ShiVi FF ~ Aarzoo (updated part 13, pg 50, 27/2/2022) - Page 21

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Posted: 4 years ago

Woooow read the last 3 parts in a row, what a twist!! It was so intense, so many emotions. I’m scared for Raavi when she wakes up. Just loveeeeeee the conversation between the gods, its so different. Love the way this story is going. ❤️

More,more, moreeeeee ❤️


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: lourel24


I want to say please please don't do that but then it's your story so I can't force you but that doesn't mean I can't request right!!😂. So here it goes please please please don't let shiva do that.I would love to read showing his vulnerability n letting Ravi know how wrong she has done.Ravi pampering n showing her love n attention to him which in tirn will make them Realize why they are crazy for each other but no more hurting eachother.Request karne mein kya jata baki it's your story n your decision 😂😘😚

Don't worry I won't be too harsh with ShiVi😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: manveer123

Both are dangerously stupid

Gid knows what will shiva do to ravi🤗

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A creative punishment 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SandhiaM

Woooow read the last 3 parts in a row, what a twist!! It was so intense, so many emotions. I’m scared for Raavi when she wakes up. Just loveeeeeee the conversation between the gods, its so different. Love the way this story is going. ❤️

More,more, moreeeeee ❤️


Thanks a lot 😊🤗

Will update soon😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh God! A lot happened in the last two chapters. I never thought that Raavi will take such a drastic step.😭 And also, the stir occurred between ShiVi on the diwali night was unexpected too. Shiva ka kuch nahi ho sakta, really. Both Shiva and Raavi have thick head.

I'm happy with Dev and Rishita marriage, thanks to Krish. But now, I'm really worried for Dev. Bhagwaan hi bachale Dev ko, because Shiva is too high on emotions right now. He is in ready to explode mode.


I hope Raavi will be fine soon. Shiva is too stubborn, I must say. He put vermillion on an unconscious Raavi just like that? But still, he's Shiva. His deewangi, junoon is on another level. I'm really excited and looking forward for reading the next chapter.

Update soon.


As always, loved loved loved your updates. I'm loving the way, the story is progressing. You've done an amazing work. 🤗❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 4

I love the way Shiva is affected by Ravi but hate to see the brothers fighting for a girl😭

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Posted: 4 years ago


Yeh baat toh sahi hai, raavi's tube light will probably light up in the last chapter 😆

She won't know who she's married to? This sounds super interesting and fun😈 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Unique.Sheep

Part 4

I love the way Shiva is affected by Ravi but hate to see the brothers fighting for a girl😭

Ladai toh honi hi thi😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 9

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Shiva glared daggers at both of his brothers as they continued looking inside Raavi's room. Honestly, he feels like chopping their heads off, especially Dev's but he has other ways to make him pay.

Tum dono kaha the subah se??

Shiva looked at Rishita at Dhara Bhabhi's question and raised his eyebrows as he saw the bracelet in Rishita's hand. It looks awfully similar to a marital chain.

Wo Dhara Bhabhi hum.....

Dev started saying something and then looked at Rishita tensed. Then only he saw the vermilion in Rishita's hairline which she has hidden by her hair. He sighed as he realised where these idiots were.

Gaumbi!! Aap Bhabhi ko lekar ghar jao, maa akeli Hain. Aur Rishita ke papa ko bhi khabar kar dena.

Shiva said in a firm voice and saw everyone looking at him tensed. But then Gaumbi nodded at him with a slight smile.

Rishita! Tum bhi saath chalo. Tumhe ghar chhod dete hain.

Rishita looked at Dev tensed at Dhara Bhabhi's words and Shiva tried not to roll his eyes. He looked at Krish and saw him thinking about something. Shiva is sure that he's thinking something idiotic. Besides he needs these idiots here.

Rishita se mujhe baat karni hai Bhabhi, app log jao.

Shiva said and then sat on the waiting bench glaring at the three of them as they sat on the bench in front of him after Gaumbi and Dhara Bhabhi left.

