Originally posted by: sairat07
Heyyyyyy!!!!!
Sooo sorry forgot to comment on previous part!!😒
Both the updates were beautiful
And like u I also enjoyed reading that bindi part... Just imagining them in the situation and praising their chemistry... Also u have penned it the way...Loved it!!!!❤️
Poor Pakhi she planned everything but destiny (I mean u) had different plans🤣
But I liked her spirit... Still she went ahead to give him the gift and played victim card.. Yeh nai sudharne wali
I can imagine SaiRat in that maroon outfits!!! Hayye
And the cute banter and teasing part of LunRat...Supperb!!😳
Gadha-Gadhi; Bandar-Bandariya!🤣🤣🤣
Awesome writing dude👏👏👏
Also liked the comfort level LunRat share...💕
And how could I forget my girl with gold heart! Pure !
That part was sooo lovely...How innocently she prayed for her Virat Sir's well being and happy life with the children...♥️
Oh so ye Afgaani Pulaao is non-existent in the story... Real dish koi aur hi hai😆...but jo bhi ho i'm in love with LunRat!❤
At last our and Didi's day is incomplete without beizzati and same was in this update🤣 She felt insulted... Koi nai baat nahi hai but still we laugh every time she mentions it!!!🤣🤣🤣
Had great time reading this!!!
Hope to get new update soon...PM me then!😃
Happy writing!♥️
When r u updating???😃😃
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