RaghVi FF : I WARS I *Update Chapter 4 - Page 30* - Page 25

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thnx.

More of the story or more because how story ended? Anyhow that twist was visible from Very beginning of the FF. Y were u shocked den?

More for this story!! It was amazing.

I had an idea somewhere of Manik's identity but not the fact that he might die in the end 🥺

Awsome😍

The way he described his love for pallavi💗

Originally posted by: unicornwriter

More for this story!! It was amazing.

I had an idea somewhere of Manik's identity but not the fact that he might die in the end 🥺

I will take blame for that. Story was short. True.

I tried to be realistic like the show all of u so much love for realistic approach. So killed him in last.

Originally posted by: huchseju

Awsome😍

The way he described his love for pallavi💗

Thnx.

Ya that guy seem to be too much into his wife.

I don't know what conclusion to draw from the epilogue as it points towards many directions at the same time.

the way Raghav described his love for Pallavi was beautiful and the fact that he knew all along that Sana is Pallavi is like cherry on cake for Sana

Ved and his childish games🤣 and Ragav's entry and him being a RAW agent was definitely unexpected

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thnx.

Many directions???

like if Raghav is a RAW agent--he must be having a bulletproof vest with him which can definitely lead to his survival--no one is a fool to go to a shooting site without safety gear, or maybe Raghav might be actually dead(that's what you have made the Raghav's death look like) or maybe in a state where he is fighting between life and death

i really wanted a happy ending and Raghav alive--as I had enough of reading the sad endings

Originally posted by: ReemShah

like if Raghav is a RAW agent--he must be having a bulletproof vest with him which can definitely lead to his survival--no one is a fool to go to a shooting site without safety gear, or maybe Raghav might be actually dead(that's what you have made the Raghav's death look like) or maybe in a state where he is fighting between life and death

i really wanted a happy ending and Raghav alive--as I had enough of reading the sad endings

That bulletproof vest theory was best. I could hv used it.

Sad endings??? where.?? I want to read.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

That bulletproof vest theory was best. I could hv used it.

Sad endings??? where.?? I want to read.

Sadly, the story has been concluded.

It is neither on Raghvi nor it is in the forum.

Let me start with a big, fat apology! I should have been investigating this suspense - but couldn't. My loss!

Where do I start? maybe, where I left!

Chapter 3

This was poignant, mysterious. You write the unspoken words beautifully. And the words spoken with eyes more so!

The way it started with his smirk, a smile, a surprise, a realisation. Her worry, her confusion, her fury, her realisation. 👏

Loved the last look sequence; and liked the last tear bit. Emotions flow naturally via words.

And S is always P! ❤️

And the last paragraph. Had I been looking carefully, it held the answers. But, frankly, I got it only after reading the 4th chapter. The words about 'I can't let it to be completed', 'I have to stop you' were telling me something but I wasn't listening. I also think, it has got to do with me getting distracted by the drama around. The VD/Mandaar bit.

But this last paragraph set a mood; of what was going to come. Some kind of double-cross. A way of being at loggerheads.

and then came the 4th chapter.

It started straight away (did you finish it quick?). Full on drama. The layers of the onion were coming off, one at a time. P's identity (rather S's).

Let me share something I noticed; or imagined. I felt it rushed. Reason, the revelations came as dialogues spoken by one to the other. I don't think that's your style of revealing it. You make the reader work for it - don't just serve it on a platter.

and then the finale. This time the fire didn't take the bullet; but the ice did! (sorry, I will need to stop going back to nightmare; not off the hangover!)

To the epilogue.

Clarified the final other bits. akin to Mr & Mrs Smith. 😃 (and am royally ignoring the RR dropped-dead bit; it wudnt change the story till here. It will change what happens later, but we aren't talking about what's not written).

Stoic - this word has been bothering me. trying to ring some bell. All it took me back to was, as I said before, a Family Man 2 type of reference. A mission. Not far, I can say. 😳

Fire flickers. Is it worse if I have still not gotten it? 😭 Need help!

A very satisfying read; am sure the experience would have been better, had I read it as and when it was getting written and theorising more. 😃

thank you! 👏👏

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Where are you girls?

Queen is missing you all. 😭

back.

On some thread, some day you have asked about sunrise or sunset.

I thought thought and thought more. Think I love them equally - on a happy day I like the sunset; on a gloomy day I like the sunrise.

OK. Sunrise a 0.5% more than sunset.