Story on upcoming
If fatejo love story is to kick start after separation track this is how i want it to be
Just a short one simple straightforward
If any of the forum writers keen to rewrite it their style go ahead
SEPARATION TRACK - MY STORY
It's been three months of fateh and tejo's marriage and as the days passed tejo was drawn to fateh and started realising her love for him but unfortunately he didnt feel the same for her as he was not able to forget his first love
Her sister jasmin
Jasmin gippy"s marrage was called off as the former ran away on the wedding day leaving a note behind that she still loves fateh and believes that he still loves her. She cant think of anyone else apart from him .
Sandhus going through society humiliation . But not to worry as there wont be any heartattacks . Well their canada dreams are not fulfilled yet so none of them will die that early especially biji. She will leave long to fulfill her dreams and perhaps either past away in the flight on the way to her dream destination due to over excitement or tried to jump out from the plane with the help of a parachute due to impatience as the flight was taking too long to reach canada . Funeral in canada and on her coffin written
Dreams fulfilled
Only one way ticket
No return
Coming back to the story
Tejo will be devastated with sandhus humiliations as she loved her family dearly. She would blame herself for keeping fateh and jasmin apart and that would be the time where she will also understand their pain especially fateh's . That's the time she understands what is true love as now she herself is experiencing it in the first place and decides to
Sacrifice
She will write a note of taking away her own life stating she was the cause of fateh jasmin separation and she cant bear her family humiliation. Takes all blames on herself . She wants fateh to fulfill her last wish
Marry her sister
Tejo in actual will not suicide but will make it look like one. She knows her family will disagree if she divorces fateh and the latter himself wontt agree to it in the first place
Tejo will pretend to jump from a cliff leaving the note with her mangal sutra behind at the cliff area as there will defo be a search mission for her
Virks will file a missing report eventually coming to know her death to which fateh will be devastated but decides to fulfill her last wish
Fateh will search jasmin and bring her home
Their marriage announced to take place after tejo"s barsi completed
Fateh will not feel the same for jasmin anymore. He will keep thinking about tejo and as time passes will realise his love for her . On the wedding day at the mandap he will backout confessing his love for tejo and live his life with her memories . Amrik will marry jasmin to save her honour and sandhus as well as virks from humiliations
Meanwhile tejo will start a new life elsewhere meet new people and new ventures of life with some old memories of fateh with her. Thinking he has already married her sister and is happy
How will they meet again
After a month of jasmin fateh marriage called off fateh participated in national boxing championship forced by his father as he was not ready for it and the venue was the same place that tejo resided
He was devastated
Not prepared for the match
Filled with her memories
Eventually bumps into her a day before the match in a mall where she runs away after seeing him
He will be shocked to see her alive and goes after her
Managed to get hold of her
A face off between both
He blames her for keeping him in the dark
She blames he never loved her
Eventually both confessed with some emotional scene
Fateh wins the match
With tejo as his motivator
Brings home championship and wife as well
If a separation track is to take place this is what i want it to be like
My story
Ps
It is not necessary that a separation track will take place but if it does i would wish for this
Reason
Tejo needs to move on from sacrifices
Stops being a babysitter for fateh
Fateh has to realise her importance and the best is when she's away
Fateh leaving jasmin on the mandap confessing love for tejo will be biggest slap for her deeds and ego
And for her repetitive dialogue
Fateh can never love tejo
Only me
Aek chutki bejaungi toh bhag ker ayega
Arey meza toh teb ayega jab fateh mandap mey chod key bhag jayega tejo key liye
For amrik the chamcha
He will face her wrath after marrying her
Gurpreet will face her wrath after she answers her back and refuses to help out in hse chores
Will realise tejo"s value
Sandhus regret for not listening to mami
In a nutshell
A blessing in diguise
Sab key sab sudher jayengey!
For trp
It wont be affected
Story will be intriguing especiallg fateh moving away from jasmin naturally and realising his feelings for tejo instead during their marriage track
Viewers will be keen to know when fatejo will reunite
I would prefer this type of separation rather than the rona dhona types with tejo crying in one corner etc
Let it be she moved away
All will learn a lesson then
If u dislike my story
Pls dont be offended
Just ignore
It's only a story
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
Shiv Shakti
