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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chapter-2


Alhad sapne, ziddi armaan aur kabhi na marne wali ummeedein agar kahin ek saath dhadakti thin, to vo jagah thi JJ School of Arts. Aaj jidhar dekho, Kalyani ko titliyaan hi dikhai de rahi thi. Tabhi uske bagal vali seat me koi aakar baith gaya


"Hi, I'm Atharv," Dekhne me to vo kisi rajkumar sa sajeela tha magar kisi hawa ke jhonke ki tarah Chanchal tha vo, "Aur tum Kalyani ho na. Ye mat poochna mujhe tumhara naam kaise pata? Jab koi ladki itni khoobsurat ho to use apna introduction dene ki zaroorat nahin hoti."


Vaise to Kalyani bilkul Sharmeeli nahi thi magar na chahte hue bhi taaze seb si laali uske gaalon par chha hi gayi.


Tabhi classroom me professor sahab aa gaye aur Kalyani ki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi. Professor sahab bhi Kalyani ko dekhkar kuch thithke magar fir vo kala ke siddhant padhane me mashgool ho gaye.


Jaise hi class khatm hui, Kalyani daudte huye professor sahab ke paas gayi aur boli, "Magar aap to kavi hai na Malharji."


"Kavitaayein likhne se pet nahi bharta, vaise naam kya hai tumhara?"


"Kalyani," Kalyani ko kucch bura sa laga ki Professor Malhar Rane ko uska naam bhi nahi pata.


"Haan to Kalyani, sirf Kavi hone se ghar chalane layak paisa nahin milta, aur paisa dekho, to apne man ke mutabik nahi baazar ke mutabik likhna parta h isliye professor ki naukri ghar chalane ke liye aur kavitayein man ke liye. Vaise bhi kavitayein likhne ke liye main pen name ka istemal karta hoon to agar tum mere kavitaayein likhne ka zikr kisi se na karo to..."


"Kalyani, canteen nahi jaana kya," tabhi Atharv vahaan aaya.


" Aai," Ek saath chalte huye Kalyani aur Atharv ke haath aapas me takra rahe the. Haaye! Vasant ki purwai ki tarah hota hai naya pyaar aur Malhar ko Atharv aur Kalyani ko saath dekhne se bechain hone ki to koi zaroorat na thi. Aakhir vo aur Sampada bhi to...


Sampada...Kabhi Malhar ke dil par raaj karne vaali aaj har dil ki maalkin ban chuki thi. Sheher mein jahaan jao Sampada ki filmon ke poster lage hote the. Sampada ke Bollywood ki sabse badi adakara banne se pehle jab vo Aurangabad ki ek masoom si ladki thi, tabhi Malhar jaanta ki vo oonchaiyon ko chhuegi magar tab use nahin pata tha ki oonchai par pahunchne ke liye man par lade pyaar ke bojh ko door fenkna hota hai aur fir jab Sampada ne yahi kiya to...


https://youtu.be/8WHxCww2gUk

Edited by Autumn09 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Wow Pragya...

It's a treat to read KalMa in different many different avatars and you have a very good way of narrating each story.

Waiting to read more.


Thank you so much Rekha ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you pragyu 😘😘😍😍😘

Itni acchi update dene ke liye maja aagaya ye 💓💓

kalyani aur atharav🙄🙄

malhar as usual apne strict mood main but ladka Jo bhi professor banke hot lag Raha hoga uff 😛😛

Sampada yahan bhi dhoka de gayi sacchi iss ladki ko kahi chain nahi hai malhar ko hameaah Tang karti rehti hai 😣😣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo

Thank you pragyu 😘😘😍😍😘

Itni acchi update dene ke liye maja aagaya ye 💓💓

kalyani aur atharav🙄🙄

malhar as usual apne strict mood main but ladka Jo bhi professor banke hot lag Raha hoga uff 😛😛

Sampada yahan bhi dhoka de gayi sacchi iss ladki ko kahi chain nahi hai malhar ko hameaah Tang karti rehti hai 😣😣


Thank you so much Vanshu. Your reactions light up my day ❣️❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chapter-3


1965


Malhar akhbar khareedkar laa hi raha hota hai ki ek vahin se gujarte hue pati-patni ke jode me se pati bola- "Ye dekho ise, kitni besharmi se patni ki kamaai kha raha h. Kya faayda padhai likhai ka fir?"


Tabhi patni ne kaha, "khud to din bhar ghar me para rehta hai aur iski patni bechari din raat mehnat karti rehti hai."


Tabhi Malhar ek chhote se makaan ka darwaza khatkhatata hai aur Kalyani darwaza kholti hai.


