Tum Hamein Anarkali Banaogi & Return of Moti Roti, DT note Pg 39 - Page 25

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Posted: 4 years ago

Dedicated to the rain scene


Falling showers

She's in my arms

I can feel her slipping away

While I try to hold on.


Falling showers

I'm in his arms

Ah I can atleast take my last breaths

In the arms of the man to whom I belong


Falling showers I smile wide at her

As she smiles wider at our banter

At those names we once kept for each other

And those which we haven't taken since long but shall always remember


Falling showers I smile wide at him

Enjoying these moments which seem like the last for me

As I feel my being slip into a darkness uncanny

I laugh little more before surrendering to the inevitable - death and destiny!


Falling showers drench me afresh

As throughout me courses a numbness

A moment of silence and I snap

Pulling her to my chest in an embrace


Wake up for I can't let you slip away

Don't ask why, just come back and stay

For a world without you isn't worth living in

I admit it today you're the rains my parched land had been seeking!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ps143

Dedicated to the rain scene


Falling showers

She's in my arms

I can feel her slipping away

While I try to hold on.


Falling showers

I'm in his arms

Ah I can atleast take my last breaths

In the arms of the man to whom I belong


Falling showers I smile wide at her

As she smiles wider at our banter

At those names we once kept for each other

And those which we haven't taken since long but shall always remember


Falling showers I smile wide at him

Enjoying these moments which seem like the last for me

As I feel my being slip into a darkness uncanny

I laugh little more before surrendering to the inevitable - death and destiny!


Falling showers drench me afresh

As throughout me courses a numbness

A moment of silence and I snap

Pulling her to my chest in an embrace


Wake up for I can't let you slip away

Don't ask why, just come back and stay

For a world without you isn't worth living in

I admit it today you're the rains my parched land had been seeking!

Not tagged me 😭

But ye bhi haste haste sehelenge🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ps143

Dedicated to the rain scene


Falling showers

She's in my arms

I can feel her slipping away

While I try to hold on.


Falling showers

I'm in his arms

Ah I can atleast take my last breaths

In the arms of the man to whom I belong


Falling showers I smile wide at her

As she smiles wider at our banter

At those names we once kept for each other

And those which we haven't taken since long but shall always remember


Falling showers I smile wide at him

Enjoying these moments which seem like the last for me

As I feel my being slip into a darkness uncanny

I laugh little more before surrendering to the inevitable - death and destiny!


Falling showers drench me afresh

As throughout me courses a numbness

A moment of silence and I snap

Pulling her to my chest in an embrace


Wake up for I can't let you slip away

Don't ask why, just come back and stay

For a world without you isn't worth living in

I admit it today you're the rains my parched land had been seeking!

Pretty much sums all of it❤️

You have penned it down so beautifully Ps! Just Ammazing!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: anikal

Not tagged me 😭

But ye bhi haste haste sehelenge🤣

Arey re sooo sollllyyyy! *Kaan pakdoing*😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ps143

Dedicated to the rain scene


Falling showers

She's in my arms

I can feel her slipping away

While I try to hold on.


Falling showers

I'm in his arms

Ah I can atleast take my last breaths

In the arms of the man to whom I belong


Falling showers I smile wide at her

As she smiles wider at our banter

At those names we once kept for each other

And those which we haven't taken since long but shall always remember


Falling showers I smile wide at him

Enjoying these moments which seem like the last for me

As I feel my being slip into a darkness uncanny

I laugh little more before surrendering to the inevitable - death and destiny!


Falling showers drench me afresh

As throughout me courses a numbness

A moment of silence and I snap

Pulling her to my chest in an embrace


Wake up for I can't let you slip away

Don't ask why, just come back and stay

For a world without you isn't worth living in

I admit it today you're the rains my parched land had been seeking!


You just weave magic with your words Ps143❤️

Thank you for the beautiful poem😃

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Loony_lovegood

Pretty much sums all of it❤️

You have penned it down so beautifully Ps! Just Ammazing!!

Thank you ☺️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: jojo_mojo


You just weave magic with your words Ps143❤️

Thank you for the beautiful poem😃

Thank you ☺️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ps143

Arey re sooo sollllyyyy! *Kaan pakdoing*😂

Itizz ok🤣


Btw u write really well

Edited by anikal - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: .SNOWWHITE.

I have felt little dislike for Adi only once . When he accused Imlie of trapping him during second Pagdandiya. One of the rare time when Imlie gave it back to Adi😎 Imlie was standing with a glass of milk 😆 I want that once Imlie become Panika (Pani+ Anika)🤣. It was needed on him😆 than poor SSO that once. 🤣Well Imlie tortureed him😆 for next 100 episode by insisting to live with bipolar Malini😝. Now it's even. I can't still forget the way he said Mera Dum ghuttha hai. It really felt like suffocating. Otherwise Adi is much better than most of the Male leads. He had redeemed himself for Imlie . For that reason I have a little fondness more towards Adi❤️ than Imlie when he is not in gehri dosti😆

Adi is one of the very few ML's that I have seen who seem real and I can connect with him as his character has shades that I can relate with very well. He is the only character jo kaafi had tak consistent raha hai (apart from his didi jaap, which is still better than Imlie's anytime) He has always been very honest with his feelings, be it for Imlie or for Malini. His priorities have always been to try and be the best version of himself, which is why even when he was mean with Imlie, he always could not see her in pain or stop himself from making sure physically she was okay.

He knew what he was doing was wrong, which was why when SK called him out on his actions, he was willing to die for Imlie. While he is happy that Malini has moved on, he would have still gone ahead with his separation even if she had not had someone else. His feelings for Imlie can never be doubted today and somewhere that started from the day he met her and just grew ten fold everytime he saw her do something that validated his belief that she is different from the women he was used to. Ironically Adi saw a lot of Aparna in Imlie, with the way she calls him out in her behaviour to the way she takes care of his family. That was also a big draw for him, as Malini was to shallow for him to really connect beyond a surface level.

Which is why he is currently in a quandry on how his family is not able to see in Imlie what is visible clearly to him. The fact that the very people whoade him understand to value of Imlie are right now not willing to value her is just not making sense to him.

Hopefully he is able to show his family what they have always known but right now not able acknowledge - That agar candle leke bhi jaate, toh Imlies se better bahu kabhi nahi mil pati for their sanki beta😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: anikal

Itizz ok🤣


Btw u write really well

😂😅

Thank you ☺️❤️

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