Heyyyyyy!!!!!
Sooo sorry forgot to comment on previous part!!π
Both the updates were beautiful
And like u I also enjoyed reading that bindi part... Just imagining them in the situation and praising their chemistry... Also u have penned it the way...Loved it!!!!β€οΈ
Poor Pakhi she planned everything but destiny (I mean u) had different plansπ€£
But I liked her spirit... Still she went ahead to give him the gift and played victim card.. Yeh nai sudharne wali
I can imagine SaiRat in that maroon outfits!!! Hayye
And the cute banter and teasing part of LunRat...Supperb!!π³
Gadha-Gadhi; Bandar-Bandariya!π€£π€£π€£
Awesome writing dudeπππ
Also liked the comfort level LunRat share...π
And how could I forget my girl with gold heart! Pure !
That part was sooo lovely...How innocently she prayed for her Virat Sir's well being and happy life with the children...β₯οΈ
Oh so ye Afgaani Pulaao is non-existent in the story... Real dish koi aur hi haiπ...but jo bhi ho i'm in love with LunRat!β€
At last our and Didi's day is incomplete without beizzati and same was in this updateπ€£ She felt insulted... Koi nai baat nahi hai but still we laugh every time she mentions it!!!π€£π€£π€£
Had great time reading this!!!
Hope to get new update soon...PM me then!π
Happy writing!β₯οΈ
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