RAGHVI TS : UNTIL I BLEED OUT II DARK II COMPLETED - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shri_12

What a fantastic start 👏

We know what happened to Pallavi, waiting to know what happened to Raghav. Waiting for next update

Thank you ❤

Raghav is in the next part. Most probably will post it by tonight.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

Yay!!!! I love these kind of stories. Please tag me too. Brilliantly executed I must say. Im glad you didn't make Pallavi a complete damsel in distress. That would've been unpalatable. But this one is good! Update soon!

Thank you soo much

Yea not just Pallavi but no female is a damsel in distress anymore ☺😁

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Mysterie_girl

WOAHH!!!

She gave a tough fight before getting caught...hopefully Farhad will take up the hint of something being wrong and the brother duo will be arriving soon


Damn excited for next chapter 😆

Thank you

Pallavi is for sure a fighter and a queen who will never bow down until she's forced to.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Sunaina7

While reading this , I remembered the whirt shirt OS , I was one of those who requested you to write it 🙈

krishna rao has come into the story. The power dynamics between him and Raghav will be something to seen

Hahaha thank you soo much.

I hipe you liked the shirt one, i tried portraying most of the things you wished for.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONIA441

This is Damn Good!!👏


Krishna Rao seems to be making his entry in quite a few solid FFs now. I hope the guy is half as Villainous as you brilliant folks are creating him to be😎


Loved our Fighter Pallavi. She did try to safeguard herself as much as possible. I'm proud of our Girl


I like the detail-oriented parts. From how she gets out of the kitchen to stairs to bedrooms😎


Can't wait to read the next updates 💕

Thank you ❤

Krishna Rao is the major villain for the show but I've just tried to keep his identity intact the way Raghav explained in the episode. Hope it turns out well.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: huchseju

Very nice

Eagerly waiting for the next one

Thank you ❤

Will probably post it by midnight or even before that. A few changes are left in the draft.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Amazing update.

Oh god hope Raghav will come there soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was so engaging, finished it within minutes, enjoying each line! Pallavi fighting back is something I wish to see, Raghav can come later to her rescue. This Krishna Rao seems so menacing, I hope his track starts soon on TV after Mandar exits.

Continue soon and kindly tag me. I lose track of stories I’m reading presently.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow just loved it...amazing thriller

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

THIS WAS HELL INTERESTING!!!

I was like why did it even stop????

Do continue soonish for my sanity or else I would just keep making scenerios in my head about what will happen next!

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