S... Shiva tu aise ghoor kyu raha hai??

Shiva raised his eyebrows as he heard Krish's slightly scared voice.

Tum teeno ne mujhe bewakoof samajh rakha hai kya??

Shiva asked annoyed and saw all three of them looking at him tensed.

Kya bol raha hai Shiva??

Krish asked laughing nervously and Shiva just rolled his eyes at him. He remembered clearly what excuse this Krish gave him of being away from here.

Tu so gaya tha isliye tune call nahi uthaye??

Shiva asked looking at Krish pointedly and Krish looked at Dev and Rishita tensed.

Ghar pe to tu tha nahi, kaha jaake soya tha?

Shiva asked again raising his eyebrows and tried to control his smirk at all of their panicked faces.

Wo...wo main Mandir....

Shiva looked at Krish amused at his words. Looks like Dev married Rishita in front of this idiot, or may be it's this idiot's plan only.

Mandir me sone gaya tha??

Shiva asked looking at Krish bored and saw him gulping slightly. Shiva then looked at Rishita pointedly.

Mangalsutra haath pe pehen lene se wo dikhna band nahi ho jata.

He said and saw her looking at him with wide eyes. Dev gulped and Rishita moved her hand behind her back.

Tu ye sab chhod pehle ye bata Raavi ne suicide kyu kiya?

Shiva gritted his teeth annoyed at Krish's question. As if he doesn't know why all this happened. Maami already told him about why Raavi was so upset in the haldi function and why she was so mad afterwards. His Maami has heard Raavi and Rishita's conversation.

Jaise tujhe pata hi nahi hai.

Shiva said and saw Krish gulping nervously. He took out Raavi's phone from his pocket and gave it to Krish.

Raavi ka phone hai ye. Usne teen logo ke liye message record kiye the, wo bhi kal raat ko. Maami ke liye, Dev ke liye aur mere liye.

Shiva said and saw Krish looking at him confused. He knows what Krish is thinking, he thought the same when he saw the messages in her phone.

Why would she wait till morning to send these messages?? Why didn't she try to cut her wrist at night??

The answer is very clear to him. She always planned to come back, and she made sure that all hospitals are open before slitting her wrist.

Even her doctor was confused about her cut. He told Shiva that he's almost sure that in order to cut her wrist in a safe way she actually cut her wrist in a wrong way and that's why her case became complicated.

The matter is pretty clear to him. She never planned to suicide. She just wanted to scare them. So this time she's going to be scared too. And he has planned a perfect revenge for his idiot brothers too.

Shiva looked up at three confused faces in front of him and started telling them what had happened here since morning.

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Krish blinked his eyes shocked at everything he learned. Shiva married Raavi here too. He shook his head trying to clear his head. And to top of it the message Raavi sent to Shiva is making him curious. 2 years ago, Raavi ran away from their house amidst Diwali celebration crying, while Shiva was actually smug the whole night. What the hell could have happened??

Aisa kya hua tha 2 saal pehle diwali pe??

Krish asked narrowing his eyes at Shiva as his brother smirked looking at all of them.

We kissed.

Krish's gaped at Shiva as he just shrugged while saying this. He just can't believe this. Raavi and Shiva kissed each other 2 years ago?? Yet they were marrying someone else, and also they both were super jealous of each other's partners. Damn!! These two are too much.

Hold on!! Tune Raavi ko kiss kiya tha??

Dev asked totally perplexed and Krish bit his lip to stop his laugh at Shiva's wicked look as he nodded his head in yes.

Phir wo poore Somnath me mujhse pyaar ka izhaar kyu karti phir rahi thi??

Krish raised his eyebrows as Shiva just rolled his eyes at Dev's question. He's almost sure that Shiva is not going to leave any of them.

Wo sab chhod tu, aage kya karna hai ye sun.

Shiva said firmly and Krish frowned at Shiva's look. Something is not right.

Ek minute, tune maang bhari hai Raavi ki, teri patni hai wo, ab tum dono ki phir se shaadi hogi, aur iske alawa bhi kuch karna hai??

