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Posted: 4 years ago
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Such a well written post.....really cool. I really want these thngs were shown in reality

Nice storyšŸ‘šŸ¼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjani-pagli

Such a well written post.....really cool. I really want these thngs were shown in reality

Nice storyšŸ‘šŸ¼

Thank you so much ā¤ļø.

Have you read part 2?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Physics_girl

Thank you so much ā¤ļø.

Have you read part 2?

yes, forgt to add my like...woh daal diya

Sach mein this story looks so compact and moving. Way to go galšŸ‘šŸ¼

After reading ur story i hv a strong feeling, Sony decided to pull the plug long back.šŸ˜’

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjani-pagli

yes, forgt to add my like...woh daal diya

Sach mein this story looks so compact and moving. Way to go galšŸ‘šŸ¼

After reading ur story i hv a strong feeling, Sony decided to pull the plug long back.šŸ˜’

Thank againā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

Since I directly shared the link of the 3rd part so I asked so.😁

Edited by Physics_girl - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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You go girlšŸ¤— this is awesome… cant wait for Ishqaan meetā¤ļø Sonu tho kuch kaam arahi hai.. I wish real story also like this instead of Ishqi suffering 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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BTW selling engagement ring is fabulous idea🤪🤣

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Originally posted by: sparklep

You go girlšŸ¤— this is awesome… cant wait for Ishqaan meetā¤ļø Sonu tho kuch kaam arahi hai.. I wish real story also like this instead of Ishqi suffering 😊

Thank you šŸ’–. Sonu is darpok but not that selfish here.

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Originally posted by: sparklep

BTW selling engagement ring is fabulous idea🤪🤣

Ring šŸ’ bechne se v Mayank ko bechne se jyada paisa milega.

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PART - 4

It continues from Ishqi- Suraj-Savitri conversation.

Ishqi- Lekin uncleji aap ye batayiye ki aap aunty k madad kyun karte hai hamesha?

Suraj-Because Savitriji k life barbaad hone mai mer hi haath hai.

Savitri- Areh Bhaisahab, isme aapne na kuch jaanbuj kar kiya, naahi aapke koi galti hai. Aur guilt mai toh aapne bohot jyaada madad v ki hai. Ab aur mat kosiye apne aap ko.

Ishqi- Lekin hua kya tha?

Suraj- Savitri apne maa aur behen k saath ek baar auto mai jaa rahi thi jab mere wife k car k saath unka accident ho gaya tha. Savitri k maa, unki behen aur auto driver sab ka on spot death ho gaye the, including....including mere wife , wo v nahi bache. Savitri v bohot dinon tak hospital mai thi. Baad mai mujhe pata chala ki Savitri mere hi company ki employee thi. Toh wo iss duniya mai bilkul akele ho gayi, mere wife k galti k karan, isliye maine socha, inke rishte le jau, mere dost k paas. Mujhe laga tha wo ek accha insaan hai, wo pehle aisa nahi tha.

Ishqi- Aunty aapne apni life mai itne saare accidents dekhe hai. Lekin aapke baaki rishtedaar, koi dost?

Savitri- Mere mere maa aur pitaji ne sabke marji k khilaf jaake shaadi ki thi, isliye sab rishte-naate chut gaye. Aur haa dost toh the, lekin itni v close nahi tha koi, uss waqt sambhalne k liye.

Ishqi- Aapne rishte le gaye, aur aapke dost maan gaye? Aunty v maan gayi?

Suraj- Savitri ne maan li thi aur Vee-(he realizes Ishqi should not know the name), mere dost ne bhi, wo wese v shaadi k liye larki dhund rahe the. Pehle unke maa ne nahi maani thi par unke bete k kehne par maan gayi.

Naa mai yeh shaadi karwati, na ye sab kuch hote, na Savitri k life kharab hoti.

Savitri- Bhaisahab, aap ne jaan bujh kar kuch nahi kiye the aur aapne mujhe help v toh ki bohot . Ab apna guilt chor dijiye. Ab v toh phir se aap mere madad karne waale hai. Aur rahi baat mere pati ka, toh wo pehle sachmai ache insaan hi the, lekin waqt k saath v kuch log badal jate hai. Sharab ne sab kuch kharab kar diya aur Mummyji ne usi aag mai ghee daal di.

Ishqi- Lekin uncle aapne aunty ko dhundne ki koshish nahi ki?

