This is brilliant...first for the emotions which are raw and brutal...and you ace in Writing such raw emotions..loved it...now the theory I am like Alice in the Wonderland...moving in rounds...trying to find the hole...
This is brilliant...first for the emotions which are raw and brutal...and you ace in Writing such raw emotions..loved it...now the theory I am like Alice in the Wonderland...moving in rounds...trying to find the hole...
Ohh okayπ€. I am waiting for it
Brilliant!
That one sentence βthe lack of arms holding him backβ the number of dimensions it has taken in predictions, and now in the chapter, the radically different meaning it conveyed - ππ»ββοΈ
The way you write a story, to sit and watch, looks like you are composing music; or a meditative state. The way you add layers, in the garb of peeling the layers off, I am amazed with your control. ππΌππΌ
I know, you like analysis of the story and do not want to hear anything about the writer - but I had to.
Now, in lunch break at work I have copy-pasted the 9 chapters together - and will go with a read in one flow. To see, if I see.
This is brilliant...first for the emotions which are raw and brutal...and you ace in Writing such raw emotions..loved it...now the theory I am like Alice in the Wonderland...moving in rounds...trying to find the hole...
Thnx... nd don't worry about theories. I myself is confused at this point.
Fun fact : Alice in wonderland was the first novel I got as a gift.
Brilliant!
That one sentence βthe lack of arms holding him backβ the number of dimensions it has taken in predictions, and now in the chapter, the radically different meaning it conveyed - ππ»ββοΈ
The way you write a story, to sit and watch, looks like you are composing music; or a meditative state. The way you add layers, in the garb of peeling the layers off, I am amazed with your control. ππΌππΌ
I know, you like analysis of the story and do not want to hear anything about the writer - but I had to.
Now, in lunch break at work I have copy-pasted the 9 chapters together - and will go with a read in one flow. To see, if I see.
Thnx.
And do share how it comes up in one read as I myself havn't gotta chance to read all at once.
Aah....so the book needs a reread...just kidding
Chapter 1
God very confusing. What is happening. Who is he talking to in dreams Pallavi? But why did Raghav kill Pallavi??
Chapter 2
What Pallavi is dead and Raghav is imagining her. ππ It's been 2 years she is gone and he is not yet over her π’ Aisa iss Ghamandi Rao ke saath hi kyun hota hai.
Chapter 3
Shock over shock. Oh π³
Raghav thinking Pallavi wants him to die and be free. What the hell Raghav? Pallavi had to hit him very badly. He would then realise what should be told as a joke and what not.
Sarika? Is it Pallavi back? But I thought she was killed? Where did she come from? Was she alive?
Chapter 4
The fear which Pallavi had in her voice at the only thought of Raghav relapsing to coma was heart wrenching.
She told whatever she felt about him about their relationship about her expectations. And guess what? He gained his consciousness as if he longed to hear it from Pallavi. He got up for the Love of his life β€οΈ