RaghVi OS: Strumming in Silence - Page 6

I'm so late to reply here.

That was simply said poetic Reem. When it started I thought they were strangers, but towards the end you made is so beautiful. I loved how Raghav was rain and Pallavi was sunshine. So amazing written. I was totally flowing.

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

Thank you dear 🤗 I saw you changed the title ❤️

I read the story a second time! It sits so well esp when there’s silence around us and the weather is chilling! There’s a certain melancholy about it in the beginning and then it gets happier 😊

I really liked it---it set so well with the story--as there is just silence there and little words spoken

I am glad you read it the second time..I always vouch for happy ending--I didn't aim for giving sadness a major chunk of the OS but for Pallavi to bring shine into Raghav's life--melacholy should be there.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I'm so late to reply here.

That was simply said poetic Reem. When it started I thought they were strangers, but towards the end you made is so beautiful. I loved how Raghav was rain and Pallavi was sunshine. So amazing written. I was totally flowing.

It's all fine Keechu

Thank you so much and I am glad you liked it❤

I hope you had uninterrupted flow while reading this😆

Originally posted by: ReemShah

It's all fine Keechu

Thank you so much and I am glad you liked it❤

I hope you had uninterrupted flow while reading this😆

Actually I didn't. I got interrupted. And that interruption was you and your pm. 😆

Then I read from the start again.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Actually I didn't. I got interrupted. And that interruption was you and your pm. 😆

Then I read from the start again.

Aww...shucks

and sorry for the interruption I caused...happened unintentionally though😆

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Aww...shucks

and sorry for the interruption I caused...happened unintentionally though😆

It's fine.. I know it was unintentional.

This is such a serene OS...I loved it

the way you have weaved the words was so beautiful...loved how you kept the identities anonymous..it wasn't until Pallavi's thoughts were revealed that I got to know that the stranger was indeed Raghav.

Keep writing more

I am sorry Trista...wasn't meaning to tag you..but did it accidentally

it just that your usernames are similar

For some reason I am unable to quote the posts...but thank you so much

Glad that you loved the OS❤

Originally posted by: ReemShah

For some reason I am unable to quote the posts...but thank you so much

Glad that you loved the OS❤

It's a good. I really love your stories so much that I cant help but comment on them