Suraj- Jab wo sab kuch hua tha mai apne bete ko Chennai ghumane le gaya tha, unke summer vaccations par lag-vag 3 hafton k liye. Jab wapas aya tab pata chala mere dost gujar gaye aur Savitri apne baccho ko chor kar kisi amir insaan k saath bhag gayi.

Savitri- Aur aapne vishwaas kar liya?

Ishqi- Aur wapas aane se pehle v aapko khabar kaise nahi mile? Aur pata nahi tha tab v Savitri aunty k halat jaankar aap ne khabar nahi ki? Phone v toh kar sakte the?

Suraj- Tab phone karna itna asaan nahi tha. Phone karte toh ghar k landline par karna parta, sak aur barh jata. Aur maine Savitri ko dhunda, do saal tak dhunda, par phir mere bete ka v boards k samay ho gaya, aur uske baad unke career par focus karne ka time.Wo apne maa ko v to kho chuka tha, mujhe akele maa-baap Dono banna para.Ishliye apne life mai busy hone k karan aur dhund nahi payi.

Ishqi- Esse kaise dhundna chor diya? Aapko pa-.

Savitri- Nahi Ishqi, mai samajh sakti hu, wese v usne bohot madad ki, mai toh apne bacchon se dur ho gayi, at least bhaisahab toh time de sakein apne bete ko.Aur aapka beta? Bara hogaya hoga na?

Suraj- Haan abtoh wo lawyer ban gaya hai. Wese iss baar jab apne family k samne jayoge, toh strong hokar jana hoga aapko.

Savitri- Haan mujhe thik hokar hi jana hai iss bar Lekin Mummyji ko dekhkar hi mai apne aap ko sambhal nahi paati hu. Agar phir se dar gayi toh? Kya mujhe phirse aapke waha job mil sakte hai? Shayad kaam karne se confidence wapas mil jaye.

Suraj- Mil sakte hai lekin ab v tum ready nahi ho. Itne saal intezar kar hi chuki ho toh kuch aur saal sahi. Psychatrist k saath v counselling kara dunga taaki tum iss baar purri tarah se tayyar hokar jaa sako.Aur 20 saal mai kya kya changes hua hai wo sab v sikhna hai tumhe. Phir uske baad larai shuru. Lekin ab pehle tayaari.

Savitri- Lekin ek aur baat mere paas kuch v documents nahi hai.

Ishqi- Haan aajkal bohot zaroori hhote hai wo sab. Dher saare certificatein, PAN card, Aadhar card aur pata nahi kya kya.

Savitri- Haan shayad maine PAN card banwai thi, lekin Aadhar card kya hai?

Suraj- Savitriji, ye v samjha denge aur bohot kuch samajhna hai tumhe.Mere office mai tumhare records hai. Tum jaha jaha parhti thi, un institutions jaake certificates phir nikalne ki koshish karenge aur PAN k records toh honge hi, Aadhar v banwa lenge. Mera beta v madad karenge. Ishliye kaha kuch din rukkar tayaari.

Savitri- Aapke paas 20 saal purane records hai abhi tak?

Suraj-Haan 15 saal pehle se sab computerised karna shuru kar diya.

Savitri- Aapke office mai computer v le liya? Wow, tab aap lene ka plan kar rahe the na.

Suraj- Aajkal computer k bina kuch hota hi nahi hai. Bohot kuch dekhn hai jaana hai, sikhna aur samajhna hai. Mai kal aake le jaunga, ready rehna.

Ishqi- Pata hai maine v ek 6 mahine ki computer course karke rakhi.

Savitri- Waah acchi baat hai Ishqi. Ji mai ready rahungi. Lekin sabse pehle ye Screen wala phone kaise use karte hai yeh samajhna hai.

1 MONTH LATER

Malhotra house

Kartik was sulking in the corner of the living room watching an youtube video of a receipe of a sweet after his Ahaan bhai threw him out of his room with the 'bahana' of work. Just then someone hit his head.

Kartik-Ouch! Tu? Yahaan kyun aayi hai? Jaa na apne sasural.

Sona- Chup cheepre. Abhi itne dinon baad aayi hu aur tu mujhe bhaga raha hai.Ab itne acche news hai aur tu Hippopotamus k tarah muh kyun fulaye baitha hai?

Kartik(pullingSonu's hair)- Hippo kisko bola ? Kaunsi acchi news? Sarla aunty ko aliens utha k le gaye kya?

Sonu- Haan very funny. Chachi ne bataya tu ghar mai sabko lecture sunate sunate ab college mai lecture dega?Tujhe Assistant Professor ka job mila hai?

