Kabhi Aana tu meri gali

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Posted: 4 years ago
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1997


"Yatrigan kripya dhyaan den Mumbai se Udupi Ko Jaane wali Konkan express Platform number 2 par khadi h."


Sawantwadi railway station me hamesha ki tarah kucch khaas bheed nahin thi to Malhar ko Wheelers se Surendra Mohan Pathak ka naya jasoosi upanyas lene me koi dikkat nahin hui. Fir aadtan usne station me lagi vajan ki machine par vajan kiya aur usse nikli tikat ko palat kar dekha to usme likha tha- "Aapki prakriti shaant, seedhe aur gambhir swabhav ke manushya ki hai. Kripya apne jeevan me Haas parihaas ko bhi sthan dein."


Fir wahi sandesh. Malhar jab bhi Poona office se apne ghar Saawantwadi aata aur vajan ki machine istemaal karta, to har baar weight ticket par yahi sandesh aata tha.


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One Two Three Four...One two three four....


Atul ne neeche se awaz di, "Are Kalyani. Chai pee lo. Shaam ke paanch baj gaye hain. Apni saheliyon ko baad me dance sikha dena."


Tabhi Kalyani ne chhat se awaaz di, "Baba college function ke itne kam din baaki hain aur mere alawa sab kucch kucch steps bhool rahe hain. Aaj chai aap akele pee lo." Aur Kalyani fir dance sikhane lagi.


https://youtu.be/0tjVtYtZ384


Tabhi tape achanak chalte chalte ruk gaya.


"Uff..." Kalyani ne kaha, "lagta hai cassette fas gayi." Pen cassette mein dalkar ghumane par bhi cassette se kharr kharr ki awaz hi aati rahi.


"Baba," Kalyani chalte chalte boli, "Main nayi cassette me performance vala Gaana bharwane jaa rahi hoon."


"Par Beta?"


"Bye Baba!"


Kalyani jaa hi rahi thi ki ek cream shirt aur kaala pant pehne lambe ladke se takrai.


"Are Kalyani tum?"


"Malharji, aap Poona se kab laute? Accha main ghar aakar apse milti hoon..."


"Par Kalyani..."Malhar ki pukaar ka is baar bhi koi javaab na aaya. Aata bhi kaise, Kalyani to ek hawaa ka jhonka thi aur Malhar gehra samundar jo chahkar bhi hawaa ke saath nahin chal sakta. Bas hawaa ki shararatein uske man mein lehrein hi utha sakti hain. Vaise neele suit aur bade bade jhumkon me Kalyani badi saloni lag rahi thi magar Malhar ko to Kalyani hamesha hi pariyon si lagti thi.


Kaanon mein parne vale Samundar ke shor ne jaise Malhar ke man mein saawan laa diya. Kehte hain insaan samundar se door ja sakta h magar...samundar samundar insaan se door kabhi nahi hota. Aur Samundar ke alawa Malhar ka dil bhi to yahaan Sawantwadi me hi choot gaya tha...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hayye pragyu kya story hai Sawantwadi ki jagah hamare Malhar ka dil le gayi 😻😻majja aagaya sachmain tumahari poorane jamane ki stories alag hi majja laa deti hai vo pyaar ka jamana aaye haaye 😳yahan mallu aur kallu pehle se ek dusre ko jaante hai Malharji to pehle se hi lattu hai hamari kalyani pe dekhte hai ye safar kahan le jata hai humein

Pragyu baby ek request hai iss FF main humein pyari si ending chahiye tere ffs kitni achi hoti hai peechli vali kitni achhi thi lekin rula gayi thi mujhein iss baar pls mat rulana aur inn dono ko mila dena

Mujhein ye samundar aur jhoka hawa ka milta hua dekhna hai 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it pragya...jb bhi time mile update zarur krna

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow yaar Pragya 🤩🤩🤩🤩


It’s amazing 👏


Ye cassette ka phasna, pen se ghumana, naye gane bharwana

Ye sab humne bhi kiya hai..

Nostalgia 🤧


kalma in 90s

Malharji gehra samandar aur kallu hawa ka jhonka..

Already loving this story…



One of my favourite song..

Is song par to har ladki ne kabhi na kabhi dance kiya hoga 😆


You always does magic with your stories…

It literally take us to that time period and feels like time travelling..


Just loved it yaar..


Kabhi aana tu meri gali tujhe palko pe rakhunga ji

Euphoria vibes…



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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

Hayye pragyu kya story hai Sawantwadi ki jagah hamare Malhar ka dil le gayi 😻😻majja aagaya sachmain tumahari poorane jamane ki stories alag hi majja laa deti hai vo pyaar ka jamana aaye haaye 😳yahan mallu aur kallu pehle se ek dusre ko jaante hai Malharji to pehle se hi lattu hai hamari kalyani pe dekhte hai ye safar kahan le jata hai humein

Pragyu baby ek request hai iss FF main humein pyari si ending chahiye tere ffs kitni achi hoti hai peechli vali kitni achhi thi lekin rula gayi thi mujhein iss baar pls mat rulana aur inn dono ko mila dena

Mujhein ye samundar aur jhoka hawa ka milta hua dekhna hai 😳


Vanshu Rani aapki iccha sar aankhon par. Is baar maine socha h ek cute si ending doongi hamare KalMa ko.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Loved it pragya...jb bhi time mile update zarur krna


Thank you Prakriti :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Wow yaar Pragya 🤩🤩🤩🤩


It’s amazing 👏


Ye cassette ka phasna, pen se ghumana, naye gane bharwana

Ye sab humne bhi kiya hai..

Nostalgia 🤧


kalma in 90s

Malharji gehra samandar aur kallu hawa ka jhonka..

Already loving this story…



One of my favourite song..

Is song par to har ladki ne kabhi na kabhi dance kiya hoga 😆


You always does magic with your stories…

It literally take us to that time period and feels like time travelling..


Just loved it yaar..


Kabhi aana tu meri gali tujhe palko pe rakhunga ji

Euphoria vibes…




Thank you so much Priyu 💞


90s will always be special. Us time ki vibe hi alag thi...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I'm loving this 90s set up Pragya..

Malhar checking weight on weighing machine in the railway station..

Casette getting stuck..

It all triggers memories.

And you have very good flow of the language in classic set up..

Superb.. Continue whenever you get time.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sehreemstory

Wow so beautiful😍😍


Thank you so much.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

I'm loving this 90s set up Pragya..

Malhar checking weight on weighing machine in the railway station..

Casette getting stuck..

It all triggers memories.

And you have very good flow of the language in classic set up..

Superb.. Continue whenever you get time.


Thank you very much Rekha 💕💕💕

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