FF: Chalo ek baar fir ajnabi ban jaayein ham - Page 6

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Your welcome Pragya…

If you are writing because of us to main bhi credit lena chahungi…

Hume itne achhhe aur pyari pyari stories mil rahi hai..

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You have the quality of a brilliant writer Pragya…👍🏼

Your way of story telling is very beautiful… 👏

Just love your work dear…

Thank you Priyu 😍😍

Wow…loved this..

Atharv is always a selfish and horrible guy.

He had wanted to shame Kalyani’s dad by shaming her..

Malharji ne Karli shaadi Kalyani se

Aww they danced 💃🏻💃🏻

Omg Pragya…

Kitna emotional kar Diya…

Could feel their pain.😭😭

And 2020 ke KalMa seem interesting👍🏼

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Omg Pragya…

Kitna emotional kar Diya…

Could feel their pain.😭😭

And 2020 ke KalMa seem interesting👍🏼

Thank you so much Rekha💞

This was the last chapter of this FF. Pehle main letter ke baad hi chapter khatm karne vali thi main but Vanshu said not to make this entirely sad. And story me first chapter ke alawa vaise bhi sab bahut gloomy and depressing tha so I thought of ending the story on an open-ended hopeful note

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Thank you so much Rekha💞

This was the last chapter of this FF. Pehle main letter ke baad hi chapter khatm karne vali thi main but Vanshu said not to make this entirely sad. And story me first chapter ke alawa vaise bhi sab bahut gloomy and depressing tha so I thought of ending the story on an open-ended hopeful note

Acha.. That was the way it was supposed to end.. 😒

Actually it gives a totally different perspective that every love story need not end being rosy.

Every update portrayed reality. That's what made it an interesting read.

I felt the pain of both Malhar and Kalyani..

Malhar was so much in love with her and cursed himself everyday for not being able to provide for her, for being the reason of her misery and the reason her dreams were on hold.. 😭😭

That letter brought tears in my eyes.

After losing her Malhar, Kalyani proceeded to become a successful artist only to give his soul the peace that he couldn't get while he was alive.. 😭

She filled colours on her canvas while the colour of her own life had bleached..

Sach me it was so beautiful even though tragic.

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Pragya you have the talent of handling timeliness so beautifully, transporting us with such ease.

Though you did end the story on a hopeful note... Ye dil maange more.. 😍😍

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Acha.. That was the way it was supposed to end.. 😒

Actually it gives a totally different perspective that every love story need not end being rosy.

Every update portrayed reality. That's what made it an interesting read.

I felt the pain of both Malhar and Kalyani..

Malhar was so much in love with her and cursed himself everyday for not being able to provide for her, for being the reason of her misery and the reason her dreams were on hold.. 😭😭

That letter brought tears in my eyes.

After losing her Malhar, Kalyani proceeded to become a successful artist only to give his soul the peace that he couldn't get while he was alive.. 😭

She filled colours on her canvas while the colour of her own life had bleached..

Sach me it was so beautiful even though tragic.

❤️❤️❤️❤️

Pragya you have the talent of handling timeliness so beautifully, transporting us with such ease.

Though you did end the story on a hopeful note... Ye dil maange more.. 😍😍

Thank you so much Rekha ❣️❣️❣️❣️

I love writing stories in the old era because things were not easy then. Like if someone went to another city to earn money, his loved ones have to depend upon only telegrams and letters. That's what makes the love stories of the bygone era classic.

This concept is totally different.u know what Kahi bar padhi yeh.jo description 1st chapter me Diya hai Woh awesome hai. samundar ke Pas Mera ghar usake Baju me irani hotel.yeh Mumbai Ka Purani memory hai meri.As 90 kid used to sit and eat bun maska( Bread and butter with sunger) n cutting chai yeh menu n Hamari batein padhai Sab aisi hi Hoti thi.tab yeh chalan thoda that.lekin tha.ab kahi jagaj hi yeh Sab hai Mumbai me..yeh Sab Mumbai ki pehechan hai.

story etani amezing hai eka short flim ho jayengi.U know agar Kabhi sehereem me yeh story suni na to shayad unako apane Kam par proud Hoga ki yeh kiradar apane mehanat se Etane Dil ke kareeb pahucha diye.shayad Woh TV mein na ho lekin koi na koi fans ke kalam se Amar ho chuke hai.Ek emotional story Muze Rabindranath tagor ke story ke end Jaise large.jitana padha hai unaka work unaki style aisi hi thi Kahi.Adhi Adhuri Zindagi Jo vastav me Hoti hai Jo kahani Puri na karake Kahi any adhura chhut jata hai.shayad abhi us kirdaronka Safar Pura Nahi huwa lekin kahani khatam ho gayi.jaise Raabta shayad Kuch Dino me sath Nahi rahega TV par lekin Kalma Ka Safar Hamare dosto ke kalam se Aage jari rahega.esase Jada mein Kuch bol na paungi.

Originally posted by: Jsmp21

This concept is totally different.u know what Kahi bar padhi yeh.jo description 1st chapter me Diya hai Woh awesome hai.u know what samundar ke Pas Mera ghar usake Baju me irani hotel.yeh Mumbai Ka Purani memory hai meri.As 90 kid use to sit and eat bun maska( Bread and butter with singer) n cutting chai yeh menu n Hamari batein padhai Sab aisi hi Hoti thi.tab yeh chalan thoda that.lekin tha.ab kahi jagaj hi yeh Sab hai Mumbai me..yeh Sab Mumbai ki pehechan hai.

story etani amezing hai eka short flim ho jayengi.U know agar Kabhi sehereem me yeh story suni na to shayad unako apane Kam par proud Hoga ki yeh kiradar apane mehanat se Etane Dil ke kareeb pahucha diye.shayad Woh TV mein na ho lekin koi na koi fans ke kalam se Amar ho chuke hai.Ek emotional story Muze Rabindranath tagor ke story ke end Jaise large.jitana padha hai unaka work unaki style aisi hi thi Kahi.Adhi Adhuri Zindagi Jo vastav me Hoti hai Jo kahani Puri na karake Kahi any adhura chhut jata hai.shayad abhi us kirdaronka Safar Pura Nahi huwa lekin kahani khatam ho gayi.jaise Raabta shayad Kuch Dino me sath Nahi rahega TV par lekin Kalma Ka Safar Hamare dosto ke kalam se Aage jari rahega.esase Jada mein Kuch bol na paungi.

Apka comment dekhkar main jitna emotional hui hoon, Jiya, utna main kabhi nahin hui. I feel so honoured that you liked it. KalMa and even AnuSar have such a potential as characters, but sadly we don't get those types of shows now. I remember in late 90s and early 2000s, there were beautiful shows like Star Bestsellers, Astitva Ek Premkahani which had realistic characters and beautiful plotlines. But ab aise shows aate hi nahin h except maybe some shows of Sony.