Kartik-Haan milgaya . Toh? Kaunsa Master Chef ka award mila jo tu itni khush ho rahi hai.

Sonu- Just imagine, tujhe...tujhe log 'SIR' kehke bulayenge. Hahahaha🤣.

Kartik-Rohan bhai v India wapas aagaye.Bhai see milne aaya tha ek hafte pehle.

Sonu-Yeh sab chor, chal bhai ko bulate hai aur adde pe baithte hai.

Kartik-Bhai se mai baat nahi karne wala. Pata usne mujhe unke room se nikal kar mooh pe darwaza band kar diya. Aajkal sirf room mai hi ghuse rehte hai.

Sonu-Jarur tune kuch tang kiya hoga, ya phir apne faltu jokes sunaye honge.

Kartik- Nahi Sonu, aajkal bhai k chinta ho raha hai mujhe. Jo kuchv hua usse bhai bohot affected hai.Aajkal sirf room mai rehte hai ya office mai. Jyada baat v nahi karte,ander se bohot dukhi hai. Yaa toh har samay kam mai busy rehte hai, ya phir waqt-bewaqt sote rehte hai, kuch jyada hi sote hai.

Sonu- Yeh sab sunkar toh mujhe v sinta ho rahi hai. Tune mujhe bataya kyun nahi. Phone pe toh bhai ekdum normally baat karte hai, isliye mujhe pata v nahi chala. Mere paas ek idea hai.

Kartik-Kaunsa idea? Tere flop ideas bilkul mat dena.

Sonu- Areh sun, bhai aur Rhea ko date pe bhej dete hai.

Kartik- Bhai Rhea k phone v uthaye na toh bohot hai. Date pe kabhi nahi.

Sonu- Lekin hamein kuch try toh kar sakte hai na? Agar kisi tarah bhai maan jaye toh wo at least light feel karenge.

Kartik- Let's do it.

Suraj's House

Ishqi- Waah aunty aap toh bohot jaldi jaldi thik ho rahe hai. Meri toh ungli ek dum thik ho gaye. Pata hai ek aur good news hai

Savitri- Tujhe job mil gayi?

Ishqi- Haan , kal se join kar rahi hu. Ishliye kalse aap ke pair k physiotherapy sessions mein mai aapke saath nahi jaa paungi.

Savitri- Koi baat nahi, par mithai kaha hai?

Ishqi- Maine mithai toh layi nahi lekin samose jarur layi hu. Wo kya hai na mai toh diabetic hu na. Khud k khusi mai khud hi nahi kha pau toh kese chalega, isliye.

Savitri- Areh ab khilayegi yaa nahi? Hamesha ese hi khush reh. Apne bacchon se toh dur hu, par mujhe ek aur beti mil gayi.

Ishqi- Toh mujhe v toh 3-3 maa mili hai. Ek mere maa, mujhe door hai lekin mai roz unse baat toh karti hu, ek maasi aur ek aap.

NEXT DAY

In a cafe

Kartik and Sonu somehow manages to convince Ahaan the mahaan to go on a date with Rhea. Rhea was on cloud nine. After avoiding for so many days, Ahaan himself called her for a date. As they entered the cafe, remembered how she and Ahaan met at a similar kind of cafe for the first time two years back.

Their orders were exchanged by mistake as they were at adjacent tables. Rhea herself approached Ahaan with his order and to take her one back. Then she asked him if she could sit there and he agreed. Between conversations they realized that Ahaan and Rhea's father were already known to each other through business.

On the other hand, although it was not the first time he came to a date with Rhea, but still only one treasured date with his 'wo larki' set up by his best friend came to his mind at that time. He sat down with smile on his face on remembering how 'that girl' called him -'Baby' in a unique way and the drama that she had done to stop him from leaving. However Rhea mistook his smile to be meant for her.

Just then, Ahaan's trance was broken by a familiar voice from behind- 'SIR aapka order'.

Ahaan(turning his head whispered)- Ishqi

Both of them were shocked at seeing each other and were lost into staring each other. All their meetings, fights, their sweet moments, drunk moments and most importantly their last meet during Ishqi's arrest flashed before their eyes.

Rhea- Ishqi tum?

They both recovered by listening to Rhea.

Ishqi- SIR, Ma'am aapka order?

Ahaan- Ek espresso, aur ek sandwich.

Rhea- Mere liye ek juice aur ek heart-shaped wala black-forest pastry. Ahaan yaha k yeh pastry bohot tasty hai. Last time maine apne friend k saath aayi thi na tab khayi thi. Ek baar taste karke dekho na bohot tasty hai.Please mere liye.

