Fatejo - the battle of the CHUMMI

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This is not a comtinuation of earlier os. A fresh one with current track


Fatejo - the battle of the CHUMMI


10am

Dressed in green white floral salwar kameez she sat at the cafeteria munching slowly a veg sandwich for breakfast deep in her own thoughts ,

Her destiny !

What has the Almight planned for her?

Never thought for once that she will someday marry her own best friend , A sacrifice for family honour,

He was an idiot in the beginning , throwing his tantrums on her for her overly pampered sibling not wanting to marry him, she tried didnt she ?

Thanks to her encouragement that he finally won at the ring this time and is gradually taking steps forward to move away from past bitterness and betrayal towards new paths of life that is still a mystery for both of them

Oh god ! How am i going to spend my life with a man who loves my sister dearly, Her initial thoughts when she married him

Things are literally changing in a slow pace, He has decided to give it a try to a new venture of their loveless marital life

Kahan khoyi ho !

She looked upfront

Sneha her co lecturer was smiling and investigating her through her thick glasses

Fateh key bare mey soch rehi hai kya ?

Tejo grinned

Tujhey kaisey peta?

Sneha took a seat facing Tejo unfolding the lid of her tiffan,

Newly married ka tag leker bethi hai

Apney husband key bare mey nehin socho gi to phir kiskey bare mey?

Tejo said sadly with teary eyes

Move on karna chahta hai , after what jasu did to him mujhey nehin legta it will be easy for him ? Vo bilkul tuth chuka hai, He is pretending to smile but deep inside he is hurt, i know , just last nite we both decided to give a try for our marriage , but how , marriage life mein kaisey bedhey? Kuch samaj nehin aata


Very easy !

Was the reply from sneha chowdary smiling widely taking into account of her 10 yrs married life experience

Tejo taken by surprise

Irrrk . .matlab ?

Sneha spoke calmly munching her home made chapati roll,

The past 2 days he's been sweet taking a stand for u and went against his family for ur career and dreams, He even drops and picks u up , an indirect way of being committed as a husband which he has not realised that coz he still feels he is doing the deed as a good friend

Tejo frowned still confused

Tejo he has already initiated the step of moving on with you as the wife still u dont get it ? His actions lately towards u are of a husbands commitment

Then tejo understood

Sneha continued

So now u as a wife has to play ur part as well

Tejo confused

How?

Sneha replied

Appreciating his deeds , Give him the feeling of a husband , Mend his wounds , the betrayal of first love is so strong that u have to take the first step towards removing it bit by bit from inside of him

Tejo excitedly

Well i can make his favourite dish

Never force him to use wiper after shower

Dont go near his personal belongings

Keep his things in place

Iron his clothes and do the laundry on time

No!

Sneha interrupted irritatedly closing the lid of her tiffan

Arey tu biwi hai ya kam wali bai?

Take the step as a wife god dammit!

Tejo confused

Irrrk ,,,,vo kaisey?

Sneha replied impatiently

Uskey gal mey aek chummi dey de as an appreciation

Aek biwi ka pehla gift

Kya !!!

Tejo shocked

Sneha grinning

To kya hua , make the move, he played the husband part u do the wife part

Kringgg!

The bell rang indicating break over go back to ur classroom


6pm

Her slim fingers going through the green vegetables in the wash basin , preparation for dinner

Snehas words set in her mind since breakfast

Oh god !

He will throw me out of his hse

On a second thought perhaps

No!

He might be surprised but he might like it coz he himself said 2 days back that he wants to move on and give it a try for our marriage

Tejo madam kya soch rehi ho !

Fatehs loud vouce shook her , standing beside her he offered to cut vegetables and was discussing about his future plans of boxing

Uskey gal mey chumi de dey!

Sbeha's words keeps ringing in her ears , she stood very close try to lift her toes and move forward when his phone rang


10pm

He was resting on his bed playing games on his phone

She went to her side of the bed and lay beside pretending to fall asleep

Aaj jeldi so rehi ho! Fateh smiled widely looking into her direction

She didnt reply still thinking about the chummi

Get up and give him now, do it now! Tejo singh virk

An encouragement from her inner self

No ! I cant

She laid restless the whole nite with chummi battles off and on


7am

Tejo madam jaldi karo!

He was seated in his jeep waiting impatiently

Dressed in pink pastal salwar kameez she looked beautiful,

Aaj bahut pyari leg rehi ho !