Dev asked and Krish took a deep breath as Shiva glared at Dev. Raavi Bhabhi is going to live her worst nightmare for sure.

Shit!! Raavi Bhabhi ke hosh uddne wale hain.

Krish whispered to both Dev and Rishita and saw them looking at Shiva tensed.

Bolo kya karna hai.

Rishita asked and they all blinked at the anger present in Shiva's eyes. Krish looked up and prayed for the well being of Raavi. She really needs all the prayers.

Krish's eyes widened in horror as soon as Shiva completed telling them about his plan. Oh freak!!

Krish looked at Dev and Rishita only to see them looking at Shiva as if he's gone mad. Well, may be Shiva has gone insane.

Before anyone could say anything to Shiva they saw doctor coming out of Raavi's room.

Don't worry Mr. Pandya, aapki wife ab theek Hain. Kuch time me unhe hosh aa jayega.

Shiva smirked hearing doctor's words and Krish rolled his eyes at his expressions. Its time to wreak havoc in Pandya's lives.

Aapko mera ek kaam karna hai doctor.

Shiva said and Krish looked at the doctor tensed as Shiva recited his whole plan. Krish thought that the doctor will say no but what astonished him was the way doctor grinned looking at Shiva. What the hell!!

Theek hai ho Jayega.

Krish, Dev and Rishita looked at the doctor stunned as soon as he said that. Krish hit his forehead with his palm as Shiva smirked at them.

Bula saare gharwalo ko Krish. Aaj iss chudail ko aisa sadma dunga ki zindagi bhar yaad rakhegi.

Krish looked at Dev and saw him looking at Shiva almost panicked. Krish chuckled as he realised that Shiva actually put Dev in a seriously bad position.

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Raavi opened her eyes and flinched at the bright light in the room. She blinked her eyes rapidly trying to adjust to the light.

Oh my god!! Aapko hosh aa gaya??

Raavi looked beside her startled as a lady almost shouted in happiness. She frowned thinking about where she is and realized that it looks like a hospital room.

Doctor!! Doctor!!

Raavi closed her eyes again at the Nurse's loud voice. She took a deep breath as she remembered the incidents from morning. She was furious at everyone and decided to take matters in her hand.

She planned a suicide and tried her best to not to cut her hand too much and now she's in hospital.

Kya hua sister??

Doctor entered the room and looked at the nurse confused.

Dekhiye patient ko hosh aa gaya.

Raavi frowned as she saw doctor looking at her dreamily. What the hell is going on??

Yakeen nahi hota mujhe. Itne waqt baad aap hosh me aayi Hain.

Raavi blinked her eyes stunned at his words. Wait!! She cut her hand just today morning, right?? Then why the hell they all are behaving as if she's unconscious from a long time??

Main kuch samjhi nahi.

Raavi asked looking at the doctor and the nurse only to see them smiling widely at her.

Aap picchle 4 saal se coma me thi.

Raavi gasped in shock at his words. She shook her head in a no, unable to believe what she just heard. This can't happen. 4 years?? 4 freaking years??

Sabne ummeed hi chhod di thi, bas ek Mr. Pandya hi the jinhe yakeen tha ki aap unhe chhodkar kahi nahi jayengi.

Raavi's heartbeats increased hearing the doctor. She knows Shiva will always make sure that she's okay. No matter how much he hated her, she knows that he cares for her the most.

Unka pyaar jeet gaya aur aap wapas aa gayi. Wo bahar hi Hain, milne aaye the aapse. Main bula deta hu.

Raavi smiled widely and nodded at him in yes. Did Shiva tell them that he loves her?? She waited with baited breath for her bhootnath but the person that entered the room stunned her to the core, for it wasn't Shiva, it was Dev.

Dev?? Tum??

Raavi asked slightly tensed as he hugged her tightly. She clenched her fists as he kissed her forehead.

Raavi, thank god!! Itne saalo se tumhara intezaar kar raha hu main.

