Raghvi OS : The twist of the law. - Page 6

Originally posted by: xerxes12

This is very beautiful❤️.

I love your writing style..It's is so crisp and impactful..and for me I find it difficult to write this way and hence I easily get attracted to your style ⭐️

Regarding the story..I loved the plot...Raghav being the impatient person is capable of doing this. Beautifully written👏

I hardly request os makers to write a second part..I would be glad to read if you come up with another part.

Thank you so much. I love to write that without much monologues and that's because I suck at writing them. 😆

Yes, I'm actually thinking to give it an expansion to a short story and if I don't then I will try to write a second part.

Thank you

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

That is a good way to develop this. I'm a bit more excited about it's continuation.

About Pallavi being angry / feeling betrayed ? 😆

I also like that way

Because if I was at her place , I would have really been angry and hurt by Raghav’s actions and probably just get divorce and leave for Kolhapur without informing Raghav 🤣😈

The first end I thought was, not that decision of divorce but a call to Raghav to tell him that she is pregnant but then I thought, that would be so common, kind of cliche so went this way. 😆

Don't expect that pregnancy drama from me. 😎

I don’t want Pregnancy drama too 🤪

( though I like idea of OS where Pallavi is being hesitant and Cold but Raghav is all excited for baby 🤣😎)

But that would be a treat to read, him burning in that jealousy.

Can you imagine what he will do?🤣

Man! The thought of Pallavi being mother of someone else’s child will sure burn him 😈🤣

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Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Flirting 🤣something you don't know the ABC of. 🤣

Aur Nahi toh kya

Meri toh life hi kharab ho gayi Aise Ghamandi Rao se shaadi karke

Ooo so so interesting, didn’t know which way it was going to end!

If she gets to know the reason behind his actions that night then she is going to be so upset and angry and hurt, I would like to develop that angle. 🤪

There is one more reason why I didn't add that pregancy call. If she called to let him know that she is pregnant with his child that would be because she has to not because she wants to. I wanted her to have the choice.

I absolutely loved that two pregancy OS ideas. Why don't you write them. 🤣

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Aur Nahi toh kya

Meri toh life hi kharab ho gayi Aise Ghamandi Rao se shaadi karke

Wait pals baby, wait.

He will come around, after all Anna can't stay away from you that long. 🤣

Will try to develop that angle and will let you know.

Thanks Sakshi 🤗

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

And end too. 😆

Thank you.

Okay.... still a lovely read😊

Originally posted by: Innocentlove96

Okay.... still a lovely read😊

May be will continue.

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Ooo so so interesting, didn’t know which way it was going to end!

Thank you.

May be it's not the end. 😉