Shivi TS : Chal Challe Apne Ghar ( Part 2 updated on Pg 1)

Okay so after today's episode I thought of writing something . I don't know what this is . A drabble /OS or a two shot .As of now have written what I could. Will take a call if I will continue it or no . Please ignore typos and grammatical errors . Hope you guys like it .😊

~ Chal Challe Apne Ghar~

Part 1

After the Jeera Kand happened Shiva and Raavi had to start fleeing towards Somnath their home ground . Shiva felt stupid for not thinking about the deal . He not only risked Pandya stores license but most importantly Raavi . Maybe Gombi was right he shouldn't have fled but what if due to him Raavi would be captured and put in jail considering her as his accomplice . He shuddered thinking Somnath ki sabse sundar ladki ko jail mein nahi hona chahiye .He glanced at her and saw her in deep thought while turning back to the road .

Shiva : Oye Chipkali ! Kaha koyi hai ? Tujhe seatbelt pehne ke liye nyota dena padega kya ?

Raavi was super hungry and was thinking how they could get food . She knew if she was this hungry bechara Shiva tho zyaada tadap raha hoga . Her train of thought was broken by her Bhootnath . She made a face while attempting to pull at the seatbelt when she heard him .

Raavi : Tu ek bhi cheez dang se nahi bol sakta na ? Dekh tujhse naaraz hoke ye seatbelt bhi nahi hil raha.

Shiva : Ye bol ki tu phoolkumari hai aur tujhse woh keecha nahi jaa raha .

She left the seatbelt aside and huffed and sat listening to him call her phoolkumari . She was strong she knew it .

Suddenly Shiva saw a puppy come in front and jerked the car and halted it . Raavi was about to hit the dashboard when Shiva's hand automatically came in front to stop her fall .

Shiva : Tu na ! Bola tha na seatbelt pehen ne. Ek number ki Gadhedi hai tu . Ek baat bhi nahi maan sakti na .

His heart skipped a beat when he saw her almost hitting the dashboard .She silently heard him crib understanding the situation but Raavi being Raavi zyaada der tak chup thodi reh sakti thi.

Raavi: Arey maine try tho kiya tha na .. Abhi ye seatbelt tere jaise akdu hai tho main kya karu ?

Shiva: Rukh ja . Tu kuch kar hi mat. Main hi karta hoon

He went towards the seatbelt and halted the minute he felt her breath close to his . They were so close to each other that they could hear each other's heart beat . Their heart beats were so fast as if they had just run on a treadmill . Shiva gazed at her lips and then saw her eyes intently and she couldn't help but get lost in his eyes and then her gaze moved towards his open lips. Suddenly Raavis stomach grumbled and Shiva realised how they were and what was happening and quickly pulled the seatbelt and buckled her in and turned towards the road and started the car after making sure the puppy had passed . Raavi still couldn't take her eyes off of Shiva , afterall her husband was quite handsome .

Shiva : Ghoor kya rahi hai ? Khayegi kya ?

Raavi : Kha tho sakti hoon.

She replied immediately and realised what he meant and what she said and continued so as to not make it awkward .

Raavi : Lekin thoda aur distance cover karte hai . Taaki woh officers se jitni doori maintain kar sakte utna maintain kare .

Shiva continued not catching Raavis double meaning .

Shiva : Ek ghante ki duri pe ek dhaba hai waha rukhe kya ? Itna tera pet sambhal payega .

Raavi : Bhukkad tho tu hai aur mujhe control ke baare mein bol raha . Main tho pura din bhi khaane ke bager reh sakti hoon.

Shiva : Lagta tho nahi ki tu khaane ke bager reh sakti. Chipkali se dinosaur jo ban gayi hai .

Raavi : Tu na kabhi nahi sudar sakta . Bhoothnath kahi ka .

She huffed and turned towards the scenery .

Shiva : Accha theek hai baba . Tu chipkali hai . Theek hai ?

She continued staring outside faking her anger . Time was passing and he couldn't take her silence .

Shiva: Accha sun na ek zaroori baat bolni thi .

She didn't turn and he tried glancing at her while keeping his focus on road. He thought of waiting till she spoke . When it was too much time he couldn't take it .