Ahaan looked at Rhea's face and felt bad for her. She was always perfect but it ws him who was avoiding this sweet girl for no fault of hers. This is the first time she asked him something herself.

Ahaan-Rhea tum keh rahi ho toh sure, ek nahi do khaunga.(he said looking towards Ishqi).Add 2 more HEART-SHAPED pastries. So ek espresso, ek juice aur 3 HEART-SHAPED pastries.

Ishqi- Ok, SIR.

Ishqi(being jealous-in mind)-Rhea k kehne pe do do pastry kha dalenge ye AVM. Aur mere saath adha pastry v nahi khayenge. Huh šŸ˜ . Mujhe kya, Rhea k 'Babby' hai banda, mere thori na kuch lagte hai. Wese v mujhe mitha nahi khana chahiye.

Somehow she suppressed her emotions and went to bring their order.

Few moments later, Ishqi brings the order and serves them. Ahaan pretends to be busy on his phone leaning on his chair in order to pretend-avoid Ishqi, extending his legs on the side.

Rhea(passing a sweet smile)- Thank you Ishqi.

Ishqi fakes a smile to Rhea and was about to return when out of hurry and nervousness, she missed noticing Ahaan's leg and she stumbled on it and she fell towards an adjacent table.Ahaan was shocked to as he did not do that intentionally. Ishqi's face fell on a bowl of Raita on that table.

Ishqi(angry)- AVM! Aapne jaan bujh kar kiya na yeh?

THAAP!

Out of anger, she takes one pastry from Rhea and Ahaan's table and puts it on her AVM's face.

Ahaan- What the fudge! Ye kya kiya tumne.

He also gets angry and takes the 2nd pastry and puts it on her face. Next Ishqi retaliates by putting the 3rd pastry too on Ahaan but it gets on his neck. Then Ahaan takes the glass of juice and splashes it towards her, but she tries to escape. So half of it falls on her and half on one of the members of that Raita table. Ishqi was about to throw the coffee on him but realizes that it must be still hot.(she still cares right?)So she takes the Raita bowl from that table and pours it over his head.

Ahaan- What the fudge! Mere hairstyle 😔

Everyone in the cafe is shocked at the scene that took place and hearing the commotion , the owner also reaches there. Rhea was most shocked by witnessing everything that took place before her eyes, especially by seeing her Sanskari disciplined boyfriend fighting like a kid with the waitress of the cafe whom she believed to be Ahaan's ex-friend.

The owner of the cafe was so angry that Ishqi was immediately removed from the job and Ahaan and Rhea were banned from further coming to that cafe.

In a hospital in US

Mayank was watching his father lifeless in a cabin still in a comatose state. He was sad for his father and wanted him to recover but he was also scared what if his truth gets revealed.

Mayank(in mind)- Papa aapke jagah koi aur hota toh mai usse kabka upar pohocha chuka hota. Lekin aap mere pita hai ishliye kuch kar v nahi sakte. Lekin aap thik ho gaye toh tab v mere liye problem hai Mai kya karun? AAAAARRRGGGG........Aapko bich mai aane ki kya zaroorat thi papa? Yeh sab Ishqi k wajah se hua hai, usse toh mai chorungi nahi, ek baar India wapaas chali jaun, phir teri khair nahi. Tune mere papa ko bich mai laake sabse bari galti ki.

He breaks down crying.

Next part- Ishqaan meet again


How was it? Batana jarur

Edited by Physics_girl - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you thank you thank you di. Bahut hi achha thaā¤ļøā¤ļø


Savitri ki tayyari mode bahut hi achhi thi. Psychiatrist k paas jaana, zaruri documents, latest technologies, ye elements Savvy ko aur character de rahe hai.


Finally Suraj ki family aur unki back story. Believable thi ye wališŸ˜†


RheHaan date by Sonu and Kartik🤣


Sonu calling Kartik hippo🤣🤣🤣


Yahaan bhi cake fight karte hai, bechare holi ki colors ki koi izzat hi nahi reh gayi haišŸ˜†

Ishqi ka raita me girna🤣


Ahaan ka hairstyle- Rai(ta) ka PahadšŸ˜†


Ishqi ki job chali gayi par RheHaan ban ho gaye🤣


Mayank roya, maana galat reason se par roya to sahi. Please di Mayank aur Maasa ko pitwa dena, sadistic pleasure šŸ˜†


Waiting for Next Ishqaan meetšŸ¤—

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