Being in makers'place this is how i would carry the story forward

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Due to error in posting the post became double

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Dear forum friends

I am not keen to write this in a fiction form and segregating into parts as i have lost the interest to write due to the craps shown onscreen where they could have made it interesting as well as protecting viewers' mental stability . There was only one that i wrote very recently on tejo seducing fateh and that was due to the reason that i was on leave with ample of time to kill and also inspiration from fellow forum members who discussed about that particular topic in the discussion threads

This is simple and straightforward


Fateh will take jasmin to the hospital after her finger cutting stunt. Tejo disappointed that he has not moved on. Fateh realised tejo was affected but did not apologise. Was silent on his deed. Deep inside he was hurt that he was doing wrong to tejo. Sandhus were annoyed that SIL was still in love with jasmin. Virks were not aware as they did not attend the event. Rupi was furious with jasmin's action

Gippy was annoyed but decided to carry on as he was in love with jasmin consoling himself and his parents that after marriage all will be fine. They will leave for canada immediately keeping fateh away from jasmin


Marriage preparations continued and fatejo was having difficult time facing their emotions. Tejo was in love with him and he was annoyed with jasmin getting married

He had to attend the functions as he was the SIL and also gippy requesting him specially now that they are friends

Finally on the day of haldi two days before marriage fateh will be devastated and starts drinking. Tejo will be at sandhus busy with the preparations and then his phone call came in that he was missing her and wants her home immediately. She was worried hearing his drunk voice hoping he doesnt do anything stupid


As she reached home it was dark and then sound of music. Dancing closely with her throwing tantrums on why he married her, she was not a good wife, leaving him to be alone and busy enjoying with others. She doesnt take care of him and blah blah

She gave him a tight slap finally and he collapsed. Took him to the room and laid him on the bed. As she moved away he pulled her closer and whispered into her ears

U are a mean wife . But i still love u

I love u tejo!

And surrendered to his slumber


Twist in the tale

Fateh's confession for tejo in a drunk state!


She was in a total shock. He was in love with her

The next morning upon being sober he was himself once again drooling for jasmin

Tejo was devastated. He didnt realise who he actually is in love with but remained silent . As hours passed he was restless with jasmin pressurising him to stop the marriage and on the wedding day he confessed openly his feelings for jasmin leaving everyone shocked and marriage called off

Tejo files for a divorce. Virks tried to advise but failed

She was determined to leave him. Fatejo divorce takes place . Sandhus had no choice after all the humiliation thrown upon them and jasfa marriage to take place

Tejo shifted to a hostel nearby persuing her career and dreams .

Fateh will be restless and on the wedding day leaves jasmin at the mandap for tejo confessing that he was in love with tejo but it took him long to realise it

Amrik takes fateh"s place to marry jasmin


Fateh confesses to tejo but she will reject him after all the pain he gave her.

Starts stalking her as how he used to do with jasmin

Shah rukh khan lover boy version. Tries to woo her in hilarious ways. Some romantic scenes including rainy ones with hindi beats . She will be affected but pretends to be angry

He will pull her closer and she pushes him away. Some nok jok with heated romance

She will give in finally

Jasmin upon getting married to amrik starts her revenge plans to get fateh but fails. Amrik helps initially but as he started realising he is in love with her will go against instead joins team fatejo

He will support fateh to marry tejo so he could get jasmin. Virks delighted to have tejo back and will propose to sandhus for fatejo marriage

Fatejo remarriage takes place with jasmin plotting to destroy but amrik comes in as a saviour

Marriage completed successfully and fatejo goes honeymoon

Jasmin with her vengeance

Amrik the saviour

A new villain introduced

The return of gippy

Wants to take revenge from jasfa

With tejrik as the saviour


If i was in the makers' place this is how i would carry the story forward


Reason

They made a blunder with the first nite. Indicating fateh as a two timer

Fatejo fans' outrage can destroy their show as they are majority in numbers

Bring fateh's confession for tejo asap due to reason many are aware he feels for tejo but is still under jasmin"s delusions

Make it clear to the fans that it is actually tejo he is in love with and not jasmin instead of playing the ping pong version confusing fans even more

I suggested in a drunk state

Like how first nite was very unexpected

Confession can be done similarly

A wonderful major twist


Ps

I tagged few due to restrictions

An apology
















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Posted: 4 years ago
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And I was laughing...😂😂😂while I was reading....It seems you know the makers very well .They will surely create such mess....

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