RiAnsh Drabble - Red Gown

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Red Gown

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She held her red gown up, and strode anxiously, her eyes scanning the ground. 


It has to be somewhere, right? It can't just vanish into the thin air. A thought of the clip falling down in the sea came in her mind, but she brushed it off. 


If it did, then it's all good. But if it's still in some corner of the cruise, it will be a problem. By no cost she can let someone gets their hands on it. Especially Vansh Raisinghania.


Soon, Riddhima stood in the middle of a busy bar. The metal noise filled the cabin as the bartender was busy in his job. Shades of orange dim lights moving rapidly, made it even more hard to find that little device.

 Several eyes were on her. 

Before one of the businessmen could come, and offer her a drink, someone stood behind the lady in red gown. 


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"Jo dhoond rahi ho, woh mill gaya."

 

came a deep baritone voice from behind her. Sweat beads formed on her forehead as she clutched her gown tight. Her esophagus twisted in a thousand knots. 


Composing herself, she turned around, meeting with a pair of angry eyes. The orbs that held some unknown emotions along with extreme rage.


Her eyes moved down to his fisted hand. When he opened it, she felt all the emotions together. Shock, joy and relief. 


Riddhima's hand automatically reached her earlobe, that felt empty. 



Seeing her anxious face, he asked

"Toh tum yeh nahi dhoond rahi thi?"


Panic rose up all the way through Riddhima's body.


"N-nahi, main yehi dhood rahi thi! Meri earring hi dhoond rahi thi."


With no reply, he reached out for her delicate wrist, holding it, that wasn't really needed. He kept the small shining stud on her palm. 


Quietly thanking him, and her stars, she went away. 


Vansh reached his pocket and took out something. He glared at the hair clip that shone be brightly under the dim lights of the bar. 


"Mujhe pata hai, sweetheart, tum exactly kya dhoond rahi thi."


Vansh Raisinghania isn't such a fool to not know this wasn't only an accessory but something else.


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Posted: 2 years ago
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the smart vansh 

always loved to read him like this

do write more 

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Posted: 2 years ago
#3

Anii hugs lele chalo at least in your story the  clip was found. 🤪

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Posted: 2 years ago
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You should continue this, gurll! Vansh finding that transmitter and Riddhu is still his Sweetheart? That would be something to read! ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Perfect ♥️♥️♥️

Continue this pls 🙏🙏🙏

And waiting for your updates on other stories too 🙏🙏🙏

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Anila this is so beautiful. 

Vrs with baaz ki nazar . ❤️❤️❤️

tu hamesha demands fulfil krti hai . Abhi ek bdi vali hug lele 🤗🤗


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Posted: 2 years ago
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Absolutely amazing loved it so much.

The true VRS.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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VRS ki bazz ki nazar...... finally he noticed what Riddhu was searching for. Amazing one shot with superb amazing twiist.👏🏻👏🏻

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hey Ani!!!🤗

Hope you don't mind me calling you that😊...

Talking about the drabble,you actually brought a great twist in the plot and actually showed Vansh as a mastermind👏...

I really thought about the ways the story might progress ahead after reading the drabble and this proves how convincing your writing skills are that they make the readers think about future plot👏...

I also appreciate the way you ended the drabble as a cliffhanger;providing a good level of excitement for future storyline which has many uncertain options ahead...

To sum up,the drabble has so much potential to turn into a beautiful story👏...

Just loved it❤️...

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavya.M

Freaking awesome❤️👏



Thank you!!🤗❤️