SaiRat FF - Agar Main iss duniya mein nahi rahu toh bhi...Pt8 Pg48 - Page 11

Oh God!! This is completely heartbreaking 💔

Another tear jerker since the last one. And how the crisis brings the family together despite all the differences. The emotions have been nailed to the bits.

I just hope there is a happy ending to this, personally dont like tragedies 🙈

Oh my....Sai is trying to be brave. Shes a strong girl but she needs her virat sir to be ok, back to her safe and sound. Hoping Virat is rescued and recovers.

Sad but lovely as well!!!!!

The flow of emotions and scene.... The strength of the family of the security forces.... Everything came out amazing!!!!

Vaada to give back the man... More of dead or alive.... It's like giving the closure to the family for any kind of outcome... Good or bad......

The bravery of the team leader is also great.... Yo save other before self... To help as much as possible!!!!

Virat should come back safe now..... He gave up in the end, but there are also search party out there now.... Sube visibility will be better...... I am looking at all the positives here!!!!!

Just lots of hearts ❤️❤️❤️

Happy writing!!!

Continue soon!!!

dang it...... my tears are not stopping after reading chapter 3. Amazing choice of words to trigger the right emotion from readers. Looking forward to the next chapter.... got goosebumps. Amazing writer you are ❤️😭🥺

Just caught up with this SS. How beautifully it is written. You described the emotions and the scenes so perfectly. 👏

It felt so good to see Ninad finally accepting Sai as his bahu and Kaku also softened as she saw herself in Sai.

The vaada of the police team. 😭 A good one even if the news is bad. 😒

Virat at last. He could remember only his Sai. 😭

Waiting for the next update.

PS: Ok let me know how and when to hit Cheeku. 🤣

Omg the feeling and understanding between them.... I love how they all come together as well in this time of unknown

Anxiously waiting for the next part

❤️❤️

Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Devikadish

Sooo Heartbreakingly beautiful❤️

Amazing update, very emotional, very heart touching❤️

Appu, Please give this one a happy ending. Request hai❤️

#ChandpurMeiinChaandLaapata

#TimeToTransformToPhauladeeOfficerKiBraveBaiko

#EarlierItWasAaba,NowIt'sPati

And yeah, I will surely help you in doing jooni ka online pitaai. Par zyada chhot nahi pahuchayenge, abhi abhi sagaai hui hai na - Teeheeheee.... she's going to get thrashed!

Aww Disha, Thank so much! 😳

I broke my own heart writing this SS....

#EarlierItWasAaba,NowIt'sPati 😭

Originally posted by: AJiy

That was very heartbreaking 💔

The pain that Sai is in is terrific

The last paragraph shocked me to the core

You are a very good writer

Keep it up

Thank you for tagging me🙃

Thanks so much!!!

I shock myself too, with what I write!

Originally posted by: CoolMuskan

So glad Aparna that you decided to update and not disappoint your readers, for whatever reason. It was really beautiful. The emotions captured perfectly and presented wholeheartedly. Loved it.

I'm falling in love with your writing style. I wish I could write like you. All I can do is appreciate talent like you 😍

Thanks, Muskan... hope I can call you that.

And while I'm pissed of with this person called Cheeku for disappearing, I took your advice... but again, only because she surfaced!!!

Thanks for those lovely words... why don't you give writing a try? If the emotions are in there, it is just about putting words to paper!