Malhar: "Tumne bataya nahi tum Atharv ke saath apni paintings ki joint exhibition karne wali ho?"


Kalyani: "Vo main?"


Malhar: "Vo main kya Kalyani? Bhool gayi paanch saal pehle Atharv ne tumhare saath kya kiya tha?"


Kalyani: "To kya karti main...aap hi bataiye? Ye jo chai ke saath bread aap roz khate hain muft mein nahi milti, paise lagte hain. Aur paise ayenge kahaan se? Aap to..."


Malhar: "Main kucch kamata nahin hu pata hai mujhe. Din me har minute har koi mujhe ye yaad dilata h."


Kalyani: "Kucch to practical hokar sochiye aap. Kya zaroorat thi apko us bade editor se jhagadne ki?"


Malhar: "To kya karta main? Vo editor ek nai intern ke saath badtameezi kar raha tha."


Kalyani: "Aur fir usi intern ne aap par harassment ka aarop laga diya tha...ye to yaad hoga na aapko. Khair chhoriye...mujhe jaldi art gallery pahunchna h aur main late nahin ho sakti."


Rishte ka dhaage bade nazuk hote hain. Zara zor se kheench do to dhaaga toot jata hai aur dheel do to gaanth khul jati hai.


"Are sahab, aap filmon mein geet likhne ki koshish kyon nahi karte? Suna hai, vahaan aap chahe jail se bhaage huye kaidi hon, agar logon ko aapka kaam pasand aya, to kisi ko aap kiski hatya karke aaye hain usse fark nahin parta."


Malhar filmcity me har producer ke darwaaze khatkhata hai, magar naa vo koi is sunehli duniya ka naya naam tha na hi uski rasoolhdar logon tak pahunch thi jo use kaam milta. Uske sabr ka baandh tootne hi wala tha ki spotboy ne use bulaya: Aapko heroine madam bula rahi h.


Malhar: Mujhe?


Spotboy: Aapka naam Malhar hi h na?


Malhar uske peeche jaata h. Cooler ke aage ek sundar mahila baithi hoti h.


Malhar: Sampada, tum?


https://youtu.be/LZ_YUOr-tYw

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Matlab Malhar aur kalyani ki shaadi ho chuki hai 😃😃😘😘

Feels bad for Malhar 🥺🤧🤧

Uss bechare ko kahi bhi koi chain se rehne nahi deta

Sampada ab ussein phirse mil gayi 🙄🙄

Ye pakka kuch karegi

So basically kalyani ko atharv ne dhoka diya But ekdum se Malhar ke career ko kya hua aur yahan to unko dekhkar lagta hai ki unka rishta kuch khaas nahi chal raha hai they are not in good terms with each other it's really sad to see ki Malhar ko kuch work nahi mil paa raha hai aur sampada ka aana can make it worse for them

Overall emotional chapter pragyu🥺🥺😭😭

I really feeled their emotions 👏👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

Matlab Malhar aur kalyani ki shaadi ho chuki hai 😃😃😘😘

Feels bad for Malhar 🥺🤧🤧

Uss bechare ko kahi bhi koi chain se rehne nahi deta

Sampada ab ussein phirse mil gayi 🙄🙄

Ye pakka kuch karegi

So basically kalyani ko atharv ne dhoka diya But ekdum se Malhar ke career ko kya hua aur yahan to unko dekhkar lagta hai ki unka rishta kuch khaas nahi chal raha hai they are not in good terms with each other it's really sad to see ki Malhar ko kuch work nahi mil paa raha hai aur sampada ka aana can make it worse for them

Overall emotional chapter pragyu🥺🥺😭😭

I really feeled their emotions 👏👏


Thank you so much Vanshu. Ye FF is dedicated to portraying dark, destructive side of love. Sehban ka PTKK vala episode dekha h tumne? Iska ending bhi kucch vaise hi hoga.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09


Thank you so much Vanshu. Ye FF is dedicated to portraying dark, destructive side of love. Sehban ka PTKK vala episode dekha h tumne? Iska ending bhi kucch vaise hi hoga.

So basically a sad ending Pragyu 😭😭😭

Kalyani ki death go jayegi churail Mar Degi useein

I am already crying how will I will see the ending of this ff

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

So basically a sad ending Pragyu 😭😭😭

Kalyani ki death go jayegi churail Mar Degi useein

I am already crying how will I will see the ending of this ff


Kallu won't die...us episode me bhi it was not heroine who died.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09


Kallu won't die...us episode me bhi it was not heroine who died.

Pragyu old ek request hai pls iski ending sad mat Dena bohot achi ff hai iski to happy ending honi chahiye

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