Raavi frowned at his teary eyed look and pain filled voice. Why is he behaving like this?? Didn't he get her message??

Baaki sab ??

Raavi asked as Dev moved back and saw him smiling slightly.

Maine unhe inform kar diya hai thodi der se aa jayenge.

Raavi nodded closing her eyes again. She really was unconscious from last 4 years. This is ridiculous. She wants to meet just one person right now.

Raavi!! Meri bacchi!!

Raavi opened her eyes startled at Maasi's voice and smiled as she hugged her Maasi. Raavi's eyes twinkled as she saw Shiva entering the room along with the whole Pandya family. There's just one more member with them which Raavi didn't like a bit.

Rishita came behind Shiva all decked up as a married woman.

Maaf karna beta par Shiva ne zidd pakad li thi aur koi usey mana nahi kar paya. Tere hospital me aane ke 2 din baad hi Shiva ne shaadi kar li.

Raavi blinked her eyes trying to hold back her tears at what her Maasi just said. She looked at Shiva and saw him looking at Rishita with a slight smile while Rishita looked down with a blush. Raavi closed her eyes letting her tears fall. He really doesn't care. If only she didn't do this suicide drama then Shiva wouldn't be married right now.

Dhara Bhabhi!! Aapne jo boli thi wo saari taiyaari karwa di hai maine.

Raavi opened her eyes at Shiva's voice and frowned at him. What is he talking about??

Ab jaldi se theek ho phir teri aur Dev ki shaadi dhoom dhaam se karayenge.

Raavi looked at her Dhara di with wide eyes as soon as she said that. Why?? Why would they all do that?? She isn't going to marry Dev. They all left her room one by one and she saw Shiva and Rishita turning around to leave.

This is serious nonsense. How could he marry someone else that too like this??

Shiva ruk!! Mujhe baat karni hai tujhse.

Raavi said and sighed as Shiva turned around but he looked at her too casually. Where is the Shiva whose eyes held fire when he greeted her.

Rishita tum jao please.

Raavi said as she doesn't want to say anything in front of anyone else. Raavi gritted her teeth annoyed as Shiva grabbed Rishita's hand tightly.

Wo biwi hai meri. Usse kuch nahi chhupata main wo yahin rahegi.

Raavi's blood boiled at Shiva's response and she finally knew what to do. She's not going to allow anyone to come in between them, wife or not. But before she could say anything she heard Dev's voice. Now what does he want??

Raavi!! I am sorry.

Raavi frowned at Dev's words as he sat in front of her taking her hands in his. Wait!! Why's he apologizing?? What's going on??

Kisliye??

Raavi asked confused and saw Shiva and Rishita smiling calmly at Dev and Shiva nodded at Dev slightly.

Wo tumse bina pucche tumhari maang bhar di thi maine.

Raavi sat up abruptly at Dev's declaration and she even saw Krish entering her room but right now her whole attention is on Dev's sheepish look. How dare he!!

She expected this type of behaviour from Shiva, but Dev?? She took a deep breath feeling rage course through her veins.

Tumhe mera mail mila tha??

Raavi asked removing the IV attached to her hand and glared at Dev. He nodded at her meekly and her anger increased even more.

Ye kya kar rahi ho Raavi.

Dev asked but she just ignored him and moved towards the side table grabbing the knife from the fruit bowl. She's not going to leave this man alive.

She saw Shiva standing in front of her with a furious look and smiled sadly.

Chinta mat kar, iss baar khudko maarne ki bewakoofi nahi karungi main.

Raavi told him and turned around to move towards Dev.

Isse kya karogi??

Krish asked looking at the knife in her hand tensed and she gave a slight smile to Krish.

Dev Pandya aaj tum zinda nahi bachne wale.

Raavi declared and ran behind Dev. She's not going to let anyone come in between her and Shiva. She's going to kill everyone, whether its Dev or Rishita.

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Shiva moved back and stood in between Krish and Rishita trying to control his laugh at the scene in front of her. No one could even think about how peaceful this is for him. Raavi running behind Dev to kill him.

