FaRag OS: Those were the best days of my life - Page 3

God VP, this was so beautiful! 🥺❤️ I'm all emotional rn, hopefully in a while I can edit this comment and make it a bit more detailed.

Mere Farag 🤧 Mera Raghav 🤧

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Summer of 69 is the EXACT song I had in mind when I wrote down this title!! I see we don't just share similar favorites, but also music choice!!

Totally understand your situation, don't worry. I shall wait for you to read and unres ❤️

Oh I looooove that sooooong!!!!!

This is so beautiful ❤️. Made me emotional. Raghav ❤️ FaRag❤️

Instead of giving us meaningless tracks makers should have explored FaRag relationship. TRP would have skyrocketed.

This was AMAZING!!👏

I cannot express how much I loved reading this OS in words! Everything was perfect! The way you have portrayed the dynamics of FaRaghVi trio was wonderful!

But of course, the highlight of this OS was the FaRag duo and it was so touching I loved the transition from Raghav's childish antics to the deep reminiscing of their childhood to the chaos that baby Riot Rao announced his arrival with😆 Raghav is definitely going to have a handful 😆

My favourite part, however, was the new light that you have casted on Farhad's character. I have always admired his understanding nature and his ability to stand by Raghav even through the thickest of times. But here, you also showed how he deals with his favourite grown child😆 Farhad has a serious look that even Raghav doesn't want to see the worst of Amazing

Thank you everyone who has taken the time and effort to read, like and comment!

I really get motivated by your responses, so really, THANK YOU!!

I am going to come back and reply soon, just got too tied up with Janmashtmi celebrations today ❤️

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Thank you everyone who has taken the time and effort to read, like and comment!

I really get motivated by your responses, so really, THANK YOU!!

I am going to come back and reply soon, just got too tied up with Janmashtmi celebrations today ❤️

Hey Kiara, I updated my comments. Check them when you can ❤️

Right on it!

Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

Hey Kiara, I updated my comments. Check them when you can ❤️

Hey!!

Rulane ke liye sorry 🤗 Thank you so much for liking it, makes me really happy!!

Raghav is my fab ML from all the ITV shows I've watched (like 2/3). His emotions run deep and it's like the deeper you explore, the more intense he gets. I'd love it if this character was explored even further in the show. He is a total RIOT!!

Writing classes, from me? You flatter me...😆 But I totally appreciate your emotion ❤️

Raghav and Arjun's bond - I wish they explore this in the show when Krishna Rao marks his entry. I believe Arjun was Raghav's favorite.

Thank you dear, I loved reading your comment and I'll try writing more pieces, but first I promise to finish Memento Mori ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

Rula diya mereko... It was beautiful.. I thank you for tagging me.. I got to read this lovely and fab story. Words nahi hai, express karne ke liye, how much I love this story!! This is an absolute fan read🤗

You are super talented and I need writing classs from you, pronto. The way you have expressed Raghav's emotions, I could totally imagine SKR❤️

Farhad and Raghav's bond is beautiful, the love Pallavi has for Raghav. Raghav and Arjun's bond is ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ (yeh bhi kam hai). I loved to see their childhood through your eyes 💕💯.

Please tag me whenever you write something 💜.

Aur bhi add karungi jab I'm able to formulate words 🥰.. abhi I'm just soaking it in..

Hey!!

First of all, thank you so much for taking the time to comment. It's so elaborate, picking up everything that I had intended to drive across while writing this OS.

The first line - Exactly! Raghav lost himself, just like in real life, many of us lose ourselves in the process of meeting our quests, so thank you for picking this!

Bold - Again, you're truly picked the sensitive parts of the story, the one with inner dwellings, which otherwise go unnoticed. Sacrifices for the family never feel like one until many years later, when one walks down the memory lane, only to conclude that those indeed were sacrifices. I often wonder what would happen if people within the family stopped sacrificing...I think that will mark the beginning of collapse.

Arjun is a nice name, it's been suggested by another reader as well and both of you have amazing reasons of naming this child Arjun. I also feel like that should be the name. Raghav will come a full circle then.

Ajita - I googled to find the meaning and I love this name!!

Thank you once again for this feedback! 😊

Originally posted by: BrhannadaArmour

What a beautiful story and careful attention to character. "I miss myself." That really is what Raghav lost when he had to grow up. Well done, Viewpoint!

I liked how Raghav reacted exuberantly to finding the paneer roll from Pallavi, and after a few moments he thought how priceless it is to eat one small piece from the hand of a loved one like Arjun or Kirti.

Raghav's insight rang true for me: looking back, he realizes that he made sacrifices, but in the moment, it was simply something that he loved to do. That's family.

I enjoyed how your version of Farhad thinks about Raghav with humour, not just the concern, pleading, and loyalty that we see on screen.

Everyone already knows that I want Raghav and Pallavi to name their first son Arjun. That name captures Raghav's insecurities and hopes for redemption. If they have a daughter next, she can be Ajita.

Hey!!

I'm so glad you loved it, especially coming from someone who writes SO WELL!!!

I wish we could see more of Raghav and Arjun bonding - I had written an OS called Fallen Guardian just on Arjun and Raghav. That time, I wanted Raghav's diary to act as the catalyst to bringing out this story, but alas! The diary disappeared......makes me sad.

Bold- amazing analysis, so nuanced! Indeed, life goes on......this statement often evokes mixed feelings. Feelings of sadness while happiness tries to swim across and emerge victorious........🤗

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

This made me really emotional, kudos for exploring a topic we may never see on the show. Losing his younger brother must weigh heavily on Raghav especially as we've seen how protective he is of his family.

I liked how you brought it full circle with the birth of Baby Rao, because life does go on despite the loss of loved ones.

Really well done ❤️