SaiRat FF - Agar Main iss duniya mein nahi rahu toh bhi...Pt8 Pg48 - Page 7

I was full of anticipation while reading your story ❤️ I loved it. It brought out my very rare emotional side 🤔 Still no news of my veeru darling 😭 But I am very happy that family started showing their love for Sai during this hard time🤗 When Virat is back, if he sees this bonding, he would run back to the entrance and check whether he came to the right house 😉

Omg what a concept.. I felt bad when virat said that.. That shows helpnessless of a lover who craving for li'l bit of love... Uss dialogue me aapne jaan daal di... Brilliantt👏

I read both parts in one go..

Sai nd baba's worry for virat written beautifully

Aai's love for her Godu.. Mother can feel that her children is in danger..

Sai broke down.. I know that sai wil realise the importance of virat.. Nd it wil help to reveal her hidden feelings for virat Sir

Hope virat is fine.. Pls virat ko sahi salamath laana..

Pls update soon.. Eagerly waitingg

It's said that hardship brings people closer. And the same thing happened here and how.

Those people who keep fighting among themselves are now close to each other in this moment of pain and the fear of impending doom, being each other's strength and sharing their pain.

Divided by their different perspectives, connected by one thread- Virat Chahvan.

The girl whose sparkling eyes fill them with hatred, the same eyes, having lost their spark, make them feel her pain. Pain connected them to one another in a way that they would've never thought was possible.

Appu. This story, like Mission Rituals remind me of the storm that is outside while the family is together inside. In Mission Rituals family dynamics aren't bad but it's Sairat who are together against any storm. And here, Virat is the reason, the family is together against any storm.

In your stories, I always find nature connected to human emotions, whether it's rain, or beautiful evening, or landslides. Even when you don't involve nature, the impending hardships look like storms that are going to come. But the house they are in, seems really strong against any outside storm, in all Stories. It's like, when he left the safety of his house, he fell into danger. Reading this story, it felt like the storm has broken into their house uninvited. And they are all feeling bits of pain. Together their pain is huge. I don't know if I'm making sense. It's like Virat is not just one person here. It's like one part of his is ashwini's Virat, one part is Bhavani's Virat, one part is Ninad's Virat. One part is Sai's Virat. It's like for the first time, they could see each other's Virat in their lost eyes. They could connect their Virat to others' Virat and see and feel the pain of the other person. They could see the other Virat too. I mean, like Bhavani had always seen the Virat who is the pride of Chahvan Nivas. For the first time, she could see Sai's Virat too. And feel her pain in the pain she has also felt before.

Your ability to portray human emotions is unmatchable magical Appu❤️✨✨✨✨

So emotional and heartbreaking 😭. No words are enough to express how I'm feeling.

Omg that was so powerful and full of emotion 👏🏽👏🏽

want to read next part now

Wow!! Just Wow!!

This is so brilliantly captured in words 💜And the emotions bringing them together in times of crisis… the common thread that binds them all together! Eagerly waiting to know what tou have planned next

Finally here. Sorry, I might seem normal and fun here sometimes, but it's sometimes weird kind metabolism going within me and my brain🤣

Okay, so let's get to .....commenting.....

Part 1 :

It was really very beautiful in its way. Cuz, first , you beautifully portray Sai , she seems transparent here, not a turmoil of various emotions. Even multiple emotions simultaneously being experienced by someone stand out individually in your work. That is why I love your work to core.

And that was Sai, she felt glad and grateful for that party, she was happy, she was content and she seemed satisfied . Something which gave her immense peace to her. That was the beauty of the moment.

Okay, we get it, dean sir is also the part of the college, so obviously he also might be member of Virat fan club, so no wonder special permission 🤣 Jokes apart, I guess something's are indeed very sensitive, something which might seem bravery and pride for over lookers, for the other the same might be a constant fear and agony for their family, which they can't express, and Virat's profession is indeed that. The family might be very proud, but they are family first right. The person is someone to somebody.

That was lovely, the Chavans seem normal and intelligent here, which is quite shocking 🤣

And the way Sai reacted, glad she knows, and she also thinks about her actions. It alone sometimes can solve many problems, when a person thinks and then chooses to react. A sort of repair work which makes things more stronger and sturdy.

And at the end, the part where Sai and Ninad share the time. Lovely, you know, it conveyed beautiful emotions. Cuz, this time they weren't across something which made them think poles apart, but rather, they stood for the same person, and they felt the same emotions, care and slight fear. They wanted to share that moment, cuz they knew, and maybe somewhere Ninad trusts as well, that Sai might be wrong, but she is always good when it comes to Virat, that is what I felt....lovely❤️

But the end.....🥺

Part 2 :

The beginning and progress was so emotional, I literally was about to cry. 🥺

It's just time, all have to face it one day or the other, but what soothed me was the way they decided to face it. Either get divided into multiple individual threads to support their hope, or get united into one strong rope to support that hope. And they did that well.

A father, a mother, a wife ,a family, all are just facing time and situation. And it indeed is very troubling. But, the way they are holding up and supporting is amazing. Cuz, they all know how this works, yet, across this line of professionalism, at the end of the day, the person on the end of professional side is their family, a smiling face which they encountered every day.

And Sai's emotions were so well, a woman whose man, for whom she has multiple emotions, but with him alone, her only ray of hope in the darkness, is lost in itself, no wonder, she also feels lost. And all are seeing her struggling to find her way through, but none can't reach her properly.

I truly felt bad for Ninu🥺

Would want to know what happens

Pls update soon❤️

Amazing story..... I hope u are giving a happy ending only......

The care An concern of the whole family at the hour of need was quite touching...... The fears and anxiety and hope for the Safety of virat ..... The panic at the situation where nthin is under control or u are able to do anything..... Mental strength is required in abundance......

Continue soon!!!

Happy writing!!! 💝💝💝

Superb update

Finally seeing Kaku and ninad coming around Sai because they have one thing in common I.e. Virat

Please update soon

Oh..it's perfect..you have described their emotions beautifully👏