Shiva : Sss Sorry !

Raavi turned so fast she knew she would get a whiplash later and her eyes were so wide they were ready to pop .

Raavi : Kya kaha ?

Shiva : SsSORRY ! Aaj ke liye nahi . Uss din tujhe aise feel karwane ke liye ki main tujhe chod deta . Tu jaanti hai woh kangan mere liye kitne zaroori the . Lekin tu bhi zaroori hai Gadhedi . Main tere jaise chappar chappar nahi kar sakta apne dil ki baat bataane ke liye. Lekin haan maine jis tara se cheeze ki na , waise main bilkul bhi karna nahi chahta tha . Aur ek cheez maine tujhe kandar mein bhi kaha tha ab bhi keh raha hoon . Maine tujhe kabhi nahi chodha tha aur kabhi nahi chodunga . Aur ek cheez ye suicide ka chapter humesha ke liye khatam kar .Teri zindagi khoobsurat hai usse aise kisi ke liye zaahir nahi karte . Haan maine bhi galat kiya tha khud kood ke aur main kabhi bhi aisi cheez nahi karunga. Ye galat cheez hai ye dimag mein fit kar please . Samjhi ?

He said and felt light as he finally apologised to her and told her off about the suicide thing.

Raavi : Main bhi sorry hoon . Agar main paile hi tere paksh mein bolke maasi ko kangan dene bolti tho shayad baat iss hadd tak na khichti .Lekin shiva tune hi mujhe isme nahi padne bola tha issiliye main chup rahi . Aur haan aage se suicide waali pagalpanti kabhi nahi karungi. Jo ho gaya abhi so ho gaya . Abhi hume aage badna chahiye . Itni nafrat dil mein rakh ke fayda nahi hai .

He nodded at what she said .

Shiva : Pehli baar bina lade meri baat suni . Tu meri waali chipkali hi hai na ?

Raavi : Paili baar mujhe sorry bola . Tu mera waala Bhootnath hi hai na ?

She laughed as she said that . He couldn't help but look at his Chipkali but turned as the road also required undivided attention .

Raavi : Kaash dhara di yaha hoti tho main unko batati ki maine finally jo bola tha woh karke dikhaya bale hi usme tera zyaada haath hai kyunki tune galti ki . Shiva se sorry bulwa hi liya maine . Shaadi ke pehle bola tha di ko ki tujhse sorry tho main bulwa kar hi rahungi .

Shiva : Ab zyaada dindora pitne ki zaroorat nahi hai .

As of on record her stomach grumbled again and gave a dindora to Shiva about her hunger .

Shiva : 10-15 minute aur . Pahuchne hi waale hai .

Raavi :Arey koi jaldi nahi hai maine kaha na main pura din bhi khaane ke bager reh sakti hoon

Shiva was trying hard to control his smile , he knew she was hungry but wanted to act all brave and lady like but her stomach wasn't supporting her .

Shiva : Theek hai tho ye waala dhaaba chod ke agle waale dhaabe pe jaaye zyaada door nahi kuch aur ek ghante mein mil jayega woh .

He replied while teasing her . Raavi's eyes went wide listening to him . She thought to herself what was wrong with this Bhootnath , normally he couldn't even go few hours without food and now he wanted to delay it further . Did he have fever ? Or was he just trying to act too cool

She anyway tried acting all cool .

Raavi : Jaise teri marzi . Agla dhaaba tho agla dhaaba.

Shiva : Gadhedi mazaak kar raha tha . Chal abhi pohoch gaye .

Finally she felt relieved that they would be eating food. As for Shiva he didn't know why he still wasn't hungry maybe it was fear of getting caught or maybe it was something else.

Little did he know these were the exact side effects of love as described by Sant Raavi to Krish for his GK about love .

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Index:

Part 1- Page 1

Part 2 - Page 1

Thankk you for writing this❤️❤️❤️

This wass beautifulll🤗🤗🤗

Soft shiva Hass my 💓

Their nokjhok😍😍

Hayee...kal ek seatbelt scene hi mil hayee❤️

This was reallly sweet…

There sorry were amazing..

Amazing start up.

