Beating away insecurities TS part 2 updated *completed*

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Hey you lovelies, i hope u all r doing well...❤️

Here is my new TS hope u like this...





"Chl nikal ja kamre se" shiva said fumes in anger.

"Zyda hi preshani h na tuje toh chal 1 2 ka 4 ho le or fir vapis mat aana"

"Shi...shiva yeh tu kya bol raha h??" She said stunned by her words.

He doesn't reply, averted his gaze. Raavi looked at him with disappointment .

"Thik h jesi teri marzi" she said rushed from there with teary eyes.

Aangan is decorated with garlands and fairylights as there is gathering celebration of srawan pooja in house.

Dev and krish are arranging speakers, rishita is applying henna, suman is seating on her wheelchair in aangan with neighbour's , children are roaming here- there and playing.

Dhara is serving starters to everyone including dhokla and sarbat.

Raavi arrive in aangan with red hue eyes arranging the dupatta on one shoulder which has strong aroma of asafoetida..she ignored it as she is used to all the fragrance and aromas.

But the guest aren't used to it, they smell and it kept on eyeing from where it is coming.

"Arey raavi tu aa gyi kaha thi" dhara said

"Kahi nahi dhara di bas yahi thi"

"Raavi Beta" suman said

"Ji kaki, jai somnath" and touched her feet

"Haan khush raho..suman noticed her eyes and asked "raavi teri aankhe kyu suj rakhi h, tu royi h kya shiva ne kuch bola kya bta??"

Raavi looked stunned at her and she manage to speak "nahi ...nahi kaki esi..esi toh koi baat nahi h"..she said with force smile.

"Acha thk h fir, lo aa gya mera shiva" she sighed

Shiva came touched her feet, she give him blessing.

He looked at her, but raavi ignored him and move away from there.

She go and sit with guest started talking with them, shiva is noticing her from distance..!!

She is beautiful no doubt and "Chipkaliyon ki beauty queen chayyi hui h" he by himself and smiles.

She noticed his glares but pretend to ignore him.

"Aey hing ki itni tez mahak kaha se aa rahi h" kaki said.

"Haan hume bhi aa rahi h" others also said

Raavi is now feeling uncomfortable as she know that the aroma is coming from her dupatta.

"Arey raavi yeh toh tmhre pas se aa rahi h...(she smell her dupatta and said)..arey haan yeh toh raavi ke dupatte se hi aa rahi h"..!!

Raavi looked away in hesitation..

"Logo ki mehndi gehri hoti h toh unka pyaar pata chalta h par yaha toh hing ki mahak se pata chal raha h..*they laughed* kya baat h raavi, shiva ko bhaut ache se apna liya tune..!! They all giggled hard.

Raavi averted her gaze in order to avoid them and shiva is looking at them with anger in his eyes, he cluck his fist.

"Aey gadhedi inko kuch jawab kyu nahi de rahi h,inhone itna kuch boldiya par ek sabad nahi nikal raha iski zubaan se..!!"

"Raavi bura mt manna hum toh sb sach keh rahe h tum majak hi smjho ishe"

"Haan kaki sach keh rahi h aap, ab toh apko samaj aa hi gya hoga na kitne ache se gulmil gye h hum...ek dusre ko sambhalna jante h"..!!

He looked at her..

Raavi smiles at kaki ignoring shiva and leave their group as she called by someone.

"Chalo ab sab dance krte h" krish said

Lights get dim as soon as soft romantic music turn on..!!!

All the couples present their started dancing with hand in hand.

Raavi is standing in corner, shiva is staring at her, krish hold raavi's wrist and pushed her towards shiva.. she landed on his chest.

He hold her by waist, they both look at each other with rage eyes, it seems like if they get a chance they will kill each other.

"Shiva chod muje varna..."

"Vrna kya ....!!(he seem that to be challenge)

He tighten his hold on her waist and roamed his hand on her arm..!!

She gasped a little at proximity but didn't show it.

He suddenly grab her arm and pulled her close to him.

She is stunned by his sudden action.

"Kya takleef h tuje mei kuch bolu toh mahabharat shuru ho jati h teri or ab un kaki ko kuch bhi nahi bola tune kyu??"

She is dumbstruck and amused...did that affect him..??

She refused to speak...

He move closer to her..!!

Raavi can't take this anymore...she pushed him ungrab from his hold and looked at him in rage.

"Himmat kesi hui teri, tu toh hi dur jana chahta h na toh kyu pas aa raha h or jaha tak baat h mere na jawab deni ki toh voh meri baat h meri problem h tu kyu beech m pad raha h...!!"

He hold her hand and but she jerked it off.

And rushed off from there, leaving shiva standing there.



There is mix emotions which both of them is facing at the same time.....emotional , rage , love and rift ...!!!







Keep showering your love...❤

Ignore the mistakes😅


Love.

S_Verma




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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was a beautiful start❤️

Intense and angst filled...I guess we are in for emotional roller coaster❤️

Waiting for the next part🤗

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Awsome story 👌❤


Cont soon🤗

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A lovely start ❤️

Waiting for how this turns out.

Continue soon❤️

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Im in love with this!!!!❤️

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Super super excited for next part

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Oewwww very excited for the next part 💜

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Wonderful. Was it just me, but I wanted him to smell the hing when they were dancing. It wasn't a small smell, but hing left in dupatta can have very overpowering smell.

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lovely start.......i loved it.......unable to do so on your post

feel the pain

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Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

This was a beautiful start❤️

Intense and angst filled...I guess we are in for emotional roller coaster❤️

Waiting for the next part🤗



Hehe🤣

Glad that u like it❤️

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