A compliment

She was excited

He gave me a compliment , oh! how sweet

Shall i try now


Tejo madam kahan kho geyi !

Fingers snapped rite infront of her eyes

College paunchgeye!

She looked around

Oh ! College is here, shall i do it now

Battling in her innerself for the chummi to be handed over to that slightly bruised cheek

Which one

Left gal ya rite

Rite would be better,

She took a deep breath opened her side of the door and walked towards him who was about to reverse his jeep and there it went

SMOOCH!

A chummi on his rite gal

And said sweely thank u

Took fast forward steps without looking back

Oh god !I dont want to see his reaction

Just keep walking tejo

She calmed her self with that practically about to run away pace


He sat still

Shocked

Feeling the brush of her warm lips on the bruised skin

Peep! A horn from a vehicle behind


8am

Dressed in white collar adidas shirt and black jeans he sat at the dining table looking down at his breakfast

Gurpreet interrupted

Beta khana khao! Kya hua !

Irrrk ,,, kuch nehin

He replied with a slight confused smile on his handsome face

Little did she know that her pyara beta was affected with his wife chummi on his gal moments earlier and still couldnt understand the emotions wrapping in his shocked husbandly body after receiving wifey sweet surprise of appreciation



11am

Kya!

voh shadayain ney tujhey chummi di !

Buzo was shocked as he sat next to fateh at a restaurant nearby the virks residence on a coffe treat by the still very confused but excited husband who complained childishly about the chummi received

Oi shadaiyan mat bol

Wife hai vo meri !

Fateh replied restlessly moving his fingers on the lid of the coffee filled mug

Toh ab kya hoga ! Buzo asked still not sure if he should take it as a good or bad news,

Peta nehin yaar , usney aisa kyun kiya hoga !

An indication that he knew the reason but still required verification from a third party

Aisa hai ho sakta hai tuney unko job pey janey diya aur unko acha lega , tumney pura sath diya Ho sakta hai ab vo tujhey aek husband ki nezar sey dekhti ho

Buzo explained calmly but still puzzled

Fateh thought to himself

She is taking the step of a wife appreciating my actions

And 2 days back we decided to move on in our marital lives , thats why she did that ? What shall i do now ?

She has initiated and i cant step back now, we promised to try at least , she's done her part and now its my turn

Take her out for dinner?


2pm

Waiting impatiently at the college exit her fingers moving on her file

Nervous

Perhaps he will come with my luggage

Go back to ur maika

Vroom !

oh he brought his bike instead

No luggage seen

Looks like i am going back to my sasural

Phew ! She sighed a relief

She sat behind him on the bike as he moved forward

Her hand slowly touching his shouder as he raced down the sloppy roads of the crop fields

He put his hand on hers suddenly and placed it on his waist

Said loudly

Tejo madam kamar pekedlo, nehin toh gir jao gi!

She was shocked

Inko meri chunmi achi legi kya ?

She smiled later on realising he didnt mind

Dropping her off he went to meet his trainer for association meeting

And then text her for dinner outing

She smiled and decided to ring sneha to thank her

He had no objection , he is taking the step and giving it a try


7pm

Fateh called tejo to explain that dinner plan was cancancelled as he was tied up with some personal work and apologised

She was upset but never mind maybe next time


8pm

All lights in virks mansion went out

Total darkness

A blackout

She ran towards the hallway

No one to be seen

Uncleji auntiji she called out nervously

Tejo tu andherey mein kya ker rehi hai !

Satti's voice heard

Lights on

Sandhus standing rite in front of her

With fateh and kushbeer behind

Teji hugged her family members and cried with joy

Fateh smiled with teary eyes

Her family was everything for her

His first step


Flashback

Fateh consulted kushbeer at the association meeting

And asked for permission if sandhus can join them for dinner

Kushbeer nodded in agreement and assured to speak to other virks

It was a family get to gather dinner for tejo at her sasural

Fateh decided finally realising she will be delighted


10pm

She was washing dishes after dinner , he stood by her side and looked at her longingly pretending to assist her to do the wiping part

The warm sensation of her lips on his cheek

He touched his rite cheek and smiled to himself

Stood closer to her brushing his left shoulder against hers , perhaps would get another one more appreciation token on the left side this time

She didnt respond

He pressed his shoulder harder and moved forward his left cheek a little closer to her to get the SMOOCH

Naah ! She was busy with the dishes

Little did he know that she was feeling relieved that he didnt take it badly after all and was putting an effort to move on

How sweet ! He invited my family for dinner

Little did she realise that now he is battling to get the second chummi from her warm lips

To relieve him perhaps from the stinging sensation of his bruises after all she pushed him into the ring didnt she , so now she has to mend those wounds as much as she could with her sweet chummis so a scar would never be remained,


11pm

Disappointed he rested his head on his fluffy white pillow looking towards her , her eyes closed deep in her slumber,

He sighed to the the memories of the chummi in the morning and went to sleep finally


7am

She was seated next to him in the jeep for her morning work ride,

Phir miltey hain!

