"You Are My Hell" part 4 (Final) page 15 - Page 12

Still writing. Will post as soon as it is complete.

Cheekukabeej is ready to die🤗

Ruko...kya kiya tune... let me read first

Edit:

😭

I came back, read it again and the pain destroyed me.

It is a testament to how you felt it and wrote that I could emphasize with all three of them...

Virat destroyed me, the glimpses of Sai and her regret hurt my heart and I feel sorry for that lost soul Ajinkya too...

The way you ended it, gave the feel that even through the smile, Virat's life just ended too... might be alive, but his life is over...

I repeat, kya kar diya Tu ne ?! Execllent writing!

Sorry😒

But kya karun? Main ek hi type ki stories se bore ho jati hu😳

Mujhe kuch different chahiye hota hai.

Isliye kuch different kar diya.

I knew no one's gonna like it and I still wrote it

Stupid me😭

What Ajinkya murdered sai ?😭 Ajinkya😡🤬.

Vaise I dint like d ending u could have shown virat reaching there & sai dying in his arms apologizing for her mistakes of betraying him or sai is admitted to hospital

Virat beating Ajinkya mercilessly & making him pay 4 what he did to sai. Don't leave Ajinkya like this .

Okay cheeku...

Option 1: Zeher

Option 2: Dagger

Choose happily 👍🏼

Kya hai yeh🤣

Ruby ruby tha, that is why I waited till last chapter to reply, mujhe pata tha, Cheeku nagpur ke liye niklegi par nagaland pahunchegi 🤣

Originally posted by: Fruitcustard_9

What Ajinkya murdered sai ?😭 Ajinkya😡🤬.

Vaise I dint like d ending u could have shown virat reaching there & sai dying in his arms apologizing for her mistakes of betraying him or sai is admitted to hospital

Virat beating Ajinkya mercilessly & making him pay 4 what he did to sai. Don't leave Ajinkya like this .

I wanted a different ending than a happy ending in one of my stories at least.

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Okay cheeku...

Option 1: Zeher

Option 2: Dagger

Choose happily 👍🏼

Kya hai yeh🤣

Ruby ruby tha, that is why I waited till last chapter to reply, mujhe pata tha, Cheeku nagpur ke liye niklegi par nagaland pahunchegi 🤣

Option 3: Forum Nikala😆

Bye 👋😆