Beautiful chapter

Excited to read next chapter

Update soon

Awww that is all cosy comfy softly soft shiva

This shade is also too adorable on him

Loved this a lot

Their cute scenes are perfect

Do write more

Love

Jen

Acha tha yeh update Or concept❤️

Is padke yad aya ki yeh kafi kuch acha kar sakte hai but dekhte hai kya karte hai😔

Par tumne Acha likha🤗

Continue if possible

Again I don't know if this will be the last part or I would add more parts. This is my first attempt at writing something more than an OS . Hats off to all writers in this forum . It takes time and dedication to write a story of multiple parts . I don't know how you'll do it but you guys rock👏. Hope you guys like my amateur attempt! Apologies for the typos and grammatical errors if any .

Part 2

Once they reached the Dhaba , Raavi literally ran towards the table . She was sooo hungry . While Shiva couldn't keep his eyes of off her . Her cute antics would be the end of him . He kept staring as he saw her go towards the waiter to give him the order . As he occupied one of the table he saw her coming with a wide toothy smile .

Raavi : Finally khaana khaane mil raha hai . Pet mein chuhe itne daude hai na ki pakka behosh ho jayenge .

Shiva laughed out loud . Finally she accepted she was hungry .

Shiva : Accha aur koi tho pure din bina khaane ke nikaalne waali thi . Woh kaun tha yaad hai tujhe ?

Raavi : Tu zyaada na udd mat! Aaj ek din bhook lagi hai mujhe tujhse zyaada . Warna tho bhukkad kumar tu hi hai .

Shiva : Khaana khaane mein sharam haya side mein hi rakhni chaahiye Gadhedi . Tu na woh chui mui ladkiyon ke jaise banne ki koshish mat kar . Main jaanta hoon tu kitni badi bhukkad hai .

Both knew each other too well . Shiva always had doubt that mami ki behen ki beti came to their house for Dhara Bhabhis food since childhood .

Raavi : Accha tu mujhe bade acche se jaanta hai ? Kuch bhi ho tho mujhse ladne nikalta tha . Tho mujhe jaane ka tujhe kab mauka mila ? Ladne se fursat milegi tab hi tho mujhe samjhega.

Shiva : Tu mami ki behen ki beti jo thi tho by default tujhse ladne ki responsibility le li thi maine bachpan se.

Raavi : Tho aaj bhi kya main tere liye mami ki behen ki beti hi hoon . Aaj bhi mujhse utni hi nafrat karta hai kya ?

She asked dejectedly.

Shiva : Tujhe kya lagta hai ? Haan tu mami ki behen ki beti hai lekin uske saat saat Pandya parivar ka hissa hai , Suman Pandya / Dhara Pandya ki bahu hai , Gombi ne tho behen maan liya hai tujhe , Dev aur Krish ki Bhabhi , Rishita ki Saheli aur Shiva Pandya ki biwi hai . Haan main galat tha tujhe humesha beech mein pisne ke liye . Mami pe jo gussa aata aksar tujhpe nikalta tha kyunki tu unke ghar ki thi. Lekin ab tu humari hai .

Raavi : Main tho tere hisse mein nahi aati na ? Aane ki koshish bhi nahi karna bola tha na tune.

Shiva : Jitna samay bitaya hai na tere saat thodi bohot mere hisse mein aa gayi hai . Thodi bohot puri tara se nahi .

Raavi was beyond happy hearing him say that she was a part of him somewhere .

Raavi : Arey waah itna parivartan. Ye haveli mein na pakka koi bhoot tha jo tere andar guss gaya . Kahi kesar 2.0 sach mein tere andar tho nahi gussi .

She asked him while laughing . Shiva couldn't move his eyes away when he saw her bright smile .

Shiva : Tujhe aise haste dekh ke accha lagta hai . Shaadi ke baad maine tujhe hasne ka mauka nahi diya na ?

Raavi : Shaadi ke pehle kaha tu mujhe hasaata tha paagal . Hasna na hasna mere haath mein tha . Main shaadi ke baad tho sirf tum logo ko blame karti rahi ye galat tha na .Maine bhi tho Dev ke jawaab ka intezaar karna tha . Jhalli ki tara uski chuppi ko uska pyaar nahi samajhna tha . Kisine jaan Bhuj ke kuch nahi kiya . Tere saath bhi galat hua , zabardasti shaadi jo hui teri mere saat . Tere sabse bade dushman maami ki behen ki beti ki saat .