Shiva!! Roko usey.

Shiva chuckled at Rishita's words and saw Krish looking at him tensed. Why would he even do that?? He's enjoying this.

Bachpan se aaj tak isne Dev ke naam se bohot pakaya hai, aaj usi Dev ko maarna chahti hai. Thodi der ruk.

Shiva said almost excited as Dev shouted and dodged Raavi's throw at him running away from Raavi.

Tab tak main ek din ki widow ban jaungi.

Shiva sighed as he saw Rishita's panicked face and saw Raavi actually ready to kill Dev.

He grabbed the knife and threw it away indicating Dev to move back.

Bhai hai wo Mera. Dur hatt usse. Agar wo mara to widhwa ho jayegi tu.

Shiva said to Raavi firmly and saw her in eyes flare even more.

Chalega mujhe. Lekin pehle ye Dev marega aur phir ye Rishita.

Shiva bit his lip to stop his laugh at Raavi's declaration and saw Rishita looking at him horrified. But before he could say anything they all heard Krish's voice.

Raavi Bhabhi!! Rishita Bhabhi ko kuch mat karna please, warna Piyu ka kya hoga?

Shiva frowned as he heard a stranger's name from Krish. Who's Piyu??

Piyu??

Shiva asked looking at Krish confused and saw him gulping nervously. Okay!! What the hell is he trying to do??

Kaun Piyu??

Raavi asked with all her attention on Krish and Shiva saw Rishita and Dev stiffening slightly. Looks like this Krish is going to do something super idiotic.

Arey Shiva aur Rishita Bhabhi ki beti.

Shiva's eyes widened at Krish's words as Raavi fainted just after she gave him a horrified look. He picked up Raavi and put her on the bed and then turned around glaring daggers at Krish.

Abe gadhede!! Ye kya raita failaya hai?

Shiva shouted totally irritated and saw Krish flinching lightly. His brother is so mad.

Sorry!! Munh se nikal gaya.

Shiva rolled his eyes at Krish's apologetic look. Now let Raavi know the truth, she'll kill them all.

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Raavi opened her eyes and saw Shiva coming inside her room. Her eyes filled with tears as she imagined Shiva as the father of a girl. He would never leave Rishita now, and she could never force Rishita to leave Shiva. She would never be responsible for making someone orphan.

Teri medicines Hain.

Her heart hurt to listen to his voice. How would she be able to live knowing that Shiva is someone's husband and father??

Tu aise shaadi kaise kar sakta hai? Aur bacchi?

Raavi asked as he sat in front of her with a serene look. How could he be this calm?? Where is her fireball Shiva.

Kya farq padta hai? Doctors ne to jawab de hi diya tha. Humne bhi maan liya tha ki tu wapas nahi aane wali.

Raavi flinched at his dismissive tone. Raavi blinked her eyes letting her tears fall. Did he ever hear her voice mail??

Tujhe mail nahi mila tha mera??

Raavi asked softly and Shiva shrugged as if it doesn't matter. Raavi sighed trying not to cry at Shiva's nonchalant look.

Main to hamesha tere kahe ka ulta hi karta hu. Kaun si nayi baat hai?

Raavi looked away from Shiva absolutely hating the way he's treating her. He has never been passive when its about her. And now it feels that he doesn't even care if something happened to her.

Shiva?? Tum yaha?

Raavi looked ahead startled and saw her Anita di entering the room.

Wo Rishita ko tension ho rahi thi Raavi ki, to main medicines le aaya. Ab aap to jaante ho aisi haalat me uske liye tension lena theek nahi hai.

Raavi stiffened at the way Shiva said the words. What condition?? What's wrong with Rishita??

Tu uske paas ja. Main hu yahan.

Anita di said and Shiva almost ran outside. She turned sideways on the bed and let her tears fall.

Rishita ko kya hua hai??

Raavi asked unable to curb her curiosity. Is something wrong with Rishita??

Arey haan tujhe kaise pata Hoga.

