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R – Farhad… what are the meetings lined up for today? The South African and European contract signing needs to be done today itself. Profit margin in each is above 80 and we need those to be done anyhow. And also do make sure promotional events for our new line up is also planned before the weekend. It has to be biggest jewelry opening event of the country. Do make sure of that. Jayati Jewels will reach new heights by the end of this year and I will make sure of it.

P – Aai… Mandhar was asking if anything needs to be brought for the Pooja. He is going to the market with baba, so if anything is needed they can get it.

P – Yes aai… I also told him the same. He has just came home but he is not listening to anything. He is saying we are just making him captive at home as he has returned after two years. I tried telling him but he is not listening to me, you only tell him. Nobody listens to their wives anyhow, mother only needs to step in.

R – It was good doing business with you Mr. Smith. Jayati Jewels will surely be a valuable partner in expanding your business footprint in African market. The design and quality is unmatched as you already know and our own strong supply chain will boost your business too. You are working with biggest jewelry brand of India.

P – Mandhar… Aai is calling you for Pooja lets go.

P – We can talk afterwards. She will come here. We are already late for Pooja. Everyone is so happy that you came back. We lost hope after that night. Aai baba didn’t showed their grief to support me but they were broken badly. But now you have come and everything will be alright. We will resume back our life, our dreams that were halted on that unfateful night. Everything was taken away from us. You don’t know how happy we are that you are back.

P – Ok… ok. No more tears and crying now. It’s a happy day and we will celebrate it like that.

R – Reddy bring the ice. Today I will enjoy. We bagged two big deals. Jayati jewels is on verge of entry in top 10 brands across world. This is the day I was waiting for. Amma and nana always had to suffer because of our economic condition. I promised to myself that I will make everything alright. I will wash out all the dirt thrown on their names because of me. They will be so proud of me today. Their name will be among biggest brands in the world. I did it amma nana. I did it.

P – Everything was done properly. It was so good to see everyone happy after so long. After you left on that day, nothing was same. Shop was at loss, baba got heart attack, Mansi’s shaadi got broken, I got married and baba stopped talking to me. But now as you are back, everything will be back to normal. We will make everything normal together. You always told me before marriage about your family, our family and you were right. That night you went missing but aai baba didn’t left me. They fought for me against society. They gave me the family I never had. You were not there but they treated me as their daughter. But there was always emptiness in their eyes. They never forget you. I never forget what happened to you. I needed to know what happened to you and I needed the closure. You gave me so much. I could never think of what all you told me. You pushed me for higher studies. You gave me the family. An orphan, a family. I kept looking for what happened that day and by the grace of bappa, you came back to us, you came back to our life.

R – Amma… you would have been so happy to see. I cleared everything of our family name. Nana’s name is clear. Your name is clear. Nobody can raise questions on our family now. No one. Jayati jewels is at top amma. Our family name is respected.

P – Mandhar… leave somebody will come. Aai was calling me I need to go. You… we will talk at night. Ok… if I say you will leave right? Ok…I… love… you… now leave.

Pallavi ran out of the room with a beaming smile on her face. After a long time she was with her family. Everyone was happy and smiling. Her dream came true as her family was complete. Her eyes were full of possibilities and her life seemed to moving towards greener pastures.

Raghav sipped his drink with glimmer in his eyes as his family name was cleaned of all charges. He returned all the money with a lot of interest to make the same guys chant praises of his family who shamed them and the brand respect for Jayati jewels were just filling his heart with the happiness to have finally been successful in making his family happy again.

Everything was great and the future seemed bright.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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there is only a single sided conversation of both Raghav and Pallavi yet the name of the drabble is MHRW and not RaghVi,

An alternate ending to what it may have been if these two people's life decided not to tangle with each other.

Both of them got they want---their family's happiness

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ReemShah

there is only a single sided conversation of both Raghav and Pallavi yet the name of the drabble is MHRW and not RaghVi,

An alternate ending to what it may have been if these two people's life decided not to tangle with each other.

Both of them got they want---their family's happiness

There is no RaghVi in the drabble... so it doesn't made sense to me to name it that way.

Its not more of an alternate ending but what made sense for if the tangent is extended instead of cut and chop every few days.

And the end both always say that... so that is what should be assumed.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amused!


The wound or the frustration or the dejection or even the fury, is running deep, I see!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Pallavi got remarried, that means they did cross roads at some point.

It doesn’t seem possible then, out of character for both Raghav as well as Pallavi to get over it as soon and as fully.


Had they never married, then this would have been a possible alternate ending.


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prriyam

Amused!


The wound or the frustration or the dejection or even the fury, is running deep, I see!

Its always good to talk to intelligent ppl

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Inese_20

Pallavi got remarried, that means they did cross roads at some point.

It doesn’t seem possible then, out of character for both Raghav as well as Pallavi to get over it as soon and as fully.


Had they never married, then this would have been a possible alternate ending.


Possible. It seemed more plausible if a constant tangent is maintained.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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After reading this I can't control my laugh. 😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

After reading this I can't control my laugh. 😂

Think of my condition while writing... there was a reason i didn't tagged anyone.... it was a riot

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Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Its always good to talk to intelligent ppl

Not far! IF-IO has it in abundance.

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