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Posted: 4 years ago
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~ DOORIYAAN ~


PurVir had barely slept the previous night after their conversation at the terrace. They hated today's sunshine, because it dint come alone, but brought along a darkness to their love story. They were going to present themselves in the family court and get divorced. For the 1st time, they dint wish to see each other, fearing how would they tolerate the thought "aj aakhri baar jee bhar ke dekh lun tujhe".


PurVir seemed like zombies - alive but dead from inside !! 💔They somehow gathered their residual courage and made their way to the court.

Pra-jali were on 7th heaven after seeing them so brutally broken. They smirked, their heart wrenched desire was fulfilled. They could see immense vulnerability in their eyes !! They rested in peace.

Meanwhile sakshi, her joy had no limits. She was overwhelmed to assume that she will get back Vir. Little did she know that he no more belonged to sakshi. She had meagre sympathy with Purvi after what she saw in the jungle (PurVir picnic). Kids were told a false story and consoled on the basis of 3 hollow promises, which sakshi knew, she will never let fulfilled. She has grown so insecure for her family, that she was over looking vir's and kids' misery. All she was concerned about was "hume humara pariwar wapas mil jayga"....! As if purvi's departure would press the rewind button - erase purvi's memories and replace them with Sakshi's.


Actions taken to satisfy self centred desires, never reep into willful fruits.


Soon the court proceedings started and the divorce documents were filed. The judge asked for their will the last time. "Kya ap dono is talak ke lie poori trah se tayar hai?"

PurVir dint dare to look at each other. Their heart so heavy, eyes so puffed. They nodded absently, staring at the paper which marked an end to their relationship.

"Ye rishta chahe kisi bhi paristithi me judaa ho, par ise humesha poori imandaari aur pyaar se nibhaya hai humne." Both of them thought.

They dint uttered a word, but their raging thoughts created a ruckus in their minds.

P - "hum nhi jaante ki apse durr jaa kar hum kaise jee payge.. par apki aur pariwar ki salamati ke lie hme ye kurbaani bhi manzur hai" she hushed her sobbing.

V - "mhari zindagi me teri jagah koi naa le pawega bawri... Koi bhi naa!! Bas meri itni iccha hai ki tu jaha bhi jawe khush rawe, salamat rawe." He tried to look strong.


They never noticed that they have started mentioning each other in their prayers. Unknowingly, they have demanded for each other's welfare and prosperity in all states. How else can we define selfless love ?


The ultimatum came, and they were declared divorced. Perhaps, a sentence to death would have been more soothing to their ears than hearing that they are no more in relation with each other. They took different directions after evacuating from court.


Naa manzil ka pata hai

Naa raste ki khabar hai,

Tu milega kis modd par

Is sawal me zindagi ki guzar hai !! 💔


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The following evening was filled with festivity as tomorrow morning was PurPul's supposed marriage. The preparations have begun but they were falling off on PurVir like bare arrows, striking their hearts.


Vir was pacing around in his room, trying his best to stay away from the happenings around him. He felt choked, suffocated in his own house, so uncomfortable that it got unbearable!! He had almost forgot about the gift which Purvi gave him until a servant approached there to take his clothes for laundry.

"Mhare kurte me to bawri ka diya hua tohfa hai. Mai kaise bhool sakta hun uske bare me.." thinking, Vir took away the kurta from him and asked to leave.


He locked the door, nd as calmly as he could, seated himself on the couch. He re-read the letter and commented "Mukhiyain naa, Jasoos hai tu bawri.. yo key paheliya bujha rhi hai tu?" He sounded frustrated. Obviously he was not in the state of playing a treasure hunt, but he had to - For the sake of his love, his family, his bawri. "Mai pehle se janta tha ki tu dabaaw me aa kar yo shaadi kar rhi hai, par tu mhare se sach chupane ke lie itni majbur howegi ye manne ab pata chal rha hai." He knew how serious the matter was, otherwise his brave and courageous lioness wouldn't have given him this jigsaw puzzle to solve. He only had 12 hours in his hand to unravel the truth and save his lover. "Kal teri shaadi jaroor howegi bawri, par us vipul te naa... Balki usse, jisse tu sachha pyaar kre hai - VPS" he smiled a bit on this thought.

He got up confidently - he had figured out what he needs to do. The foremost was to hide about this gift and it's cryptic message from sakshi (who was always behind Vir).

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10 hours to go


(Edit : Vir has one more study room apart from the one in his bedroom)


Vir to sakshi - aj raat mai study me hi rahuga, manne panchayat ka ek bhot jaruri kaam hai.

S - par Mukhi ji, aise raat bhar jagna apki sehat...

V - apni sehat ka khayal rakhna janta hun mai. Zaruri kaam hai manne...!! (He looked away irritably) aur behtar howega manne koi tang naa kare kaam ke bich.

S - thik hai... Par kal Purvi ki shaadi tak to sab kaam khatm kar lege naa ap ?

V - haa (usse pehle to manne apna kaam pura karna hi hai)... Ho jawega. Ib mai jaa rha hun tu so jaa.


Sakshi and everyone else was off to bed. Vir passes by Purvi's room and found her staring out of her window blankly. Only he knew how much strength it took him to avoid the urge of pacifying her. But he had the most important task right now. He would have his whole life with his bawri only if he would accomplish his mission on time. "Tujhe apna banane ka sirf yhi ek rasta bacha hai mhare paas bawri." He left.


Meanwhile Purvi :

"Hey kanha ji, Mukhi ji ko humara message samjh aa gaya ho plijjj 🙏🏻🙏🏻 unki madat karna ki wo samay rehte sach tak pahoch jaye. Aur kal hone wala anarth rok le."

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To be continued.... 😊



(The next part would be of Vir being James bond of Rewari haweli 😝😝😝 )


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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

This is a short one but next one would be a smacker I promise 😊🤗


Tagging more🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Thanks for the tag!!!

Girl you write beautifulllllyyyyy!!!

Can’t wait for the next and maybe next and next and next after that!! Keep writing……ekta should hire you your storyline makes more sense!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

Dekh behen, tere samne to maine pahle hi hath jod diye hain aur kahne ko bhi ab kuch aisa nhi hai jo teri stories ke sath justice kare.


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks for the tag di🤗🤗

Just a fantastic update..... Thats all I can say.... I have no ability to make comment on your Impeccable writing😳😳

It was and will always be a treat to read your writing❤️

Waiting for James bond Vir😎

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Thank you sooo much guys for your encouraging comments 🤗🤗


I would introduce James bond Vir soon 😝😝

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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

Supriya🤗

loved the update..another mast cliff hanger..

I love the VPS/Purvi in your FF..dono kuch kar toh rahe hain..

Next part jaldi aayega??

Edited by nycgal - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

Sups!

What to say !!! This is incredible! 🤗👏smiley31smiley32

Your writing!❤️smiley27smiley27

KUDOS!❤️

Eagerly Waiting for the next part!

Update sooon.

& Thanks for tagging.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

Ohh thankyou weekend saviour 🙏😆

Again a nice update. Love the way you build suspense/ mystery in your stories..keeps us hooked to it👍🏼👏

Soo instead of Purvi as Sherlock Holmes we will get Viru as James bond nicee

I just love PurVir in your stories yrr❤️ kyuki show mei ese milte nhi h naa🤦😭😂

Kudos! Likhte raho💃

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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

Suppa...🤗


Phir se suspense me latka diya tune...😆


Update fast...

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