She heard her Anita di and turned to look at her. What is she talking about.

Kya??

Raavi asked almost scared to know the answer but what she heard almost stopped her breath.

Rishita maa ban ne wali hai.

Raavi gasped taking deep breaths and dipped her face in the pillow as she cried her heart out. She just can't believe what her life had become. Shiva had moved on and removed her from his life completely. What would she do now??

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Shiva sighed as he stood outside his house as his Bhabhi welcomed both Dev and Rishita with all the rituals. He hates the way Raavi cried when Anita di said about Rishita's pregnancy. But he had to make sure that she will never ever try this stunt again, not even for an act. Because he knows how a simple act could go wrong. He had almost lost his Chudail today. And he's not going to lose her, never ever.

Yaar Shiva, ye drama kab tak karna hai??

Shiva smirked slightly at Dev's words as they all entered the house. As if he's going to leave this Dev so easily.

I mean aise accha nahi lagega na agar Rishita tere room me rahegi toh.

Shiva raised his eyebrows at Dev as soon as he said that and saw Gaumbi and Dhara Bhabhi trying to control their laughs.

Kise accha nahi lagega?? Tujhe??

Shiva asked and Dev looked away from him embarrassed. Krish chuckled and Shiva glared at him. He didn't forget Krish's contribution in all this mess.

Isiliye toh kiya hai ye sab. Samjha nahi abhi tak?

Shiva asked from Dev chuckling slightly as Dev looked at him with wide eyes.

Shiva!!

Shiva ignored Dev's voice as he sat down on the couch thinking about what he planned for his Chipkali for tomorrow. She has been discharged from the hospital and is on complete bed rest in her house.

Ye sab jaruri hai kya Shiva?

Shiva sighed as his Bhabhi asked sitting beside him. All this is actually important. It's important for that Chipkali to understand that there are boundaries in every game.

Jaruri hai Bhabhi.

Shiva said firmly and felt a hand on his shoulder. He looked beside him only to see Gaumbi smiling slightly.

But ye baccho wala twist kaha se aya??

Shiva rolled his eyes at Krish's question.

Ek baccha tu laya aur dusra Anita di ne chipka Diya.

Shiva said huffing slightly. He actually doesn't like how hurt Raavi was by the news.

Dusra baccha??

Rishita asked confused and Shiva just shrugged nonchalantly.

Haan Raavi ke liye tum pregnant ho.

Shiva said and saw Rishita looking at him almost panicked.

Shiva tum mujhe marwaoge pakka.

Shiva grinned slightly at Rishita's words. Well, Raavi is going to kill her when she gets to know the truth, but all these children were not his idea.

Baccho ka idea mera nahi tha.

Shiva said and Rishita huffed slightly annoyed. Shiva looked at Dev and smirked slightly as he saw Dev looking at Rishita with a slight smile. Now that he remember today is their wedding night.

Chalo!!

Shiva said to Rishita and saw her giving Dev a pleading look.

Rishita ko Shiva ke room me rehne ki kya jarurat hai? I mean jab Raavi ayegi tab reh legi Rishita Shiva ke Saath.

Dev said looking at Gaumbi and Dhara Bhabhi and he could see that they're going to agree with Dev and he's not going to let this happen.

Nahi!!

Shiva said firmly and everyone looked at him tensed.

Aap sab Raavi ko jaante ho kabhi bhi tapak sakti hai idhar.

Shiva said looking at Dhara Bhabhi and she sighed nodding her head in yes.

Tu Shiva ke saath hi ja Rishita.

Rishita stormed towards his room glaring at Dev and Shiva smirked at Dev slightly moving towards his room.

He's going to change and leave for Raavi's house after dinner as Anita di messaged him that she took her medicines and is resting now. He's not going to let her move away from his sight, not even for a second.

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That's it for today😉. See you all soon.












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EPppppppp🖤

I loved it!

Bahut bahut maza aya mujhe padh ke!

Ab please jaldi jaldi update de dena!!

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