He saw her expression change into what he felt was hurt and remorse for what he didn't understand. Did she not like that they were enemies since childhood ? But did he ever consider her an enemy ?

Shiva : Arey tho tere hisaab se tho meri lottery lagi na . Aakhir kaar Junglee , Gawar , Bhaaloo Shiva ko Somnath ki sabse khubsoorat ladki apne biwi ke roop mein mili kyun?

He tried to lighten her mood . She beamed with pride while replying.

Raavi :So tho hai tujhe tho Somnath ki Deepika Padukone mili lekin haan tu bhi thoda sa Somnath ke Ranveer Singh jaisa hai thoda sa Theda . Junglee hai lekin gawar aur bhaloo nahi . Kabhi kabaar na thodi cheezo mein junglee hona better hai .

Shiva : Accha junglee hona better hai ? Kyun ?

Raavi : Arey warna Somnath ki sabse khoobsurat ladki ko un gundo se kaun bachata ? Lekin tu bhi paagal hai kaun seeti competition karta hai , directly fighting scene pe nahi aa sakta tha kya ? Style marna zaroori hai har jagah .

Before Shiva could speak further their food had arrived . Raavi squealed with excitement .She had ordered all of Shiva's favourite food Aloo Gobi ki Sabzi ,Paneer Makhani , Dal Chawal , Methi ke Parathe and Bhajiyas .

Raavi : Challo Bhukkad senapati shuru kare ?

She started eating before she got an answer .

Raavi : Waah kya tasty khaana hai . Dhaabe ki khaane ki baat hi kuch hoti hai . Hai na ?

Shiva could barely understand what he was eating as his undivided attention was on Raavis expressions , the way she enjoyed eating food . This had become sort of ritual for him watching her eat food either when Gombi fed her or when he kept the kachori for her .

Just then two men entered the Dhaba . They took a table a little far from Shiva and Raavi but at the entrance of the dhaaba.

Man 1 : Yaha ke dhaabe ke maalik se puchte hai

Man 2: Oye chotu! Idhar aa .

The waiter went towards them.

Man 1: Tere Seth ko bula yaha . Unhe ye bol ki inspector Rathore aaye hai aur baat karna chahte hai .Samjhe ?

The waiter ran to find his Seth . Shiva and Raavi were almost done with their food .

Raavi : Sun Shiva main na washroom hoke aati hoon .

Shiva : Main chalta hoon tere saath . Bahar rukh jaata hoon .

Raavi : Oye ! Hero . Chattan Pandya ki biwi hoon washroom jaana tho manage kar hi sakti hoon .

Shiva : Dekh...

Raavi : Nahi tu dekh ! Hume jaldi se nikalna hai aur Somnath pahuchna hai tho time waste mat kar main yoon gayi aur aayi theek hai ? Already 5:30 bhaj chuke hai

Shiva went to pay to the waiter the money as he had got the bill.Just then the owner of the dhaaba came towards the men sitting on a table a little away from where Shiva was . Raavi was approaching Shiva when they heard the conversation .

Inspector Rathore : Kya tumne in dono ko dekha hai ? In dono pe kaala bazaari ka FIR darz hai . Pata challa hai ye dono ghar se baaghe hai .

Owner : Nahi saab hum bala choro ko apne dhaabe mein kyun aane denge .

Shiva slowly walked towards where Raavi was and turned her and whispered .

Shiva : Dekh hum main entrance ke through nahi jaa sakte abhi waha pe woh inspector behta hai. Yaha pe peeche jungle ke raaste se nikalte hai . Theek hai ?

Raavi : Agar unhone hume pakad liya tho?

Shiva : Tho ye bol denge ki main zabardasti tujhe yaha le aaya . Main tujh par koi musibat aane nahi dunga samjhi ?

Raavi : Tu paagal hai kya ? Mujhe yaha tere jail jaane ki tension hai aur tu atrangi plan bana raha hai.