She waved and move forward then stopoed suddenly

He was watching her closely still hoping to receive the second chummi

She was coming

Oh god ! He was geting nervous and excited

She was walking towards his left side

He quickly leaned forward ready with his left cheek upfront to be brushed against her warm lips ,

Unfortunately she didnt notice his would want another appreciation reward signal and moved forward to grab her file and eventually walked away


2pm

He picked her up

This time tried with his right side

Still no response


6pm

She was preparing dinner, he offered to assist her

Her slim fingers cutting the vegetables

And he stood beside her

Putting forward his left cheek again to try his luck

Pretending to lean forward searching for a knife

She moved aside to give way to him

Hopes down

He took an apple from the basket placed behind the kitchen table and took a hard bite disappointedly walking towards the hallway to watch tv


9pm

He rang buzzo after dinner to check on the next day's lunch plan with some friends

Buzo asked all ok coz he sounded down

He replied sarcastically

Woh biwi sey phir shadain ben geyi !

Buzo laughed and asked excitedly

Fateh replied

Arey aek hi chummi deke thank u bol diya bas

Kam sey kam do tin to banti hai na

Buzo laughed and replied

Toh phir tu de dey na yaar

Agar vo nehin deti

Fateh was taken aback by buzo's words

Buzo continued

Aur nehin to kya

Vo deti nehin toh phir mangkey lele ya phir de dey

Simple faanda

Fateh was still shocked but agreed finally recalling he has decided to move on 3 days ago

Buzo continued

Pehle mangley indirectly nehin deti na toh phir apney ap dey de

Fateh asked how to do it

Buzo excitedly

Very simple vo gaana ata hai na amitabh bachan ka jumma chumma dey de wala from film hum

Vo play kardey

Indication de dey chummi chahiye

Vo tejo ji bahut samaj dar hai

Samaj legi

Fateh was excited and ran towards the kitchen with his phone

Tejo was clearing the leftover food alone in the kitchen

He asked impatiently

Tejo madam puraney gaaney legau

Apko achey leg tey hain

Tejo nodded, smiled and thought to herself

Things were going on smoothly

Now he wants to play music for me

How sweet

Little did she know what was his actual intention

Tejo madam vo picture hai na hum apney dekhi hai kya

He asked excitement in his eyes

Wish to be fulfilled soon

Tejo nodded smiling innocently

So he played

Jumma chumma dey dey jhumma

With edited version in his heart

Tejo chumma de dey tejo

Repeatedly

She was dancing slowly to the tune while working with the dishes

He was waiting impatiently for her to understamd the lyrics of the song and his intentions to be fulfilled

10 mins passed

Gurpreet walks in and took away the phone

Says its annoying the same song played again and again

He was ushered out of the kitchen


11pm

She was lying on her side of the bed

Chummi mangley ya phir de dey

Buzo's words in his mind

He leaned closer

Her eyes open deep in thoughts about jasmin

SMOOCH!

Warm lips pressed against her left cheek

She turned towards him instantly

Apney sirf right mey di lekin left mey nehin di

Toh meney dey di

He grinned

Laid back

Pretended to fall asleep

She looked at him

Surprised

Chummi exchanged

His acceptance to move forward with her into their marital bond gradually step by step




Ps.

Last week episodes were annoying

I took a break

Decided not to write

Yesterday 23 june epi with 24 precap was wonderful

So thought to pen down

Husband and wife trying to move on to accept their bond so let it start with

The battle of the CHUMMI





























































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Posted: 4 years ago
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The Chummi Battle was surely hilarious.😂😂

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Aww, that was really sweet!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was so good, and hilarious at same time. I liked the way you wrote each part. Keep writing more

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Originally posted by: njain16385

This was so good, and hilarious at same time. I liked the way you wrote each part. Keep writing more


Tq for appreaciting, i read ur os

It was wonderful

U keep writing as well

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