To fit in- A Shivi SS(Part 4 page 14)completed - Page 6

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Beautiful updates👏

Read both parts

Shiva and Raavi's pain and longing was beautifully described👏

Thank you so glad you liked it 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: lourel24

MY heart breaks everytime I read how ravi has been treated with no fault of hers but just because she was daughter of mami . Shiva hatred for mami is very right as no one can tolerate how cruelly mami has treated her. saying is true whatever it is, parents bears if their children go in wrong path n same goes with children too.Ravi has always tried to fit despite of how being treated n this time too she has decided to give a last try as she knows shiva won't ever give their relationship a chance.Now if she breaks their will be no going back.loved the update n more excited for next one.

Awww thank you for the detailed comment. Yes I wanted to show this about Raabi. I will try to update soonish 🤗🤗

You have wonderfully penned down Shiva's thought

Waiting to see how Raavi approachs

Update soon Chikki

Originally posted by: Fah_huq

You have wonderfully penned down Shiva's thought

Waiting to see how Raavi approachs

Update soon Chikki

Faha 🤗🤗

Yes I will try to update soonish

Chikki, wauwwww this was amazing. Looking forward to the next chapter 💜💜

wow i so love this raavi

Amaziiiiiing💯💯💯💯💯💯

I love this one ❤❤

Plzzz cont sooooonish

I want to read more🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

oh god these two just talk

I could have typed a whole lot of things but everyone already wrote what I wanted to but Still

HOW COULD YOU JUST LEAVE US HANGING THERE?!?!?!😡

I WANT AN UPDATE !!!!!✊✊✊🔥🔥🔥

BTW LOVED IT❤❤

Ohhh…suspense🤣☺️

Totally looking forward to you your next update.

Keep up the great work, you really do have away with words.💕🥰