Shiva : Tension hai tho nikalte hai yaha se

They walked slowly towards the jungle side however were spotted by the owner .

Owner : Sahab woh dekho woh do chor .

Shiva Raavi ran to save their lives while the inspector and constable followed .

Shiva held onto Raavis hand tightly and they ran full speed . There was huge distance between them and the policemen .They ran for almost half an hour or more they didn't know but it was as if their feet were on their own accord .

Shiva and Raavi hid in such a way that they could see the inspector and constable when he arrived to their hiding spot but the latter couldn't see them . Their hands were entwined in a tight grip so as to not leave each other's hands

Inspector Rathore: Puri team ko inform karna padega ki ye dono mujlim issi jungle mein hai. Itne bade area ko hum dono akele nahi dhoond sakte .

Suddenly as if the gods wanted to save this lovely couple it started raining heavily . The sky turned dark with clouds hovering over and it became difficult to see anything . Shiva and Raavi were getting wet in the rain but moving from there wasn't an option if they wanted to avoid being spotted .

Constable shouted informing the inspector :

Constable : Sir itne baarish mein humein woh milne se rahe .Kal subah puri taskforce ke saat dhoond paayenge .

Inspector Rathore : Sahi keh raha hai tu . Abhi ye jungle mein without forest officials dhoondna khatre se khaali nahi hai .Hum kaafi andar aa chukhe hai .

Both of them rushed towards where they came from .

Shiva saw raavi was shivering due to getting wet .

Shiva : Ae Raavi tu theek hai na .

Raavi : Sh sh Shiva ! Yyaha sse nnikalte haii ppleaase.

Shiva : Haan chal chal .

They walked in the rain for a while before they spotted a hut . Shiva kept his arms over her shoulder to support her as he could feel her weight shifting on him. She was feeling so cold and exhausted and he knew she wouldn't be able to hold on for long.

Shiva could feel her entire weight on him as they reached inside the hut . She had collapsed on him .

Shiva : Ae Raavi ! Uth!!

He started rubbing her palms and her legs to get her to wake up . They had become so cold and she was shivering all over. He kept his hand on her forehead and realised she was burning up .

Shiva : Aee raavi please uth na .Aise nahi karte . Itni baari mujhe aisi maut mat de . Please uth jaa .

He again tried rubbing her palms and legs to no avail . She wasn't even shivering now but her lips were turning blue . Shiva was getting really scared . He tried searching for a blanket or anything that would provide her warmth but there were none . His clothes were useless as well as they were wet too . The only option he had was something he had watched in the shows his dhara bhabhi used to see hero providing heroine body heat in such scenarios .

He started stripping his clothes and opened the zip of her kurta not thinking of all the ifs and buts. His hands were shivering while doing the same not due to cold but due to the fact that he had to strip her while she was unconscious. However he did not have time for that he needed to get his Gadhedi to wake up. As they both lay there with no clothes on he hugged her tight and started rubbing her back . Her lips which were blue few seconds ago started getting some color as it touched Shiva's chest. He was rubbing her back and hands while crushing her into a bear hug to provide her as much warmth as possible and at the same time murmuring in her ear to wake up for him .

His eyes were filled with tears as he saw her still but he knew she was fine as be could hear her faint heart beat but that scared him as well her heart beat was too faint and her skin was too warm .

Shiva :Please uth jaa na . Aise mujhe Darra mat . Please uth jaa Raavi . Pleaseee.

Just when one tear fell on her face she stirred a little.

Raavi : Sssshivaaa

Her eyes were closed but she was moving slightly

He could hear her heart beat getting stronger and her temperature coming back to normal.

Shiva : Chup chup . Tu aaram kar main hoon tere saat . Kuch nahi hone dunga tujhe .

Raavi : Sshivaaa

She dozed of in his arms and he spent the entire night just watching her and listening to her heart beat . He knew she would be fine .

In the wee hours of the morning she started waking up and he kept on looking at her . He had lots of explaining to do .

Raavi was slowly opening her eyes when she got lost in Shiva's deep eyes .

Raavi : Shiva tu yaha ?

She asked drowsily then slowly realisation dawned on her that they both were naked and in a very compromising position . She jerked and moved away from him while holding her hand to cover herself up as much as she could .

