣️

What a creative way to explore the depth of shivi dynamics ❣️

Shivi's childhood connection has always been my weakness.the way you guys have explored it keeping the essence of shivi intact is beyond beautiful.

This is exactly how I picture them growing up.shiva silently standing by her, protecting her, teaching a lesson to anyone who dares to mess with her.

Choti raavi caring equally for shiva was a treat to read.she just hadn't realised it.

Their worlds have always been interwined.❣️

And the poems! what do I even say? 👏👏👏

And they ended up on the tree.this was perfect.

❤️

Eagerly looking forward to your next work ❤️

I was dying to comment on this since this started... I reread all the stories from all the amazing writers.... It's awesome 😘😘😘kudos to you all.

This is such an amazing story.. I loved it! The treasure hunt and the way their childhood incidents connected to the clues and to their present was beautiful! ❤️

Maahi, Chiki, Sandy and Avi.. amazing job! 👏

This was magical

Loooooooved it🧡🖤🧡

The way treasure hunt brought back their memories..it was beautiful🌸

You guys are amaaaaazing..writing something like this when you don't know what the other one is upto and creating this magical story..kudos to you all

I read this during lunch at work and I swear it was so beautiful, I had tears in my eyes by the time it ended. Shiva’s love is soooooo… soft and pure and true.. aaarrrrggggghhhh.. I can’t take it.

Thank you all of you for such a wonderful piece of writing!