ShiVi SS: You Belong With Me - [Part 6: Pg 16] [Completed:3/9/21] - Page 8

Originally posted by: Fah_huq

Wonderfully written 👏

Thank you Faha 🤗

You know I love your works so coming from you, means a lot to me!❤️

Shyna, this was amazing!!!! I loved, loved, loved this.... I was so scared we'd get a dobi Raavi moment when I realised it was a club scene!! But, I loved the way you wrote this, especially Shiva having her location was such a practical touch to things, so very Shiva.

I get this feeling that Maami has thought the worst of that Shivi moment though.... Overall, I loved it, and Krishu is such a cutie pie!!!! Let the boy witness atleast one Shivi moment, he's their biggest fan!!

💜❤💜

Do update quicker if you can though...

Loved it ❤️

Next update soon plz

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Amazing update!

Shiva and raavi's growing feelings for each other is so heartwarming to read

Typical Raavi being a musibat magnet and Shiva being her protector ❤️

Thank youuu!❤️

@bold- I wasn't sure if I was conveying their feelings appropriately but reading this makes me happy 🤗

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Shyna dear, this chapter stole my heart.

It was amazing. ❤️

I'm loving the pace in which Shiva and Raavi are evolving.

Maami's eavesdropping part cracked me up. 🤣It was hilarious.

Aww thank you!❤️🤗

@bold- I'm so happy you're loving the pace! It was something I wasn't sure about at first but this gives me some reassurance!

Hahahah torturing maami is fun. I'm glad you enjoyed 😆

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Shyna, this was amazing!!!! I loved, loved, loved this.... I was so scared we'd get a dobi Raavi moment when I realised it was a club scene!! But, I loved the way you wrote this, especially Shiva having her location was such a practical touch to things, so very Shiva.

I get this feeling that Maami has thought the worst of that Shivi moment though.... Overall, I loved it, and Krishu is such a cutie pie!!!! Let the boy witness atleast one Shivi moment, he's their biggest fan!!

💜❤💜

Do update quicker if you can though...

Awww thank you Sathya!!❤️ Sorry for the scare but nope, this Raavi isn't so dobi 😆

@bold- I'm so glad you enjoyed that!

Hehe you bet maami's thoughts went to all the wrong places 🤣

@bold2- I know I always say I will but then I end up getting stuck while writing 😆 But I will most definitely try to update phast phast 🤗

Originally posted by: Palak2812

Loved it ❤️

Next update soon plz

Thank youuu 🤗

I will try to update soon ❤️

Omigosh!! I love this! And I love all the "cliches" !!!!

Thank you for a loooong update. We love it!

That being said, God! Can these two be any cuter?❤️😳

Originally posted by: barbieflora

Omigosh!! I love this! And I love all the "cliches" !!!!

Thank you for a loooong update. We love it!

That being said, God! Can these two be any cuter?❤️😳

Thank youuu ❤️ I'm glad you loved the cliches 😆

@bold- maybeeee ☺️

I remember reading the first part and completely forgot to follow up with the updates. Today found sometime to catch up on the rest of the parts, glad I did. I can see the love story unfold in front of me. Raavi has already confessed and now it’s Shiva’s turn, he is hesitating because of his insecurity but Raavi is not letting him go. This is so beautiful to read. Can’t wait for the next part.