Shiva : Dekh meri baat sun . Jaise tu soch rhi hain waisa kuch nahi hai .

Raavi : Shiva aankhein band kar. Tujhe kaise pata main kya soch rahi hoon .

He immediately shut his eyes and started getting dressed in his slightly wet clothes. While she picked her set of clothes .

Shiva : Kyunki koi bhi ladki ye hi sochti

Raavi : Tho main koi bhi ladki hoon kya ? Aur aise kitne ladkiyon ke saat tha tu ki tu jaanta hai ki woh iss situation mein kya soch rhi hoti hai ?

She asked while dressing up herself and turning around so as to avoid watching him getting dressed .

Shiva : Dekh mera matlab woh nahi hai . Main tho bas bol raha hoon ki iss situation mein koi bhi ladki ddlj ke simran ki tara react karti .

Raavi : Dekh Shiva na tho main Simran hoon Na tho tu Raj . Hum Shiva aur raavi hai . Jaanti hoon tu ek nazar tak nahi uthata kisi ladki ki taraf aur tu kuch galat nahi karega . Haan mere saat ladke zaroor tune apni zindagi guzaari hai . Lekin kisi cheez ya insaan ko mujhse dushmani nibaane ka mauka tak nahi diya .

Shiva : Itna bharosa hai mujhpe ?

Raavi :Humesha se tha issiliye jab kidnapping ke waqt jo hua dekh kar darr gayi thi. Kyunki tu jaisa bhi tha mujh pe kabhi musibat aane nahi deta tha . Khud musibat jo banke bacha leta tha mujhe.

Shiva :Dekh phir bhi bata deta hoon . Kal bohot tez baarish ho rhi thi aur hum dono bohot bheeg gaye they . Tu neeli hari ho gayi thi aur bukaar bhi tha tho darr ke maare teri tabiyat theek karne ke liye jo mujhe theek laga maine kiya aur kuch nahi .

He said this all in one go to explain himself . Both were dressed now .

Raavi : Maine tho explanation maangi bhi nahi Gadhede . But thanks meri jaan bachaane ke liye . Aur haan aankhein khol sakta hai.

Shiva : Lekin jaan daav pe lagi bhi tho meri wajah se . Tu bhi mud sakti hai .

Raavi : Ye current Shiva 2.0 na mujhe kuch khaas pasand nahi aa raha . Thoda tho Lada karo ? Shiva 1.0 ka software wapas se download nahi kar sakta kya ? Puri tara crash ho rakha hai ? Woh tho mujhe Panauti kehta lekin ye 2.0 na khud ko blame karte rehta hai

Shiva : Ae chipkali chup kar aur hume yaha se jald se jald nikalna padega . Isse pehle ki police hume pakde .

Raavi : I hope Gombi aur sabko kuch tho suboot mila ho taaki ye galat ilzaam hatt jaye .

Meanwhile Gombi and Dev had found all the proof to threaten Janardhan seth and frame him . Within an hour's time they had explained everything to the inspector and sorted the issue and Shiva and Raavi were free of any charges . The only worry Gombi and Dhara had was the fact that both Raavi and Shiva's phones were coming not reachable . They both were given new sims to avoid being caught but both their phone wasn't reachable . They needed to be informed that they were free birds. The inspector had informed that both of them had to be in the jungle since yesterday as it won't be easy to come out for lay men from there

In the forest Shiva was trying to console Raavi .

Shiva : Sun Gombi aur Dhara Bhabhi hai woh.

Mujhe kaand se bachaane mein PhD karke rakha hai dono ne .

Raavi : Kaash aise hi ho .

Shiva : Tera pandya parivar tujhe bacha lega samjhe .

Raavi thought to herself even if they didn't she would be safe and fine as long as her bandar was with her .

This was really cute ❤️ Do continue, please 😳

Aww. This was beautiful! Loved this jangal mein mangal! I do hope you continue though. Thanks for writing this ss in amidst of ShiVi story drought! ❤️❤️

Wow this was cute and romantic❤️

I loved his apology❤️

The seat belt scene was☺️☺️

Loved it....❤️