RAGHVI TS : UNTIL I BLEED OUT II DARK II COMPLETED - Page 5

The line

Raghav pallavi rao ka wada hai ❤️

😭😭😭

Took my heart ♥️ ,

it's when a tear drop from my eye .😢😢

Awesome writting

Do update soon.

It was freaking awesome man!!!! I thought it will be dark in terms of revenge but dead itswlf...im speechless👏 Raghav Pallavi Rao ka vada💔 just hit the nail man. Fall in love with your writing again. Update soon

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

THIS WAS SO THRILLING!!!

And sad too, Pallavi died...it made me emotional!!! But the ending with Raghav determined for revenge is amazing specially that Raghav Pallavi Rao!!!

Thank you ❤

Yes that line is my favorite too.

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

This is so sad, I feel like crying, just imagining Raghav holding her lifeless body. I just think that he really cannot live without her. Raghav will truly die if she dies 😭 The last scene reminded me of Mahadevs Rudra roop when Sati self immolated and he took it to himself to destroy the whole world.

Beautifully written! ❤️

Aww thank you soo much ❤

I don't want you to be sad but yes Raghav lives by Pallavi.

Originally posted by: Shri_12

Pallavi died 😲 😭

Yeh tune kya Kiya 😭

Raghav ka shock 🥺

Excellent work of fiction 👏

Ab toh ho gaya 🙈🙈

Btw thank you ❤

Originally posted by: shah10

Omg..very emotional and painful update

Oh god..did Pallavi really died🥺

I am ready to see Raghav became the DON

Thank you ❤

Yes she is actually dead 🥺

Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

Okay. I won't lie. I went half way through it lost my nerve. It was so heart wrenching man. I could feel my tears on the verge of falling. I can't even imagine Raghav's pain at this point.

I kind of thought this would go in a different way but ye toh... omg youkilledpallaviplztellmeshedidn'tdieomygod!!!!

Thank you ❤

I just hope your breathing is normal now. Sorry to have make you go through that.

I had to kill her for the story to work.

Originally posted by: Avneel07

Amazing update.

Thank you ❤

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

OMG SHES DEAD WHAT 😱😱😱😱

Yes unfortunately she's dead 🥺

Originally posted by: Monster08

Amazing just Amazing.

I am trying hard not to cry😭

Please continue.

And update soon.

Thank you ❤

But please don't cry 🥺