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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 5


“Are you crazy?” he asked, staring at the girl in front of him, sitting in the middle of the road.

Some bride she was! Hair plastered to her face, make-up in a mess. Clothes splattered with mud, she looked an absolute disaster. No wonder she was here, why would any sane man want to marry her was beyond him. He shook his head in exasperation.

“Hey, are you okay? Should I drop you somewhere?” he asked, but she paid no heed. Her sobs continued at a steady pace and she seemed to have no intention of getting up.

“Look, I am getting late. Tell me where you want to go, I’ll drop you there,” he said impatiently.

“Go away. I don’t need any help.”

Her voice was irritated and she still hadn’t the courtesy to look at him when he was politely offering her help. Cars honked at them as they maneuvered around them through the rain. They were blocking traffic, a puddle of brown water had formed around the girl sitting in front of him.

He spotted a truck in the distance heading their way and sighed. He had no choice. Bending down he lifted the sobbing girl, with her heavy jewelry, sodden lehenga, and all, and shoved her in his car. Her sobs turned into wails as she suddenly realized what was happening.

She struggled to get free, but it was too late. He strapped her in and drove away. He’d somewhere to be urgently. He was getting late for his own engagement.


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“Where are you taking me?” Mahek asked in panic as the stranger drove like a maniac.

“Home,” he answered cuttingly.

“Whose home? You don’t even know me!”

“To my would-be fiance's home. It’s my engagement today and I don’t want to be late because of you. You can get fresh there and we’ll discuss your problem later.” he gave her an appraising look from head to toe and wrinkled his nose. Apparently, he didn’t think much of her, that much was clear from his attitude.

She scowled and looked ahead. Her sobs had receded but her heart still ached with Arjun’s betrayal. Closing her eyes, she rested her head on the headrest. She deserved this, all of this was her fault. Her parents had warned her about Arjun but she’d never paid any heed. She was in love, in her own dream world where everything was rosy and people lived happily ever after. And look where that had landed her.

She was supposed to be engaged today. Her parents had found someone of their own choice. That was why she’d taken this extreme step. She was sure Arjun would understand, he was the only one in the world able to understand her mind. But apparently, she had failed to understand him. He had proved an utter coward, cheat, a useless piece of shit. She ground her teeth in annoyance and earned a curious look from her savior. “Why did he ditch you?” he asked, turning his eyes back to the road.

“He’s already married,” she said looking out of the window.

He didn’t comment, but she knew what he must be thinking. A stupid, irresponsible, gullible girl like her deserved this. She was responsible for her own fate.

Chewing her lips she looked out. The rain had receded and she could make out some familiar landmarks. There was the Banyan tree of her childhood and the corner shop where the kids in her colony bought sweets. There was the familiar path lined with Gulmohar trees. It seemed like she was in her own colony. The car came to a halt. She noticed she was in front of her own house.


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Edited by monalidp - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Continue the story dearies 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: monalidp

Continue the story dearies 😊

That was one exceptionally surprising twist Mona👏👍🏼.

Wondering about the future update.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: dwriter

That was one exceptionally surprising twist Mona👏👍🏼.

Wondering about the future update.


Ha ha. You'll think of something Shinu, don't worry 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 6

Her fears turns into truth right away when her house signboard SHARMA’s written before the big house situating in the last corner of that lane came into her sight.

‘’Who are you?’’, Mehak asked him.

He didn’t reply,simply open the car door and gesture her to come out.

Before her suspicion got confirmed she found herself standing before the doors. Shaurya has knocked and her chachi open the door for them. Her chachi's sad look quickly become shocked to surprised and Mehak's suspicion get its said confirmation. Her chachi make others aware of the guest that are on the door. They all saw their daughter standing before their house with him.....their most important guest of the evening.

Her whole family were gathered before them. But her eyes were searching for only two most important people those meant her life. Her parent.

Her parent look shattered. Her father was sitting on her favourite couch looking at nothing particular deep in thoughts and her mother was as usual a nervous wreck, her eyes constantly showing the worry and pain in the form of her tears.

The look on her parent makes her more guilt ridden. She makes them ashamed for herself. She was the pride of the same family. His father treated her like a princess but what have she done in return to that love? Her mind may refuse it but her heart knows what it was......Betrayal!

Betrayal that she felt becoz of Arjun is the same she has done to her parents. The tears that never dried came to full force.

''Papa'' ....she whispered. Before her words could reach her father they reached Shaurya’s ears. He was shocked.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Good story..continue soon..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Debomitabose22

Good story..continue soon..

thank you dear🤗

Even you can give it a try.......😃

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