ShiVi OS by Mahi, Chikki, Sandy, and Avi Open to Comments - Page 3

With the conclusion of the thread, I have finally opened the story up to comments! Hope you all enjoyed the experience!

Maahi, Sandy, Chikki, and I will be doing another OS story, this time with Sara and Ashu joining us!

Story will be posted soon ❤️

I'm so proud of us ❤️

We wrote such a beautiful story together, loved it ❤️❤️

Thank you for including me in this wonderful writing journey, Avi, Maahi and Chikkii ❤️ loveeee ❤️

omg its open for comment

i have commented for this one on EDT........pls do check......

1st i bow to u gals

this made me

its beautifully written......years of yearning, standing afar watching your love, loving someone else......must have been so hard and 🥺.......thinking that your love will remain unrequited

shiva

i feel for him but den he changed the whole scenario.......

he asked for one day and he made her relive her entire childhood WITH HIM.......where he might be in shadows but now she could clearly see him......

he made her know what's love and what being loved is......she knew how emotionally attached, in love he is.........but he values her opinion and is ready to either wait or respect her denial........

he fulfilled all her wishes.......and treasure hunt......riddles......wow........what a unique way.......this type of love story is for the few lucky ones......i have lots to say coz i loved it that much.....but wont bore u.......u all are way better writers and will understand my feelings

walking down the memory lane, she found a way to her one true love......to have her happily ever after.....and m happy for both

Awhhh I love your view of this story! You described their journey so beautifully. Glad that you enjoyed the story 💜💜

It was amazing. the way you guys took over each update was really nice.

This was so wonderful ❤️I am amazed that despite so many writers, the story was cohesive.

And in true PS style, it took about 2 days to resolve a 10 year old conflict 😆 I loved it 🤣

What do I need to do to get this mischievous planning Shiva back in the show

I loved it ...

Amazing story.....

Yayyyyyyyyy

I love it!!!

We did it guys🖤🤍♾

Loved it..how well you guys made justice to the storyline inspite of having different writing styles❤️

This was so adorable.

Can’t wait for the next OS Fusion