MHRW drabble : Reset - Page 5

Originally posted by: Prriyam

looks, we messed it beyond redemption. 😂

thumb rule - dont respond, if not tagged.

Or, break that rule.

Ignore that rule. was a one time thing...

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

not sure... I guess sarcasm was to subtle to get....

I felt you were a bit sidelined towards Raghav here and painted Pallavi as bad which happened because you are not liking what happening in the show.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

u guys r too smart for ur own good.

Too late happy realization.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I felt you were a bit sidelined towards Raghav here and painted Pallavi as bad which happened because you are not liking what happening in the show.

small query... y P is looking bad... there was nothing in writing to suggest nything...

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

small query... y P is looking bad... there was nothing in writing to suggest nything...

I can't really pinpoint one thing. But reading through it I felt like she hurt Raghav choosing Mandar. I mean I felt a bit sadness in Raghav, a longing but Pallavi looked so happy and enjoying.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

I guess u guys got it cause u knew my POV...

May be.

I was a bit amazed seeing the drabble since I thought you won't be writing anything on them anytime soon.

But with the first dialogue of Pallavi I got what you were trying to do. And by the middle I was laughing.

Originally posted by: Prriyam

it would come as a shock to whoever read! And the way you painted this as a wonderful happy scenario, it would have made it very confusing!

This is in no one’s mind, as an expected continuation of the tangent.

Actually I was planning something in this scenario but with a happy Raghvi ending.

Only Lateuser can give this happy ending. 😆

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I can't really pinpoint one thing. But reading through it I felt like she hurt Raghav choosing Mandar. I mean I felt a bit sadness in Raghav, a longing but Pallavi looked so happy and enjoying.

u cant blame that on writing then... its what u think...

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

May be.

I was a bit amazed seeing the drabble since I thought you won't be writing anything on them anytime soon.

But with the first dialogue of Pallavi I got what you were trying to do. And by the middle I was laughing.

I was laughing whole time...this is the most fun i had while writing... no use of brain. no proof read... was a fun experience.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Actually I was planning something in this scenario but with a happy Raghvi ending.

Only Lateuser can give this happy ending. 😆

no u write... i might be done with dem.,..