I loved reading this comment and I've re-read it like 5 times ❤️
So, thank you, first for such an elaborate feedback!!
I say, yes, I did not write this on the fly. Been thinking of how to shape it up since Saturday (when I started this story).I think when I'm eating, I think when I'm sitting....just think think think 😆
Raghav Rao is a very smart cookie and as much as we don't get to see the extent of his smartness on TV, because ITV has limitations and they must have a FL be the one leading the game, I still feel that Raghav has a really big piece of cake in this show. Love his layered character and love how Sai plays it everyday. I think he gets better, each passing day.
Pallavi is also a smart woman and she always stands her ground, be it with Raghav or Mandar. She is level headed and has a cool mind, unlike Raghav who always goes off at the slightest problem 😆
Bold - I'm glad you noticed it and felt the way you did, because that was the intention. Mandar needs help and he should go to a psychiatrist before it's too late. His family unfortunately see nothing wrong with him, but in real life, it's easy to say when someone is a bit edgy and off and there is no harm in consulting a doc. I ended the story with Mandar in a confinement facility, knowing that crimes cannot be ignored, even if he's not stable. I don't know the exact rules in India but I do know that it always comes with punishment, even if its not in a regular jail.
Thank you again and I look forward to writing more and having more readers like yourself ❤️
Originally posted by: masin
Wowzers! 🥳👏 🥳
Boy, you did Raghav justice and how!?!
Brilliant concept! Something like this couldn't have been written on the fly and the way each chapter seamlessly transitioned to the next goes to show how well you drafted the entire story before putting it in words.
This is the Raghav Rao the show's currently missing. He's witty, sharp, and resourceful. He's also kind and compassionate where required, and equally ruthless where he deems fit. If I ever want someone to know about the Raghav I adore, I'd direct them to this piece. You've played out his character so, so, so well! Each dialogue, each action, it's as if he was doing 100 different things at once and didn't miss the mark on any of them!
Pallavi stood her ground rather well and Farhad's intelligence was finally given its fair share of screen time.
I applaud you for addressing Mandaar's mental health with such dichotomy. I was laughing along at his misery until the very end; that's when my heart went out to him. He's burdened by his crimes and while they cannot be forgiven, he needs help. In fact, he's been in grave need of help all along.
The power of YOUR brains has worked magic - I'll definitely be re-reading this multiple times! ❤️
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