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Posted: 4 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Haaye

Teri bhi defence karti hoon

🖤

Maine toh nahi dekha🤷‍♀️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#82

Lo ji ek aur tweet humare naam

Everybody please take care of ua kids

Nivi did u hear that babes??

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Posted: 4 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Lo ji ek aur tweet humare naam

Everybody please take care of ua kids

Nivi did u heart that babes??

Aur bhi hain! 😡🤡

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun


Yes! 💯


I don't mind Raavi's fashion changing if she gets married (honestly shouldn't happen since a marriage shouldn't change your personality or core character), but I do mind that we aren't getting scenes of her being particular... in the opening scene, we see her putting on lipstick and admiring herself in the mirror... it was this nautanki side that made me fall in love with her!


I so wish to see her sitting in front of the mirror wondering whether she should put on the bubblegum pink lipstick or the rose lipstick (with Shiva in the background being annoyed and muttering how there was a difference since both lipsticks were pink)... they could even have a continuation scene much later where Shiva wipes food from the corner of her mouth and comments how she chose bubblegum pink lipstick instead of the rose lipstick, and this could've prompted an entire conversation where Raavi is thrilled at the idea of making him a makeup guru and he's like, "Leave me out of this!!"


In terms of the small things he notices... I really wish for Raavi's next birthday, Shiva notices all these small things, from the earrings she wears to the nail polish she uses. I want him to gift her a plastic chipkali toy (the usual present) along with a small gift box that has pretty bangles she could wear, her favorite nail polish color, a hair pin... and then there could be a follow up scene when she wears all of these and stares up at him expectantly while he blushes and turns away from her commenting how he wasn't so bad with fashion after all...


They move too fast to worry about the simpler every day moments of life...

Couldn't have said it better❤️

I yearn for such small small moments.

They stay together, share the same room.they must be facing so many situations.

1)I had loved the scene where raavi woke up holding shiva's legs in the morning, they could have continued that.shown this as a habit.

2)Shiva quietly sneaking in dust allergy medicines after she feels unwell due to all the construction going on.

3)Shiva taking a bath everyday after marriage.there could have been a scene where Krish teases him and he just grumpily walks away and raavi sees this and a small smile adores her lips.

4)raavi noticing at the store how fast shiva is in calculations and multi- tasking, noticing his street smartness.noticing his ability to handle people.his physical strength.slowly admiring him ,falling for him.questioning herself how she didn't notice all this while growing up?

5)I loved the make up thing you mentioned.shiva noticing her getting ready, her make up collection.

6) don't they ever fall ill or sick? Simple moments of caring for each other during a fever, headache, flu.

7)shiva helping out a tired raavi at the kitchen in a situation where she has to manage everything alone , as rishita and dhara are out due to some reason.something more detailed than just picking up anaar from the floor.

8)maami is shown poor.pandya family is shown poor.raavi may need something and is hesitant to ask due to the financial constraint.maybe her phone breaks, maybe her favourite jewellery breaks.shiva noticing how she does not spend anything on herself and tries to get her something somehow.

9) isn't raavi Somnath ki sabse sundar ladki? She can be shown to have some aashiqs troubling her, maybe messaging lewd things to her, calling her.she does not share this with anyone, avoids going out, is uncomfortable.shiva can notice her discomfort and do the needed.

10) monologues!

Those are so Very important.

I don't even want to start on the dev-shiva- raavi angle.that can be so much more explored.

Why shivi? Even gaura don't have such small moments.all they do is kiss, hug, flirt and talk about babies when together.

This was longer than what I intended it to be...sryy for the rant .

😅😅

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Posted: 4 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Calm down...

Chill!

Fire burns and destroys

Water gives life

Don’t be the fire

Be the water

Ok Maahi! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Couldn't have said it better❤️

I yearn for such small small moments.

They stay together, share the same room.they must be facing so many situations.

1)I had loved the scene where raavi woke up holding shiva's legs in the morning, they could have continued that.shown this as a habit.

2)Shiva quietly sneaking in dust allergy medicines after she feels unwell due to all the construction going on.

3)Shiva taking a bath everyday after marriage.there could have been a scene where Krish teases him and he just grumpily walks away and raavi sees this and a small smile adores her lips.

4)raavi noticing at the store how fast shiva is in calculations and multi- tasking, noticing his street smartness.noticing his ability to handle people.his physical strength.slowly admiring him ,falling for him.questioning herself how she didn't notice all this while growing up?

5)I loved the make up thing you mentioned.shiva noticing her getting ready, her make up collection.

6) don't they ever fall ill or sick? Simple moments of caring for each other during a fever, headache, flu.

7)shiva helping out a tired raavi at the kitchen in a situation where she has to manage everything alone , as rishita and dhara are out due to some reason.something more detailed than just picking up anaar from the floor.

8)maami is shown poor.pandya family is shown poor.raavi may need something and is hesitant to ask due to the financial constraint.maybe her phone breaks, maybe her favourite jewellery breaks.shiva noticing how she does not spend anything on herself and tries to get her something somehow.

9) isn't raavi Somnath ki sabse sundar ladki? She can be shown to have some aashiqs troubling her, maybe messaging lewd things to her, calling her.she does not share this with anyone, avoids going out, is uncomfortable.shiva can notice her discomfort and do the needed.

10) monologues!

Those are so Very important.

I don't even want to start on the dev-shiva- raavi angle.that can be so much more explored.

Why shivi? Even gaura don't have such small moments.all they do is kiss, hug, flirt and talk about babies when together.

This was longer than what I intended it to be...sryy for the rant .

😅😅


No... this was perfect 👏 This is everything PS should be... these are the tracks the CVs should explore... not stupid parties where dancing happens all the time...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#89


Awww that panda is so cute

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Posted: 4 years ago
#90

good morning good morning

mornings the goods

what is the ups

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