FaRag OS: Those were the best days of my life - Page 2

Thank you so much!! 🤗

HAHA Baby Riot Rao, that's exactly how I picture Raghav's baby. A total riot. I love riot babies 😆

Originally posted by: Shri_12

Oh Kiara, I love how soulful your stories are. Loved it. Baby Riot Rao 😆

Hey dear, thank you so much 🤗 I'm glad you liked it and I will definitely tag you going forward ❤️

Originally posted by: Milalal27

This was beautiful written, their bonding was superb. ❤️

Thanx. 🤗

Tag me for your future stories.

Hey,

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I'm happy you liked it 🤗 So did you start the show and then unfollowed or did you just not start watching it? I'm curious 😆

I totally get your point of criticism, it's something I really try to do when writing my stories but somehow I end up writing really long sentences (like right now 😔) but I am going to keep that in mind the next time I pen down my next story, so thank you for being honest ❤️

Originally posted by: ThePurpleMist

This was really good! I don't follow the show but read your one shot and it was beautifully written. I won't be able to give you the character analysis, so please forgive me. ;)

My only criticism would be that at times your sentences are too long. Please try to split them and make them shorter. It's easier to follow what's being said and works better for the writers too. It's okay if your sentences, at times, are even 3-4 words long.

Lovely work, again. 💕 💕

Hey!!

Thanks so much dear, I'm so happy you liked it and sorry for the tears (😔) but I guess that's how we pass emotions from one person to the other, right? Emotional writing is something I thoroughly enjoy, it's like going deep into the psychology of a character in my own way and getting it all out. On tv, it's not possible to see all these emotions because its so fast paced, there's hardly any time to sit down and revel into what just transpired. A good example is how Raghav felt during the brief separation. It was shown in two episodes and actors have that time only to convey everything. When I see it from my perspective, I feel like the characters go through so much, so I sit down and start writing. Writing is a hobby MHRW has reignited. I had stopped writing a few years ago.....

Baby Riot Rao is going to be one mischievous baby, I can already picture his little feet taking the entire mansion by storm while Raghav sits with his head held in his hands 🤣

Arjun - I love this name and I think it fits perfectly! Arjun Raghav Rao ❤️

Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

Thanks for the tag Kiara!!! It was so damn good. I literally had tears in my eyes as I read through this i could almost sense Raghav's emotions surface through the page and into me...

Your dexterity in portraying such beautiful emotions is certainly unsurpassed. I loved it. Farhad was just like I imagine him to be. Cool, composed and unnaturally wise.

Baby riot Rao!!!!! Raghav is soon going to need two therapists!!! 🤣🤣🤣 (last part was hilarious! Reminded me of a fanfic I wrote on a different couple)

Name... hmmm.. Arjun..? After his brother..? Arjun Raghav Rao has a nice ring to it don't you think?

Hey!!

Thank you so much for reading and giving your feedback, which I absolutely loved to read and happier to read that the emotions struck the right chords 🤗

I feel bad for Raghav because I believe Pallavi will give him A LOT of the baby's responsibilities 🤣 Imagine a small Raghav staring back at the adult Raghav, wondering if they're both looking at themselves 😆

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

Oh my godddd

Let me just scream okayy

Baby Riot Rap is hereee

Another mini Raghav. I feel bad for Amma and Pallavi now 😂😂 but jokes aside this was such a great and beautiful read.

From the very start to the point where they discuss how beautiful and memorable one's childhood is to the end. It was a complete package of emotions

Thank you for writing this down.

Hey! Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: shah10

Amazing update

Summer of 69 is the EXACT song I had in mind when I wrote down this title!! I see we don't just share similar favorites, but also music choice!!

Totally understand your situation, don't worry. I shall wait for you to read and unres ❤️

Originally posted by: SRKian

FaRag OS 🥳 Yahoooooo

what a perfect title Summer of 69 ❤️

Res for now...caught up with things rn, unfortunately.😭

Have a few other stories to unres as well😆 but rest assured will defo read it❤️ including the manav's one😳

What a beautiful story and careful attention to character. "I miss myself." That really is what Raghav lost when he had to grow up. Well done, Viewpoint!

I liked how Raghav reacted exuberantly to finding the paneer roll from Pallavi, and after a few moments he thought how priceless it is to eat one small piece from the hand of a loved one like Arjun or Kirti.

Raghav's insight rang true for me: looking back, he realizes that he made sacrifices, but in the moment, it was simply something that he loved to do. That's family.

I enjoyed how your version of Farhad thinks about Raghav with humour, not just the concern, pleading, and loyalty that we see on screen.

Everyone already knows that I want Raghav and Pallavi to name their first son Arjun. That name captures Raghav's insecurities and hopes for redemption. If they have a daughter next, she can be Ajita.

This made me really emotional, kudos for exploring a topic we may never see on the show. Losing his younger brother must weigh heavily on Raghav especially as we've seen how protective he is of his family.

I liked how you brought it full circle with the birth of Baby Rao, because life does go on despite the loss of loved ones.

Really well done ❤️

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Hey,

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I'm happy you liked it 🤗 So did you start the show and then unfollowed or did you just not start watching it? I'm curious 😆

I totally get your point of criticism, it's something I really try to do when writing my stories but somehow I end up writing really long sentences (like right now 😔) but I am going to keep that in mind the next time I pen down my next story, so thank you for being honest ❤️

No, no. I've never seen the show. 😁 I made my account because I watched an old show of Colors and saw some twisted and fukced up comments about the ML from the FL fans (it had mostly ML fans but FL simps were, well..). So I just wanted to give it back to them coz of how hypocritical their comments were. Good for them, though, the forum is locked and I can't reply to the posts. 😏 So I've been going through the forums randomly and saw your one shot.

Haha, it's not a big deal. 💜 I'd love to read from you. Do let me know whenever you write anything else. 🙂